A Walk On The Beach #9|Note: Page 60 (09.01.2015) - Page 4

Originally posted by: zyanah

wooohooo party time...finally u updated!!

dear shru...loved every bit of it...but all i dont understand is that why are you not writing this story for yourself instead of writing it for others???

why do comments always measures an authors talent????

i m also a silent reader and dont comment on most of the ffs but still i do give a damn to it and i love this ff to the core and idont the writer of this wonderful ff to feel bad.ok...so i think i made my point and never leave ur story in middle

The whole chapter is beautiful in simple words !!
I loved the understanding between AR when he decided to pursue medicine instead of photography.
I felt the episode of  difference in opinion on taking their relation ship forward dint fit perfectly well in this chapter. I felt like it came all of a sudden..but I know you knew it  better why you included that..

Overall Amazing writing!!

I got your point. Infact I felt that its not required to explicitly write 2 years leap as your chapter title states that. Though the tile doesn't talk abt number in specific, it fit  perfectly well for this chapter as it includes few months and  later 2 years leap.

Originally posted by: Munchkin.

Um, hey there, and thanks for reading and commenting :)

I know I could have written '2 Years Later..', but the main point of the part was NOT to write that. It was a gradual description of the 2 years, actually. It started with a few months ahead of where I ended the last part, with Armaan's very first exhibit, and ended at 2 years later, with Armaan's LAST exhibit nearing up close.. I wrote it like this with the intention of letting everyone know what conspired in those 2 years, and how they are basic bread-crumbs for the story ahead. My other option was - as you pointed out - to show 2 years later, and immediately bump off to the present and show all of this as flashback. But that was way too cliched, and I just wanted to try out something new. It was also my attempt at finding out if I actually give my readers something to think about, if they ponder over what the part consisted, pay attention to detail and actually speak out what the part was for - a leap of 2 years, just to show that AR have been going strong for 2 years now. It was right there in the title. 

Well, I don't really think I was successful in that attempt, LOL! But its done, so I'll just count my failure as a learning point :)

Thanks again! :)

Originally posted by: Rihanna4all

The whole chapter is beautiful in simple words !!
I loved the understanding between AR when he decided to pursue medicine instead of photography.
I felt the episode of difference in opinion on taking their relation ship forward dint fit perfectly well in this chapter. I felt like it came all of a sudden..but I know you knew it better why you included that..

Overall Amazing writing!!

Nothing was supposed to be in sync in this chapter.. No scene was supposed to be linked to the other, so all of it was supposed to be out of the blue.. LOL, I don't think anyone got the point of the part.. It was just a foreground.. So it was a series of drabbles if that explains my point..

So, yea! LOL this part was such a failure, and to think I spent a good 2 months writing it! Thanks for commenting :)

Sorry for being sooo late to comment! 😒

But i still have to reserve this place. I am out of town and need a lot of time to comment! So when i reach back Il pakka se comment and for sure Il try making it huge!

So this space is RESERVED!

And By the way, I LOVE YOU for updating finally! Now i am going to go and read the update! <3

TATA! <3 Edited by Die_hardfan_KSG - 11 years ago

loved it

update soon plzzz

amazing part

Hey shru!!!!
First of all a big congratulations for the 9th thread...[ :D] A Walk on the Beach had come a long way 😊
The time when I saw a pm in my inbox AWOTB...I was like [:O] let's check it out after all..there was a pm regarding the ff after such a long time and then I opened it and it said... New thread and part on page 1 and I wanted to read it right away and I got to the link
Then the name of the chapter..the first head was The Leap and I wa like...did Shrutika took a leap of few years in the ff and that now our peanuts n munchkin are married or something? And then I started reading...it was really a very lengthy part...you very know how to make up for all the wait that we had to endure don't you 😊
It as like wow... I totally enjoyed my self reading it...finally...Riddhima won't be addressed as the office s**t and the fight— cat-fight was just fab 😆
and Armaan is such a sweet heart to dedicate his exhibit to his munchkin and family 😊 and then the fight between AR on sex issue...I felt you could have elaborated it a little...
And then in the end Riddhima was sooo mature...I just live the relationship they share

Love
Nandi

Loved the 'Leap'  and the "Decision', somehow made me realise how far Armaan and Riddhima have come in their relationship- there's a lot more love than ever before- i dunno why but i felt it a lot here :) There is a lot more influence on how the other person behaves, what they choose in life, the little thumbs up and guffaws make us see how it's their own little world they've built up. And the way Armaan's career transition was shown- I loved how you took this topic up =) 

🤗Ok exams just got over and I was catching up everything :$ Shru Idk about anyone else but I JUST LOVE the way you've gone about writing this part, it was innovative and such a commendable job at showing us how and what they've gone through in the few years.. their achievements, their relation, their careers, their happy and sad moments. The entire division of the story from the present to future in a part just to show what's going on and what is coming up, just gave this story a new meaning.  Edited by Ankita.M - 11 years ago