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Posted: 11 June 2012 at 4:38am | IP Logged

thnku ppl muwaah to all 4 lyking nd cumnting

yeah actually my school started nw soo n m in 11th new school nd ol tht crap
so ill uptade a bit late thts weekly 1 or 2 updates
pls m rily sryy guys

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hey sorry did not comment as i did not have time to read...m college just reopened... but today read the parts and they r awesome...plz continue and an awesome promo...and ya plz try sending me a pm once u update if u can...plz...plz...

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged

hello guys sory for the late update
my school strarted sooo was daaam busy so n on it wud be short updates


chapter 2

{yuvreen nd dia in a car they are heading towards the mall as usual yuvraaj is stealing glances of suvreen}

" yuvlaaj tum shuvleen ko aiche kyu dekh lahe ho"  said dia luking vry proud as if  she has askd a major question


yuvi-  mujhe koyi shok nahi or mein ise dekhu paagal ho tum ( said yuvi quite embarezed)
suvi- kyu kya problem hein mujhme???  tum ne khud ki shakal dekhi hein bada ayya...
uv-  ohh topper toh tu chahti hein ki mein tujhe dekhu????ha???
suvi- woh woh mera matlab voh toh nahi tah
uv- haa bol bol phir tera matlab kya tha????
" maalll"  shouted dia
yuvraaj as he was already dis embarezed parks the  car nd goes inside widout waiting for the ladies
dia- gengelman noo no yuvlaaj is
suvi- ( laughing)  gentelman or yuvraaj mein marjaava tum chalo bohut bolthi ho!!
( they start their shopping as suvreen and yuvraaj wer busy our little brat  dia went out tuk a basket and went to shop for herself in the CHOCLATE  SHOP)

 wen the tym for billing came
" gud evening sir ur bill is 5064 rs only, thnku for shoping see u soon"
uv- ohh behes ki puuch 2 shaving cream or ek toothbrush ko 5064???topper khud ka bill khud bhar
suvi- kya mera bill meine toh bas ek packet pickel or cup noodls bread or cake liya hein or ha ek sunscreen or facewash mera bill 500 sei n niche hein yeh tumhara hein ok!!
"but sir yeh saare choclates???" said the counter official pointing towards dia
uv- toh yeh baath hein tum ladikiyaa na bachpan mein choclate or barbie mein paise kharch karthe ho phir bade hokar makeup or dress mein hamesha kharcha hi kharcha
( said uv taking away all the chocolates from dia )
" mummmy mummmy chocizzz" dia started shouting and crying  so suvreen brought a lollypop and gave it to her uv also felt rily bad seeing her cry
uv- roh math kha le pir ham tere liye dress lethe hein theeke
dia- pink walla
uv- ha
dia- balbie walla
uv- hmm
dia- sparkel walla
uv- ha meri maaa ( he said and piked up dia and dragged suvi to the cloth store so tht dia wont pester him more)
an onlooker said to her husband " kitni pyaari family hein naa woh kitna khayal rakhta hein apni bache or biwi ka dekho kaise haath pakda hein bhagwaan inhe hamesha saath rakhe"
( yuvi and suvi at the baby cloth section  with dia)
suvi- yeh waali achi hein na
yuvi- yeh tum khud ki bachi ko pehna lena iskeliye toh yeh waali hi pyaari  hein
" nooo i want athel one"
suvi- wij 1 baby??
dia- woh walla fairy ka
suvi - acha toh chalo changing room mein
( suvi made dia wear tht she indeed was luking lyk a fairy )
suvi- yuvrraj zara dekho toh
uv- waah pyyari lag rahi hein
( at this tym yuvi went inside the changing rum to have a luk properly at that tym dia made a rush to the door and  and loked it )
suvi- dia diaa tum yeh kya kar rahi ho??
uv- kar kya raahi hein tu tum ladkiya naa kholo yaar
(uv wass about to bang the door but wen he move forwad he tripped his legs on dias shoes and falls 2wards suvi)
suvi closes her eyes in shock yuvi for his support grabs suvi by waist  their arms wer entangeled slowly suvi opened her eyes and saw yuvis face inches apart from her
 they wer just staring at each other admiring each other their eyes and silence speaking volumes both wer feeling different very different and moreover happy  it was a gud feeilng as if now the are complete


" ahem ahem "

" ahem ahem"

" ahem ahem"


" yeh changing rum hein tumhara bedrum nahi samjhe abb jao yaha sein batha nahi log aha kaha sein aa jatthe hien"   said a a lady rudely pushing them outside and  went inside the trial rum

 

suvi and yuvraaj was feeling  quite confused  and embaresed

" mummmy paaapa"  shouted dia and came running to theem and hugged them

suvi &  yuvi  2gether" kyaaa???"

suvi lifted her up "tum yeh kya keh rahi ho??" she asked but dia did not say anything she kept her thumb in her mouth annd slowly closed her eyes  and dosed off peacefully

yuvi"- ohh isse neend aa rahi thi voh mein chal chale???
suvi nodded and they drove out for annies house

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precap: yuvreen in the terrace alone tht tooo on a beautifull nyt!!!


thnku 4 cummnting and lyking ppl  thnku thnku thnku vry muj and as per u ppls suugestion the titel for this ss is "you are my destiney"

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
The update was soo lovely.Big smile.haha Yuvi Suvi n Dia..lol people thought they were a familyLOL..and that last scene in the trial room...awww YuvReenDay Dreaming...waiting for the next  part..thnx for pm..
and it's ok...we understand that your school has started..so there will be late updates...hope you have a great time in your new school! Smile

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Awww...amazing part...loved it!!
YuvReen with a child...sooo cute!!
Continue soon!!!

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
reallly yawr todays chapter was awwwsom...tooo nice love diyaaaHeart...dear u write so well and fabulous...Clap...do continue sooon...

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Posted: 13 June 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
oh God...it was so cute...Yuvreen eyelockDay Dreaming...I m in love with Dia!!!
can't wait for the next part...

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Posted: 14 June 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
wow nice update...plz continue...and ya thanx for the pm...Smile

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