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Hey there folks! As promised I'm going to give a shot at writing and hold our beloved Shanak at gunpoint. The first post will be an index, part 1 will follow immediately. 

Comments are cherished, tomatoes and taaliyaan are welcomed alike- I have been positively affected by our Mr. & Mrs. Burthal. Wink

I haven't finalized the name of the FF yet, so suggestions are welcome. :) [Original name finalized now]

Much love,
Nisha



3, 2, 1...Here goes: 








Part 10: Page 15 (18.06.12)

Part 11: Page 17 (19.06.12)

Part 12: Page 18




Part 13: Page 21

Part 14: Page 23

Part 15: Page 25

Part 16: Page 27

Part 17: Page 29 (27.06.12)

Part 18: Page 30 (30.06.12)

Part 19: Page 32 (03.07.12)

Part 20: Page 34 (06.07.12)

Part 21: Page 36 (07.07.12)

Part 22: Page 38 (10.07.12)

Part 23: Page 42 (14.07.12)

Part 24: Page 44 (17.07.12)

Part 25: Page 46 (22.07.12)

Part 26: Page 49 (24.07.12) 

Part 27: Page 52 (28.07.12)

Part 28: Page 55 (01.08.12)


Part 29: Page 57 (06.08.12)

Part 30: Page 60 (11.08.12)

Part 31: Page 62 (16.08.12)

Part 32: Page 65 (30.08.12)

Note: Page 66

Part 33: Page 67 (04.09.12)

Part 34: Page 68 (20.09.12)

Part 35: Page 70 (29.09.12)

Part 36: Page 72

Part 37: Page 73

Part 38: Page 74

Part 39: Page 76

Part 40: Page 77

Part 41: Page 79

Note & Part 42: Page 82

Part 43: Page 83

Part 44: Page 85

Part 45: Page 87

Part 46: Page 89

Part 47: Page 90

Part 48: Page 91
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Part 49: Page 93

Part 50: Page 95



Part 53: Page 99


Edited by ABlank90 - 03 August 2013 at 12:47am

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Part 1

She picked it up and put it down again. Her mind must be playing games with her. It just could not be true.  This is not how things happen. Surely, yes surely her mind was teasing her; having fun at her expense.

She turned away and caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror. Her hair caressed the silk of her cheeks and tickled the upward bend of her lips. Was she smiling? Smiling to herself? That was it. She had indeed gone mad.

As she turned around, unsuccessfully trying to suppress her smile, her eyes fell on the envelope she had just seen moments ago. It was still there, beckoning her to open it. She reached for it and held it firmly in her delicate hands.
It felt light, she thought.
"Had you expected otherwise?" her mind questioned.
Shaking her head in disbelief at how randomly her mind strayed from the apprehensions that kept her from opening the envelope, she brought it closer to smell it. Her eyes shut on their own prerogative as his distinct fragrant caressed her nose.

Overwhelmed, she ran to her cupboard and placed the envelope inside her pink diary. She would read it later. Later, when her mind could comprehend whatever was written in that letter.


Alright guys...the short, first part is here. Unscrupulous yet warranted comments are more than welcome. What do you guys think? Continue or cross off? 
Plus, what do you think is in the letter? 
I'd love to hear your speculations! Smile


Edited by ABlank90 - 22 June 2012 at 10:50am

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Goood start but I dont entirely understand it loool, im not goood at storues and finding names but when I read it more I willl let u knoe...
Btw my name us aasma x

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Hey Nisha Smile
Good start but full of suspenseLOL
But it definitely looks promisingSmile
Cum on give us the next update...reveal something soonBig smile

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Good start to the FF...

Well i guess its a love letter from shaan...LOL
 

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Posted: 26 May 2012 at 9:34am | IP Logged

1st part was nice but kuch jyaada samajh me nahi aaya

but sure 2-3 updates sab samajh me aayega
so next part update it very soon

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Nishaaa Hug
So glad to see you're writing! As for the first part, I absolutely adored it. It was short, but still very sweet, with Khanak's affection for Shaan's letter? Can't wait to see how your story unfolds, write soon! Smile

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good start nisha...liked it...Smile

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