Originally posted by: Luv_KriyaanshGr8 awwsome story luved d way its writtenπ...'i love you kria ghai' just luved dat...the way u sarted nd ended both were awwsome the way u mentioned feelings i felt lyk i was feeling d connection d chemistry nd y do u keep on saying 'juttas,chappals nd criticism' r we dat bad?π i think we all shud throw praises π fr dis wonderful strry...Thnxx fr d PM nd do PM me wen u update d nxt Part...
KEEP IT UP CONTINUE D STORY SOON EAGERLY WAITING...Rishitaπ
Originally posted by: damonelenaIf i could, i would click the like button like a million times... π
from when i read ur comments on my FF, i knew you were an amazing writer. When i saw your name in my Inbox, i was ecstatic. And i'm really glad i got to read ur OS. I'm really in love with it! πKria driving with a stranger without knowing him but falling in love with him. And the guy falling in love with her...It's just soo beautiful.. and them meeting again...and kria going to the party with rey even though she hates those kinda parties. π³..And the last part where they confess, ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!! ππΌGirl, ur a genius!! βοΈ βοΈIf you can, pleaseee continue this as an SS or FF. SS atleast, pleeeasseee??? π
Originally posted by: yogini64Wow . . . Dat was an amazing piece of writing π
the 1st meeting of 2 strangers made it to- Love @1st sight π
the attitude of kriya & the genuine nature of rey affected each other dat they spend sleepless nytes thinking abt each other π
& destiny brought them together once again . . . π₯³
& now they both knw each other well enough,,, to confess their love . . . . . π€
just loved it . . . If u continue it,, then plz pm me . . . . π
Originally posted by: aromakriyaanshwowww i love this girl keep it up
ise ss bna do nacon. pleasemegicalkya baat kya baat kya baat
Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansha spendid piece...loved kria and rey's first meet-kria made rey her driver/...their pov's after that meet were awesome...loved their 2nd meeting in kria's office...the way they became friends...the stammering rey ...but the best part was the sea-shore one...nothing filmy,nothing emotional...simple,beautiful and blissful...hats off for pulling it off so well...
Originally posted by: yogini64Kriyaansh can never pakaofy us . . . . . . They are our sweethearts π€
Rishi, this one's for you... hope you all like it... and thanks to all I read all the comments and loved them all...
Character Sketch:
Palak Ghai:
Married to Sumit and Kria's mom, she is not a strict mother. She has given all the freedom to her only daughter; loves her a lot. For her life means her husband and her daughter; and their happiness. Loves her family.
Sumit Ghai:
He is a businessman. He is the owner of Ghai group of industries. Kria's dad, he is fun loving and cares a lot about his family. For him his family itself is his world. He wants Kria to be settled down with a nice man, who would love her more than him, should treat her like a princess, and is leading a successful life so that Kria can lead a peaceful life ahead as well. In short, he is a 'typical father'.
Gautami Singhania:
She is married to Rajdheer Singhani. They have a son, Reyaansh Singhania. She wants him to get married. She just wants a perfect girl, who can manage her family and handle her house 'satisavitri types'. In short a 'yogya bhau'; need not necessary to be perfect for her son can be okay if the girl is 'thik-thak types'. (I wonder whether she wants a bride for her son or a bahu for herself.)
Rajdheer Singhania:
Married to Gautami and father of Reyaansh. He owes Singhania group of industries. Loves his family and wants Rey to marry someone he wishes to spend his entire life with. He disagrees with Gautami at getting a yogya bahu inspite of someone who loves Rey, whereas he most of the time he agrees with her point of view.
Kria Ghai:
She is a bubbly, fun loving girl with loads of attitude. Loves to gain attention. Arrogant but a sweetheart. Filled with attitude but someone with simple wishes and wants. Perfect example for 'Beauty with Brains'. Her beauty attracts every guy around her, they just can't help but stare at this beauty infront of them. Loves her parents for being so understanding. Hates corporate parties and corporate talks. She is in corporate field just to dream fulfilled, to see her dream project become true some day. Her world revolved around her family and friends until she met Rey.
Reyaansh Singhania:
He is a complete workaholic. Hates to talk about marriage especially when it's from his mom. He is the owner of RS group of industries that he himself has started on his own. A perfect gentleman with all the qualities that a girl dreams to have in her 'prince charming'. All girls around him can't stop but droll over him. But he's very dedicated to his work and never gives a damn about the ones who look at him dreamingly. Finds difficult to express his feelings and is not a filmy bug.
Aarav chopra:
There are more characters to this but would reveal them only when they are about to enter.π
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guys please lemme know if you want me to really continue this or just end it?
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