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SwaRon OS: It's too late to apologize (Page 8)

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
I just read both part of ur os n once again it was amazing

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
glad u continued..n updated so soon..Smile
loved d update..d way u wrote sharon's feeing..n realization
how dance alwaz shows d  vulnerable n soft side of her 
d fear,d intensity vch ws derClap
gr8 update

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
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u left me speechless
I read it after watching todays episode
and I replaywd the scenes and felt like it actually happened this way and u just related the whole
scene
the beauty of that scene magnified ton times with ur superb writing describing their emotions
ahhh keep writing girl u are gifted
u should become a professional writer oh no wait I forgot u already are one
loved it loved it loved it
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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
I am glad you gave another part to this since we never want SwaRon story to end in that tragic painful way. I am happy that you talked about Swayam and the way he was feeling at that moment. He was hurt but he still didn't care. He loved her and can't imagine his life without her. He will love her till his breath, even when he clearly knew that she won't accept it. The way his eyes conveyed his pain at the end of dance was really touching. It was a delight to see Sharon actually reading those eyes and understanding his feelings. 

It wasn't too late to apologize!

Well penned!
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Badly wanted to read something on the current track and got this. Superb update. Sharon finally accepting her feelings and Swayam even tough he's hurt, he's still there for her. Every emotion perfectly defined with the song lyrics. This song is perfect for SwaRon and their current track.

Update soon! :)

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
loved the portrayal of sharon's soft,vulnerable side thru her dance...her perspective while looking into swayam's eyes...///both the parts were beautifully written,...well brought out...especially the last line of 2nd part where sharon regains herself thinking that it was never too late and that she still had it...mindblowing os...

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
awesm os

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