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Thanks for the kind words and encouragement.
Awesome... this sums it up so beautifully... I think i will spend the rest of the weekend thinking of this version than the precap.Thanks Libra... you do have the talent to write. 👏
Thanks for the kind words and encouragement.
Awesome... this sums it up so beautifully... I think i will spend the rest of the weekend thinking of this version than the precap.Thanks Libra... you do have the talent to write. 👏
Thank you. Got lots of encouragement from deepa. I wouldolive to try and cont. but I thought this post was in answer to Thursday's precap. I wonder if it would be ok with the author of this post if we carry this story forward.Turags - awesome idea and love the story.
Libra - That was brillinat how you pitched in and carried it forward.Love both versions. would love to read more.👏
Thank you. Got lots of encouragement from deepa. I wouldolive to try and cont. but I thought this post was in answer to Thursday's precap. I wonder if it would be ok with the author of this post if we carry this story forward.
I would need a little help from everyone. If people could tell me in which direction they would want the story to go, basically suggest some tracks, it would be very helpful.I am not sure how much I can do. This is my first time writing. I've never done this before. But I can try.
Anjie walks into the kitchen and says "Wah jeejaji..i think I am going to have my dinner here tonight..i HAVE to taste your cooking" Ashu smiles a little and says "if saaliji wishes that how can a jeeja say no." And seeing that Anjie actually wants to talk to Nidhi alone, he moves away. NIdhi immediately looks at her and asks with her eyes "what?"…ANjie says "yaar..i need your help with this village girl dressing up..my fashion designing course doesn't provide me with these kind of outfits." Nidhi says dressing up is the easiest part but she should take care with her attitude and language and not slip up anywhere. Both of them exchange some fun gossip n try out a few dialogues and Anjie gets ready to leave. Ashu stops her and reminds her to have dinner with them. Anjie says "not now jeejaji..you get well completely and make a full fledged dinner and I'll come." Ashu laughs at that.
Night time…Nidhi left for her night duty and everyone is down for the night. Ashu checks in on Mallika but she seems to be sleeping peacefully. He comes back to his room but unlike the previous night, both are happy with their memories and thoughts.
Nidhi comes home in the morning. Ashu is in his room sitting up trying to get ready by himself. Nidhi walks in and sees him and gets a mischievous smile on her face. She walk up behind him and closes his eyes. He gets a delightful smile on his face and says "who is this?" Nidhi – "Guess"..Ashu – "a beautiful young wife who has come to meet her budda husband"..Nidhi laughs at that and hugs him from behind. Just then Mallika starts her screeming "Ashutosh where did you go?".. Nidhi backs away from him and makes a move to get his wheel chair. Ashu is lost in his thoughts thinking, "Mallika starts getting disturbed only when Nidhi is with me..she was fine for 2 nights and now Nidhi walks in and she is getting agitated." He moves into the wheel chair with Nidhi's help but still seems distracted.
Comments welcome..
Libra, i am leaving it open as to whether Mallika is faking it or not..
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