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The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 (Page 2)

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Vow Laurie, BrilliantClap! Loved your writing style Smile ...you seem to have a flair for writing! Looking forward to hear  more...

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nalonynnej

Amazing first part! Clap Love how you displayed Purvi's will power and determination. Hopefully Arjun comes back saying he didn't go through with the marriage. I don't think any other guy could fill the void in Purvi's heart that he left. I hope the real PR story does not leave the seperated for three months like this. Unhappy 
 
Thank you for the feedback.
 
I will always try to do justice to these two. After all they are the reason I started watching this show.
 
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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
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Excellent writing...so professional!!!!! ClapClapClap
 
Waiting for the next part!!!!!!! Post soon...n plz keep it all in one thread, otherwise its tough finding the threads!!!!!!Smile
 
Thank you Luvly Smile
 
Great advice about keeping the posts together. I appreciate it. Smile

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by soapwatcher1

Laurie, amazing, could feel Purvi's emotions, the floodgates are about to break open.  Who is the Director of the new company, Arjun himself?  He has not left for Canada with Ovi, has he?  He couldn't bring himself to, told Ovi at the last minute before she boarded the plane perhaps and he stayed back? What a dumbo!
 
Thanks Janhvi Smile  Your feedback means alot Embarrassed
 
This fan fiction writing makes me nervous LOL but its a story I've been toying with for a bit. I hope it turns out the way I see it in my head.
 
You've got a mother's instinct Wink
 
As for the rest, what does your dhamad say again? Oh yes, wait and watch LOL

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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sashashyam

Dear Laurie,

Congratulations! You have a real flair for fiction, and not just for wicked humour. I truly like your writing style, it  is spare and yet both evocative and gripping. I am waiting eagerly  for Part 2 and then 3. Don't take too long!

I am NOT going to speculate about who is what; to reveal all that when you choose and how you choose is your privilege. But do hurry up!

Shyamala
 
Thank you Shyamala Smile Coming from you, that really means alot too Embarrassed
 
I am writng this story with a weather eye on the horizon so I hope I can do justice to ARVI before the storm breaks.
 
I appreciate your feedback and look forward to entertaining you again soon Big smile
 

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Originally posted by ss4123

Vow Laurie, BrilliantClap! Loved your writing style Smile ...you seem to have a flair for writing! Looking forward to hear  more...
 
Thank you Big smile
 
Next installment coming soon.
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Posted: 25 May 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
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Who is the Director of the new company, Arjun himself?  He has not left for Canada with Ovi, has he? 
 
The same thought crossed my mind while reading...is tt Arjun??????
Me too thought the same...Arjun hi hoga behind this...
Brilliant Laurie ClapClap...keep going...don't make us wait for so long for the next part...

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SUPERB first part...luved it...please do continue further...I do hope that soon ARVI will face each other with even stronger passion & love for eachother...Wink

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