Originally posted by: foslaNandini
Wow!!! I read the 4 parts in one go girl.. It was definitely a fiction that I would bookmark to read. Short and crisp parts and making the viewer glued to their seat for the next part.The intro of the changed Ram was mindblowing. Loved how you brought that out. The lone man in the shore was beautiful. The hurt was evident naah with PK's letter revealing things and the disappearance after the divorce. Love how you kept the man still in love post all this. The portraits of a smiling Priya was another hit. Dadi and Rishabh are gonna be crucial in this atleast. hopefully they are more than silent spectators.The mutual pain and the feeling of happiness at the new arrival was splendid. Can't wait for things to unfold and Ram to find his Priya.Why has he still spared the evil family and let them enjoy the benefits of KM?You are a fabulous writer girl. Keep it up! I think we should chuck Sita Gita productions and start Eena Mina Tina productions!!๐
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