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Thnku ppl 4 ol ur valuable cumnt!
I'll post d nxt update 2day!
@annamika yeah evn i wos 1'st thnking abt tht! Bt nw i haf got a new 1 i'll update tht title soon plz say if u lyk it!
Sure sure yuvreen will happen woh bhi ZYADA:)

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yayyy waiting for the update :DDD

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hey hi!!! its an awesome post!!! plz continue!!!!...and ya about the title i thought u could keep "TRIP MEIN YUVREEN KA TRICK" m not sure if it is good but just tat tis title struck my head!!!...dont mind if its not good..!!!!

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pllzzz continue i love ur os and ss...u write so wellClap

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Thnku!!evry 1!
@mani_shetty wow tht is an osum title,lemme see! Thnx!
@dia thnx dear its my pleasure u luved it
@isnat thnx buddy u immensly support me nd yeah i'll update by thz evening!
Thnku evry1 ur cumments nd lyks mean a lot to me!

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chapter 1  (the day b4 the collage trip)


(suvreen naro and annie wos in  thr rum)

" hey guys y dnt u ppl cum to my house thn we can do some extra shopping, and  yeah u guys pak nw nd come soon i'll arrangefor a slumber party wooah khul"said annie excitedly
naro- woow tum anish ke allawa bhi kuch sochti ho gud work!!
annie- ohh shut up!!
( sudnly suvis phone starts ringing)
suvi goes out of the room and rather excitedly said "hey hallo"
the person on the othr line side " waaah topper tum badi khush sound kar rahi ho"
suvi- manu tum, kya chahiye she said vry unexcitedly
manu- tum kisko xpct kar rahi thi itna jaldi tumhara excitement level down????
suvi- kisiko toh bhi nahi mein kisko...kya kam tha???
manu- voh bhai ne tumhe unhe sms karne ki liye bola ki agle 30 min mein naro kaha jayegi???
suvi-theeke bye voh annie bahr arrahi hein
(she disconnects the phone meanwhile yuvi and hes frns in hes room)

yuvi- abbey gadhe..
manu-abb meine kya kiya bhai????
yuvi- usko topper math bulayio samja (saying this he leave hes room wid hes cell)
manu and rathi exchanged confused luks
there suvreen and naro wer tryning to get a rikshaw so they can go to annies house fortunatly they got 1 they heired it  left for her house
but wen they reached her house they saw annie sulking in the balcony and she had sumthing wid her all pink and frilly
wen they went near to their surprise they saw  a small baby girl with her
suvi- yeah kaun hein???
annie- meri cusin ki beti voh kal ayegi tab tak shes wid us and mein shopping nahi aa pavungi  cus my dad send some ppl for renovating hes office inside my house complaind a irritated  annie
suvi sat on her knees and luked at the baby she was soo cute she was sleeping  sucking her thumb but wen suvreen touched her she  stired and got up giving a complaing luk to annie
then she smiled
annie- wow baby is happy see how many didi's are herre to play wid my princess
suvi-wots ur name sweety
baby- iiiyaaa
annie- ohh ppl she means dia
naro- dia wow cute name for cut baby
baby- youal name??
naro- hey dia i am naro
baby- nallo  thn youal??(she said pointing to suvreen)
suvi- suvreen my name is suvreen
baby- shuvleeen heeeyye meee ( she started giggling)
after playing wid the baby a little more the trio wid the baby went inside the house annie served them icecreams suvi and dia soon became gud frns and dia wos now not ready to leave suvi
she was sittin on  suvis lap and was playing wid her ice cream suddenly some1 rings the bell  and baby sudenly drops her bowls and starts crying
suvi gives the baby to annie and heads 2wards the door she opens the door and  is shocked ther b4 her eyes was yuvi and his frnds standing thr wid a stupid grin on their face
yuvi- hey topper andar nahi bulayegi?????
annie and dia cums from behin
annie pointed a finger at yuvi and said- uv tum???
dia too seeing her aunt pointed a finger and in her baby voice said 
" uli um???
all of them burst laughing seeing her antics
rathi- yaar tere saath aj thoda tympas kar le soch liya was getting dam bored in the hostel or thodi si kaam bhi tha yaha aas paas
annie - oh sure andar toh aajavo!!
nw the baby was sitting on suvis lap yuvi  goes to her sit on his knees and extends a hand towards the baby " hello dia"
the baby smacked his handes away and shouted" stlagel anjaabi"
annie - (slightly smiling ) no not stranger or ajnaabi hes my frnd
dia- flnd (thn she hugs yuvi giving him a thumsup indicating that they wer frns)
yuvi lukd upto suvi and whispered" we need to tok...alone"
(then they all seteled down and started chit chatting as dia was rily shouting and didturbing thm so naro gave her some crayons it was the 1st tym she was seein crayons
as she did not kno wot to do she was about to eat them)
naro- no baby dnt eat it
diya- kyu nalo?
naro- its bad
(but tht wont stop our little brat wenevr she sees that kno1 is noticing her she trys to them thn suvi said to prevent her from eating it)
suvi- tht blue crayon is yuk dnt taste gud  dnt eat chi
dia toh yeh khalu???
said dia showing a pink crayon
evry1 strted laughing

 

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rest update ill update ryt nw scroll down

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kaha hai continuation???

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