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SwaRon OS: It's too late to apologize (Page 5)

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Whoa didnt expect u too cntinue so soon.. had barely finishd commenting on the prev part.. thanks a ton!!Big smile  this ones even mr amazing.. His pain comes across so well.. Brilliant!!
Wonderful how Sharon realised that its nvr too late by jst looking into his eyes!!

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Amazing, superb, wonderful ! So apt. Love the way you've put their feelings into words Clap I actually doubt the actual sequence to be any diff. Beautiful work, do continue ! Atleast till the confession Embarrassed

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Wonderful way in which u have described Sharon's turmoil with the flow of the licrics that she was dancing with Rey.
the second part of Swayam's inner feelings  were so cute.The way she had found out that She too loves him with the kind of passion was wonderful
Lovely Os.
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Wow, another beautiful OS from you. Thumbs Up
Thanks for continuing and i got to read them together Smile
The first update with Sharon's thought, were perfect justifying her fear, wear in the second part Swayam's pain came across so well. Glad that finally Sharon realised her love towards Swayam has the same intensity if not more. 

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
awsm... luvd it...

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Posted: 05 June 2012 at 9:45am | IP Logged
I felt d emotins while reading. Its simply beautiful. Swayam's pain was heartbreaking.

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