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Story: Broken Cheese Ball; NOTE:P23 (Page 7)

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hey savage thanx for pm...this is really nice story...i m really liking it...the way you have shown the internal feelings of omar...and his image...the new built bonding of naaz and damini is also superb...nd naaz is really adorable though she has a past but she is very joyful...and finally damini she is trying to establish to she is naturally slow in track but her description is also nice and upto mark...please send me reminder when u update next...thanx again for pm..

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Very nicely written gals. Omar deewan seems an interesting specimen. Loved how you described his build and his not to good behavioral traits. Looking forward to read on how the story unfolds. And waiting for our smart yet slightly sarcastic gal and charming yet impulsive guy to meet. I am sure this is going to be fun. 

Thanks for the PM. Do continue soon. 

Edited by Sudha-SK - 31 May 2012 at 1:40pm

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Posted: 31 May 2012 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Amazing Ones Nidhi and Khanks.
It was awesome one.
Thanks for pm.
It was very cute.
The way u described Damini and Naaz was superb.
Update next part soon.

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Posted: 31 May 2012 at 8:34am | IP Logged
This is what, multiplied brilliance.? :P Since I read both of you, I could make out a few here n there, biut it IS fluent, and really interesting. Nidhi and K, great job!

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gosh u ppl r osam!!!!Clap
i mean d way u ppl write..hats offThumbs Up
update soon n thnx a lot fr d pm Big smile

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Keep PMing me K, I'll get down to reading it once I have a little time on my hands :) xx

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