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The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 (Page 6)

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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vgiri

@Laurie... Awesome Awesome...got goose bumps.
 
Originally posted by *Maleena*

I love it! I can't wait for your next update! i hope its really Arjun behind her and not her imagination.
 
I felt the same, kudos to Laurie..

Thank you Vgiri Big smile
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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by soapwatcher1

Laurie, loved it all, lapped it up like a person parched with thirst devours the mirage you promised in Chapter 1! 
Loved your play with words, the wicked wind lifting her tresses, the night sky - beautiful evocative writing!  As for the voice she hears behind her, I know, I feel (fingers and toes crossed) that it is for real!!  No imagination this but Arjun's voice!
 
Keep writing, as Shyamala has put it dil maange more!

Oh Janhvi, even my eyes are crossed from this fan fic ROFL

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. Its a great booster Big smile

Hope you like the next installment.

Enjoy!
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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by purethought

Laurie .. Clap
Want to read more, since there is nothing in the serial left to watch as of now.
Your story about ARVI is a great relief. Thumbs Up 

Thanks Trish Big smile

Hopefully we don't have to wait too much longer for these two to be reunited, but until then...

Enjoy!
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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lola123

Ohhh...I couldn't help smiling reading it...very well written...

Thanks Lola Big smile
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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by latika19

I just loved it...its superb please continue soon i m eagerly waiting for the next part...:)

Thanks Latika Big smile

Next installment coming soon.

Enjoy!
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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by abhimg

StarStarClapHi Laurie,

Lots of love, wonderful post. The feeling you described in Purvi at the beg of part 2, cld feel it in the guts...i too hope its really Arjun...
This is sooo romantic...ofcourse there is the pain...but i think we are all used to pain by now...
This is a amazingly lovely and brilliantly written...thank you Laurie...we all love it...kudos...
ClapStar Keep it up and yes, me too- dil maange more.. and more...

Thank you so much Abhi Big smile

I'm trying do the romance justice LOL hopefully I can come close to the spark ARVI once had. f not I'll keep trying until I get it LOL

I appreciate the feedback. More coming up soon.

Enjoy!

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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bee5

Laurie,
  Chapter 2 was beautiful. Very beautifully written. Written with lot of love and tender care.

p.s: I am not a FF/OS/SS reader. I won't bore you with my reasons, but since it is from you, I am reading it.

There are a lot of questions that came up when I was reading, but for now, I am not asking any questions. Since I started reading, I would like to finish it. You are a gifted writer, so you should continue to write, not just ArVi, but something else as well.


Dear Bee - how I appreciate your kind, wonderful words! 

After this, I'm giving some other projects some consideration as well so I value your encouragement Big smile

I will try to not leave any loose ends but if I do will you let me know? 

Thank you for coming on my adventure with me Big smile

Enjoy!
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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Urben

I loved ur post writting LAURIE keep up the good work..and we all want our ARVI back togather soon but till then we have to wait 3 months for it..but till den we can read ur wrtting LAURIE and feel and c that we can c our ARVI getting back togather..pllzz keep writting more n more it keeps A SMILE ON US ARVI FANS.. :) Star

Thank you Urben Big smile

I appreciate the feedback and the next installment will be out soon.

I am and ARVI's Angel all the way!!!

Enjoy!

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