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swaron19

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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 1:45am | IP Logged

Hey sawyer_tom,

I'm new here and I just read your OS. You really have emoted sharon's and swayam's feelings in a beautiful manner and the connection of it with the song and dance was also wonderfully portrayed. I was truly engrossed while reading it and felt experiencing it for real. Smile

Amazing OS.Loved it to core.Clap


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Posted: 08 June 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged

Wow awesome os nidhi Thumbs Up

U described swayam's pain so well n finally sharon realized her feelings for him...really nice Big smile

Thnx 4 d pm Smile

 

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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
I haven't watched the precise sequence yet, the original episode. I watched some sort of an edited version of the whole week's episodes, so they only showed Sharon-Rey's dance and whatever happened before that between Swayum and Sharon was ignored.Stern Smile

Anyway, this is a piece of intense and fiery writing which actually feels mellow when you read it, like pregnant with emotions, anything like that is both fiery and soothing. Well done, mater! I dun think the actual sequence is just as vivid, but Swayum's POV is surely one of your best attempts ever. He sure does scare you with his intense sentiments, that's all too noble and generous and loving of a man to long for a woman like Sharon. Sadly, there's many Sharons around who secretly look for such people, whilst real men find it funny to be jerks. 

You're majestic! 
Thanks for the PMs.

-Kanks




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Posted: 14 June 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
sorry for being late... (it's not too late to comment naWink)

brilliant writing... Sharon's pov was written so well...
for that matter even swayam's pain was written very well.. 
the emotions were described so well, that i was able to feel it while reading.. it was more like seeing the scene visually...
awesome OS.. Clap


Edited by ---Priya--- - 14 June 2012 at 6:38am

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
amazing awesome os i love it 

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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 10:51am | IP Logged
WOW Awesome OS... Clap

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Brilliant work En, honestly.

*edited*

Oh damn I just realized I've changed my user name.

It's me, Pree (Sheherzade).


Edited by CoffeeAddict - 08 August 2012 at 11:54am

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 8:22am | IP Logged
hey Nidhi...awesome post ...great piece of work ...ClapClapClap

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