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Story: Broken Cheese Ball; NOTE:P23 (Page 7)

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Posted: 31 May 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
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Very nicely written gals. Omar deewan seems an interesting specimen. Loved how you described his build and his not to good behavioral traits. Looking forward to read on how the story unfolds. And waiting for our smart yet slightly sarcastic gal and charming yet impulsive guy to meet. I am sure this is going to be fun. 

Thanks for the PM. Do continue soon. 



Edited by Sudha-SK - 31 May 2012 at 1:40pm

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Amazing Ones Nidhi and Khanks.
It was awesome one.
Thanks for pm.
It was very cute.
The way u described Damini and Naaz was superb.
Update next part soon.


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This is what, multiplied brilliance.? :P Since I read both of you, I could make out a few here n there, biut it IS fluent, and really interesting. Nidhi and K, great job!

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gosh u ppl r osam!!!!Clap
i mean d way u ppl write..hats offThumbs Up
update soon n thnx a lot fr d pm Big smile

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Keep PMing me K, I'll get down to reading it once I have a little time on my hands :) xx

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I know both of you may not appreciate this "Res" business, but I really gotta run. Will edit this tomorrow. Sorry

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Awesome update Nidhi. Did you write this one one your own or did you guys Share the work like last time?

Omar seems like a typical amongst guy born to the rich household. Very well described I must say. So Damini found herself a friend on the very first day. But Naaz is quite different from her it seems. Oh well, I'm really eager to know the way this turns out.

Thnx for the PM n update soon. And sorry for taking so much time.


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Omar's image and feelings was described really well and I love the new bond of Damini and Naaz. Smile Awesome update Kankshita and Nidhi Clap

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