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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 1:43am | IP Logged
so i know tum log yahi soch rahe honge ki ye ab kya bakwaas likhne wali hai...par dnt think lyk dat kyun ki i wont write lyk dat again...coz wo likhna kitna mushkil tha wo sirf mai jaanti hun...i hope u all understand...mai bhi kriyaansh ki fan hu...so im also sad par kya karun...dimaag mei aaya so likhdiya...i hope aap sab mujhse na hai...aur ek aur baat...yes ye ek aur naya ss hai...haa ...

shaffy meri naughty cat ...this one is specially 4r u...i thought mai tumhe wish karo uss thread pe jo terrliye banaya gaya hai...par dnt know y cmnt karne ka man nahi kiya,...aur maine socha ki baatcutter ki update tujhe dedicate karun...par wo bhi utna acha nahi laga...so kal raat se mai soch ke ek nayi kahani likh rahi hun...hope u lyk...


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Reyaansh singhania:

a very bold man...very practical...not at all a romantic person( hehe...im lykROFL...mere ss mei rey romantic nahi hai...bhagwaan uthale mujhe...shaffy dekh tereliye maine apni romantic king ko non romantic banarahi hun...)

believes in very less relations...(not gf's and all relations..)

he only lyks to be with his parents ...two frnds...and his one and only lovable sis...hates kriya 4r some reasons...

Kriya reyaansh singhania:


wife of reyaansh singhania...loves him a lot...but never can get his love...4r her he was THE PERFECT MAN...but some of her insecurities make her keep herself away from him...


simmi:


sweet.cute girl,...loves her bro a lot and his wife equally...she was one of the main reason 4r the marriage of kriyaansh...dating nilesh...fun loving girl...life of her brother...

nilesh:
best frnd of rey...dating simmi...she means everything to him...looks careless and irresponsible but in actual he is totally opposite...

vikramjeet singh:

rey's best chuddy buddy...bussiness partneres...not married yet..waiting 4r his dream girl...likes kriya a lot...treats as his own sis..very funny and jovial character but serious at tyms needed...

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guys it would be a typical lyf story...hehe shaffy tu mujhe apni filmy queen bulati haina toh ye le tereliye meri poori filmy kalakari use karke likh rahi hun...enjoy naughty cat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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it was a one fine morning when her slowly entered her room...he smiled  on seeing her innocent face...sleeping peacefully b/w the two big teddys...one beside her and other being crushed by her...he smiled at how childish she is even now...he slowly moved forward and kissed her forehead...he called while stroking her hair...

"simmi, dear uth jao na..."he said 

"nahi bhai...mujhe sone do na..."she pouted...

"arey utho na dekho 7 baj gaye..aur tumhare ye bhai 8 bhaje office chala jayega...apne bhai ke saath thoda tym spend nahi karogi??"he asked still stroking her hair as she made herself comfortable in his lap...

she slowly looked up at him slowly ...rubbed her eyes cutely and opened her arms...he shaked his head  got up took her on his back and went into the washroom and washed her face and came out

"simmi , mai neeche jaaraha hun jaldi aaja..."he said and left...

simi freshened up and came down...they sat 4r breafast when his mom started her usual talks...

"beta ye ..."

"mom mujh kisiki photo nahi dekhna hai..."he said stubbornly...

"arey dekho toh sahi itni mushkil se select kiya hai...ye log hamare status ki hai...aur"but sam(simmi) snatched them...

"mom ladki ki status nahi ye dekho ki wo bhai ke saath best match banegi ya nahi...chalo let me do it..."sam said and started seeing the pics by keeping them beside reys face when he gave weird looks in b/w...

"hmm...theek hai...ye ...kk...ye ...eww!!!! yuck...ye ...better...chi!!!!!!! ye ...wow!!!!!!! awesome...!!!!!!bhai she is fixed...yahi meri bhabi hai fix"sam declared...
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"sam tu bhi...mujhe koi shaadi vaadi nahi karni..."rey said...

"bhai plzzz..."sam strtd begging and finally in 15 mins she was successful...the marriage arrangements strtd..finally the marriage completed...

lemme explain a bit abt kriya:
she is 4rm a middle class family...she had her problems...she never fell in love and all ...typical girl  types...when she knew that she was getting married to rey...4rm that day she strtd loving him crazily ...she  made him as her world...typical wife types...pati parameshwar ...

she was sitting there on the bed waiting 4r him to come...she was afraid...she shivered at thought of his touch...but mentally prepared herself to surrender herself completely to him...

finally she heard him enter... she stiffened...she waited for him to come near her...but to her surprise he stood near the bed and spoke

"dekho ye shaadi sirf mom ,aur sam ki force aur unki khushi keliye hua...so dnt expect  pyaar vyaar lyk stuff 4rm me...kk...and haa agar tumhe acha nahi laga toh dont worry jitni jaldi hosake  utne jaldi tumhe divorse dedunga...aur agar tum yahi pe rehna chahti ho toh bhi koi problem nahi ...bas  ek ghar mei do log rent keliye jaise rehte hai waise hi iss room mei hum rahenge...so rest ur decision..."he said 

she was smashed into pieces...but she didnt cry...fate always played the same game with her..she sighed removed her ghoonghat and looked at him...he took a pillow and was heading towards the couch...she spoke up...
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"suniye...aap yahi pe sojayye ga...mai wahan so jaungi...waise bhi mujhe in sab ki aadat nahi hai...so mai neeche hi theek hun...aap yahi pe sojayiye..."by saying dis she  took a blanket spread it on the ground and slept silently...he was somewat shocked...he expected a grying face and a emotional dialouges...and etc etc...but here she was lying quitely...dude iske baare mei kuch jyaada hi soch raha hai ab soja...

he slept...he just wanna avoid her so he took this chance as one of them...next day he went to office...daily he used to order somelunch ...but that day he was abt to order when he heard a knock on the door ... one of his cook was there with a lunch box...he served food and went out...rey had a hearty lunch and then the cook took the carriage back...he used to get back...she used to keep everything ri8 at his hand...no need to ask anything...she never looked at him nor spoke...yeah she spoke somedays but its when she needed money or something else...they never ever talked casually...the whole family members know abt the distance b/w them coz rey had already cleared the that he wont love her...they thought she would change him someday...( ha ye toh obviously hoga...)

vicky and kriya's relation became strong...kriya always wanted a brother who makes her feel protective and she found him in vicky...vicky as he recently lost his parents and he was the only son he accepted kriya as his sis...it was the only time the family members could see a wide ear to ear smile plastered on kriya's face when vicky came...

days ,months passed on...7 mnths passed ...rey had made the documents...(divorce papers) after 1 mnth of their marriage and gave it to her telling if she wanted she can  sigh it or else just tear it and both doesnt matter him at all...

after 7 mnths one day rey took her to a office party ...only couples allowed...so vicky was out...they attended...kriya as usual she wore a salwar...
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they reached the party...she saw every one in short dresses and all she is  very new to these parties...she felt embrassed...she felt  he will be embrassed coz of her...while coming back her struggle b/w heart and mind strtd...

two days later vicky came to rey's house as rey called him to talk abt something impotant...so vicky came he didnt find rey so he went to his room also hoping to meet kriya there...he thought of surprising her coz this tym he didnt inform her abt his cmng...he slowly opened the door and went in ...but what he saw sanked his heart...the one he felt soo close to his heart was in full of tears...he saw her eyes...they were red...bulged telling she was crying to the worst...he slowly lowered his gaze ...he found her hand trembling...he  felt a pain in his heart...but wait what was it ...she has a pen in it ...she was abt to sign on something...he slowly went and saw ...he was shocked it was divorce papers...in next second pen was in his hand and the papers were flewing on the floor...kriya was shocked she looked at him with a guitly face...rey came home...servant told vicky went up so he went to his room but stopped at the room seeing the tension of the room...

"what the hell are u dng kriya??"he asked slowly fully trying his anger...she looked down...

"now answer me dammit "his voice raised a  bit...he never spoke to her lyk dat ...she burst out and fell in his arms hugging him tight...vicky was silent .he just consoled her...finally when she was somewat better he asked...

"kya hua kriya???? ye kya karne jaa rahi thi...wo gadha  kuch bhi karta hai...use toh akal nahi hai par tumhari kaha gayi????divorce papers pe sign karne jaa rahi thi?? aisa kya hogaya???rey ne kuch kaha??" vicky asked...

an instant reply came"nahi bhai...bilkul nahi...wo mujhe kyun dantenge..."she said...

"par itne dinon ke baad achanak ye bewakoofi kyun???"he asked concerned...

"bhai ...bewakoofi ab nahi kar rahi hun...mai ab tak bewakoof thi...ye soch rahi thi ki ek na ek din wo mujhse pyaar karenge...mujhe apnayenge par ye toh bhool hi gayi ki mai unki layak hi nahi hun..."kriya said still hugging him and crying...

"kya??? kisne kaha tum uske layak nahi ho??? aur ye soch tumhari dimaag mei kab se aayi??"vicky asked...

"bhai rey ...wo ...wo kaha aur mai kaha???? wo har ek kaam mei best hai...par mei ???? mai kya hun bhai??? bas ek normal si middle class ladki ( guys u may think wat a lame reason but it was really true...jo bhi ladke padh rahe hai...i know kam hi honge phir bhi ...just padlena coz ye ladkiyon ki sabse badi insecurity hoti hai...) mai unkeliye sahi nahi hun bhai...agar mere saath iss rishte mei band ke na hote toh woh abhi tak apni pasand ki ladki  se shaadi karchuke honge par mai hi sabki beech mei hun...bas bhai aur din mai unpe bhooj nahi ban sakti...aur mujhe pata hai mai unpe bhooj se jyaada kuch nahi"she broke down...

vicky hugged her more tight...

"kriya paagal ho kya??? rey hai hi aisa wo kisise itni jaldi connect nahi hota ...aur ye middle class ,status ki baat kha se aagayi??? teri jaankari keliye kehdoon ...uncle aunty ko sab pata hai aur uske baad hi unhone khud rishta pakki ki...kriya status nahi insaan maine rakhta hai... aur haan jahan tak rey ki baat hai...wo itni jaldi kisiko apnayega nahi...tum bas use pyaar karte hi rehna ...ek na ek din tumhare pyaar ko samjhega...and haa promise me aisi bewakoofi kabhi nahi karogi..."vicky said...

"sorry bhai mai aapko promise nahi karoongi ...par haa ye bata sakti hun ki ek mahine tak kuch nahi karoongi...and haan jahan tak rey ko pyaar karne ki baat ...pyaar toh hamesha karti rahungi par kabhi unhe meri pyaar ki ehsaas nahi hone doongi...kyun ki mai unkeliye sahi nahi hun bhai...aap maane ya na maane yahi  sach hai...waise bhai aap rukhiye mai aapkeliye nimboo pani laati hun..."she said avoiding the talk and moving away...rey hid himself...she went off...rey stood there thinking and turned slowly to find vicky seeing at him...

"toh tune sab sun liya???"vicky asked casually...rey nodded yes...

"dekh rey mai tumhe kuch nahi kahoonga kyun ki mujhe pata hai logon ko apnane keliye tumhe bohut jyaada tym lagta hai...par rey ek baad yaad rakho...jo log hume apne aap se jyaada pyaaar karte haina unhe khona nahi chaiye...kyun ki waisa pyaar sabko nahi milta...bas  i wish ki jab tak tuhje realise hogaye tab tak bohut late na hojaye...agar aisa hua na rey...( showing his index finger) bohut pachtayega..."vicky said and left ...he spoke to kriya once again for a few secs and went away...( imp meeting gayi bhaad meiLOL)

rey stto there confused and thinking...but it was his nature he didnt get the correct response 4rm himself...he again kept the thought aside...later he found a diffference in kriya first she sometimes tried to come close to him but now it NO!!!!!!!

days passed one day all were at dinig table waiting 4r sam...sam entered and without looking at them she said she is not hungry and went up...rey followed her he asked her abt what happened y is she low ...she said she had an head ache...he begged her 4r 1/2  hr but she refused to have dinner...finally he gave up...

he went down and declared...

"mom mereliye khana mat lagayiye ga sam khana nahi kharahi hai ...mujhe bhi khane ka man nahi...: rey said ...he was gng when he heard her speak...

"maa kya mai sam se baat karoon???"kriya asked...

"beta wo rey se hi nahi maani toh..."his mom said...

"par maa try karne mei kya problem hai waise bhi hum ladkiyan ladkiyon se hi apni feelings ache se share kar paate ..."kriya spoke...rey was fuming ...another point added in the list of "reasons to hate kriya"

his mom agreed...

"maa aap papa aur unhe bulane keliye kehdijiyega mai sam ko leke aati hun..."kriya said and left...he quickly went and hid himself ...
mai bhi dekhun meri  pari ko kaise manaogi???


kriya entered the room soon sam wiped her tears and smiled at her...

"tumhe nahi lagta ki mujhe pata hai ki tum ro rahi ho????"kriya asked sweetly...

"nahi bhabhi aisi koi baat nahi...wo actually"sam was cut

"nilesh "kriya said with a smirk...

sam froze at the name...tears rolled down..."aap ko kaise pata??" sam asked...

"arey ladki hun itna toh jaanti hun ladkiya kiskeliye kitna aur kaise roti hai..."kriya said...

sam smiled slightly ...

"toh baat kya hai??? jhagda hua????"kriya asked ...

"haan "sam replied looking down...

"par kyun???" kriya asked...

"bhabhi abhi nil ke paas mereliye tym hi nahi hai ...hamesha kaam hi kaam ...kabhi kabhi dar lagta hai ki agar shaadi ke baad uska pyaar mereliye kam hogaya toh???"sam let it out...

"pehle idhar aao"kriya said opening her arms wide...sam sprang into them and cried her heart out...

"jhalli kahi ki...tumhe pata hai ...ye sab meri wajah se...kyun ki maine hi nil se poocha agar hum apni ladki ko tumhare haaton mei denge aur kal galti se tum donon ko akela rehna padega toh wo tumhara khyaal kaise karega...isiliye apne aapko prove karne mei laga hua hai...sab tereliye kar raha hai aur tu uskeliye uspe gussa kar rahi hai??? aur jahan tak shaadi ke baad pyaar ki baat karahi ho toh ek baat batao...tum sache dil se nil ko pyaar karti hona???"kriya asked ...

sam  sat straight and nodded her head...

"toh bas pyaar karo ...jyaada pyaaar karo...jyaada se jyaada pyaar karo, bohut jyaada pyaar karo...itna pyaar karo ki use tere pyaar ki aadat padjaye...aur jab bhi kuch hogana toh apne aapko tumhare pyaar se door  rakh nahi paayega aur tumse jyaada pyaar karne keliye majboor hogaga..."kriya said...

sam thought of it...yes kriya was ri8 but sam shot a qsn...

"bhabhi aap toh bhai ko khud se jyaada pyaar karti hona??? toh phir bhai aapse pyaar kyun nahi karte hai????"sam asked innocently( really innocent ...she loves her bhabhi a lot)

kriya was taken back by the qsn...rey too was shocked...

"pyaar????? hmm...ye ek aisi cheez hai jo maine yaha aane se pehle tak experience nahi kiya..."kriya said lost in her own world...

"mai kuch samjhi nahi bhabhi"sam said...

"hmmmSmile...sam hum middle class log hai aur hamare ghar mei maa papa keliye unka beta beta tha aur beti bhoj thi...so mujhe kabhi pata bhi nahi tha ki pyaar hota kya hai...par jab yaha aayi toh tum ,maa , papa, vicky bhaiyya ...aap sabki pyaar paana meriliye kya hai mai bata nahi sakti...aur ye sab pyaar sirf rey ki wajah se mujhe mila hai...shayad isiliye mai unse bohut pyaar karne lagi...jaan bhi chalejaye tab bhi pyaar karti rahoongi...kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki tum sab jo pyaar dete hona wo mereliye overdose na hojaye..."kriya said giggling ...but the two were serious...rey for the first tym felt her pain...he was just listnenig seriously...

sam was looking ...she felt very bad 4r her bhabhi...kriya cupped her face...

"sam ab jyaada mat socho...wo bhi mere baare mei/...wo kya haina actually ye jo pyaar haina woh mereliye  hai hi nahi...par meri sam keliye toh bohut hai...aur haa jahan tak nil ki baat hai ...bas kuch din dekho...jab wo job mei adjust hojayega na tab tumhe tumari tym dedega...i know he loves u a lot..."kriya said...

sam hugged her tight..."bhabhi aap bohut ache ho"

"woh toh mai hun hi"kriya winked at sam after braking the hug...

"ab jaldi chalo sab wait kar rahe hai"

rey slowly went down and sat...her words were repeating again in his mind...soon sam and kriya came ...sam sat ...kriya served food to everyone...sam again said mujhe nahi kaana...

he crossed her hands at her chest and turned aside...

"acha toh ab mere saath nautanki???"kriya asked...

"chalo khalo"kriya said...

"mujhe nahi khana"sam repeated...

"ach toh agar mai khilaun toh???"kriya asked...

sam turned quickly..."haan,...jaldi bhabhi bhook lagi hai"

kriya smiled and fed her...rey was surprised...she looked after sam as a kid...yeah i too wanted that way...ki woh sam ko itna hi care kare...

all completed their dinner ...all the while kriya was busy in serving and feeding sam...rey was busy looking at her...

finally they moved to their rooms...rey said he had some work and went to drawing room...he was the last to leave...

"bahu ji aap ab toh khalijiye ...dophair ko bhi kam khaya aur jyaad kaam kiya..."one of the cook said...

"ji kaka"kriya sat 4r eating...rey on listening to the cook stood there looking at her...he was upstairs...he felt he had to know much bt her...

the cook served food and went away...she was sitting there lonely and eating...she seemed lost...he was continuously looking at her face...she started eating ...as she ate her first two spoons tears rolled down her cheek ...he wondered what happened...the rate of eating speed reduced slowly...she was crying hard that to silently...after eating 4-5 spoons she stopped...she just washed her hand in the plate and went away...

isne khana kyun nahi khaya??? itna kaam karti hai toh bhook nahi lagti kya??? 

soon he found her rushing towards the terrace...he too followed her ...he stopped at the door...she went in and closed her mouth with her hand and cried loudly ...( kisiko sunai nahi dega...imagine karlo)   he looked at her ...just looking at her...she was really different girls he met...she collapsed against a wall crying...she cuddled herself...her hands tightly around her knees...head leaned back...

"kyun universe ji kya mai itni buri hun??? mai hamesha se jisse sabse jyaada pyaar chahti hu woh mujhe bilkul pyaar nahi karte??? 
kya kisiko meri pyaas ka ehsaas nahi hota??? theek hai ...shukriya kam se kam kuch log toh pyaar karte hai mujhe...

kriya became silent...rey turned to go when he heard her...

universe ji kya sach mei pyaar mereliye nahi hai?????

she broke down...for the first time rey felt his heart crying...unknowingly an tear flowed down his cheek ...he just turned and stood ther looking at her...as each drop rolled down her cheek another one followed down his cheek...

finally after sometym she became calm...wiped her tears...

"jhalli jaldi jaa...wo abhi sone keliye aayenge...already thak gaye honge kaam karke...ab aur tumhe dhoonke thakna hai kya??? waise kya woh mereliye zindagi mai kabhi bhi dhoondenge???? kabhi  mujhe pyaar se bulayenge kya????? arghh!!!!!! jhalli phaltu ki batein chod aur ab jaa jaldi...rey  ran down and hid...she entered their room ...he peeped into the room...she saw him throwing some of the dresses out of the wardrobe ...he was confused...he made himself straight and went in...

"tum kar kya rahi ho???"he asked...she turned in a startle...

"ji woh...woh ...tode kapne fold karna baaki hai aap sojayiye..."she said...

he was confused ...he silenty went changed ..and layed n the bed eyes closed...after 5 mins he felt her near him ...he turne to his left just to look into the mirror which was that side...he opened his eyes a bit...

he saw her standing behind him and tears rolled down her cheek...suddenly he felt cold wind...he just forgot to get the blaket over him...but now  he didnt want her to know that he was awake ...dnt know y...he always stays in ac but this small breeze was making him shiver...he saw her becoming alert and she covered the blanket over him ...and she stood there 4r 1 hr...he wondered y she was not moving...then finally he thought he would sleep but just then something unexpected happened ...she  stroked his hair gently with lot of care and affection...and gave a peck on his forehead and went and slept ...he was shocked by her move but more shocked coz he felt the sensation daily which he just felt when she stroked his hair and kissed him...




this was the first sleepless night for REYAANSH SINGHANIA


Edited by deetha - 07 June 2012 at 2:44pm

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 10:33am | IP Logged

Awesome CS n starting...


Deetha...u r really a rockstar!!!


I kno its really hard to write such tragedic endings...u brought it out brilliantily deir.


N Im happy dat u started wid a new one..


U rock...


Love u tons..


Umah...<3<3


Keep Rocking..


Fantabulous updt.

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
nice concept

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 10:51am | IP Logged
loved the concept...wairting to see an unromantic rey and a lovable kria...continue soon...

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