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Posted: 03 June 2012 at 7:03pm | IP Logged
Hello 

This a new FF I started recently. Due to mature content, I will update parts of it here. Please read the rest on my blog. 

To read the rest of entire text of Chapter 1 go to, and comment on the blog

Thanks!!!
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Chapter 1 - The Dawn

The loud clank of the chain knocking on the door would have roused half the neighborhood but not Khushi.  A deep sleeper, she squirmed in the small cot, nearly pushing her sister, Payal off it for the nth time during the night, grumbling in her sleep about the motherf**kers who thought of fixing a chain lock outside the front doors. Payal pushed Khushi back with her generously heart shaped butt, a natural instinct she had developed over the years of sharing the same bed with her restive sister. Payal registered the knock the second time it rang louder than the last and mumbled with considerable irritation at her sister's inaction, "Khushi, it's your turn, open the damn door, you lazy  bone".

"Let me sleep jiji, mmm", Khushi turned in the other direction, yet again pushing Payal off the ledge but this time payal caught the edge of the bed in time and spanked Khushi's bottom with all the might her still sleepy muscles could muster. Khushi jumped off the bed, "I'm going, im going, you don't have to abuse me, ok?", she cursed the man behind the knock several times and headed out the room.
"Aa rahe hain, aa rahe hain, Im coming, don't break the door first thing in the morning, chacha,"she called out as she grabbed a steel vessel (ganji) from the coffee table on the veranda outside her bedroom and crossed the open air, moderately sized courtyard that was surrounded by high walls leading to a door that opened to the narrow busy lane outside. The tie and die fabric hung on clothesline in one corner of the yard, while varied assortment of fabrics, embroidery threads and fabric paints littered the tables in the veranda that stretched on the three sides of the central courtyard. The skies were still shy of dawn but a few birds announced the start of another busy day at the Gupta household.

Khushi opened the door rubbing her eyes and pouting in discontent on having to discharge this odious duty.
"Khushi beta! Hurry up, I have many houses to cover this morning, "exclaimed the man outside the door. He was perched on a moped, dressed in a white kurta, a half sleeved checkered sweater on top of kurtha, white dhoti on the bottom and a monkey-cap on his head. A large milk canister hung strapped to the side of his moped and a smaller container hung from the handle of his puny vehicle.
"Kya Chacha, you are all Rajesh Khanna today, hain", Khushi smiled teasingly at the unintentionally funny figure Resham Singh cut, sitting astride his moped.






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Hello Friends

I have made tons of update since the last time i was here. 

Do read the chapters 2 thru 20 and comment. 

Chapter 3 - She walks in beauty
He was looking at a work of art. Venus, he thought. The girl that stared back at him was an alabaster beauty with rich glossy dark hair tied in a side swept braid that snaked down her dainty neck, smoothing over her modestly covered bosom, and ended just above her narrow waist, limpid hazel eyes slightly flaring at his sudden interruption and her incredibly pink lips mouthing a wordless O. Her hands were still in mid air and her dainty fingers were spread apart in an effort to explain the atrocity of the situation to the salesman. She walks in beauty, a long forgotten Lord Byron flitted through his mind. Shyam forgot what he was about to say.




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And chapter 20 

Here's a preview of chapter 20 
Carnival of Rust, Skies of Lust


Arnav backstroked to the end of the pool. The cool water refreshed his tired limbs, exertion from the frenetic packing and last minute tying of loose ends of the business before he moved. He looked up the dark starlit sky as he backstroked some more, his submerged ears blocked off all the noises and ripples in the pool calmed his mind. This was his guilty pleasure ' skinny dipping and since everyone was away tonite at Duggal's, it gave him the perfect opportunity. He looked up the side of the house.

A female silhouette was watching him from Shyam's apartment window. Damn! He swore silently. But it was too late to react and cover up. He finished his lap and rose from the water, unhurried and making no speedy effort to cover himself. Someone's getting bold! He thought when the silhouette remained pinned to the window while he casually reached for a large Turkish towel and covered his lower half. Then he looked up. 

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If you have not read this FF yet, please start at the beginning.
Chapter 21 

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Streaming water hid her tears. Khushi scrubbed herself with a vengeance to rid herself of imagined dirt. Her sari and choli were sogging wet, ruining the intricate embroidery of zari. She tried to find absolution with a mere shower, but it evaded her. She rubbed her face and lips harshly, punishing herself in every part that had erred, making them red with irritation. Later, she curled up in bed and tried to sleep fitfully. The dual horses tormented her until she felt a warm arm envelope her and croon "Khushi" into her ears. 

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Posted: 28 June 2012 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
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If you have not read this FF yet, please start at the beginning.

Chapter 22 - The Demons of the past

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The demons of the past are back to haunt them, 
when destiny was about to proffer a second chance. 
Could the demons be exorcised?
Innocent beginnings reclaimed? 
Evolution is the name of the game 
Only the fittest survive. 
Time will tell the tale of who will remain
And who bids goodbye
- Serialjunkie

(To the couple that never will be in the show Khushi & Shyam)



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Posted: 30 June 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
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Chapter 23 - Mortal Wounds

Please dont forget to comment on the blog, if you have not already. And to those who have, THANK YOU!! you keep me going. 


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At nineteen, Khushi felt like a fifty year old. Every shred of innocence in her young heart had been rudely ripped and trashed. Shyam's addiction, Anjali's blackmail, and her own aberration had rocked her insides, questioning her simple understanding of the world. Life gave her rude awakenings, which she had not bargained for, yet was right in the middle of it, without choice or escape. Time was testing her true mettle, and Khushi's solid spiritual grounding helped her recognize the fact. She prayed to her Devi Maiyya for strength and asked for help. And then, she realized she did not have to fight this alone. She needed help and she would seek it. 

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