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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged

Ok guys here is part one hope u like it and please be honest with your replies

8:00am at the devgardh palace you can see Rajmata Mrinalini Devi sitting in her office speaking on the phone. (I'm gone put rajmata names as DS when she speak it will be a lot easier for me)

DS: thank you Commissioner Saab for your help and please do come to the party organised this Saturday if possible bye.

Doctor Saab: Rajmata ji aaj app bohaut khush lag rahin hain (rajmata ji today you seem to be so happy)

DS had this big smile on her face: Doctor Saab how can I not be happy when my grandchildren (manyata and also unnati) are coming back after 3 years especially uday I haven't seen him after he left for his further studies. Doctor Saab smiled at that and komal walked in listening to the convo

Komal: maa Saab you are absolutely right and after a long time jaigarh and devgardh kids will be seen together  and I'm happy how jay and Vijay decided to organise a party for manyata, uday and unnati return.

DS: haan komal you are right they all will be seen together I still remember that time when uday, manyata and unnati were kids and later on when uday had to go London for his further studies did you see how manyata was crying seeing him leave. Komal smiled and had tears in her eyes. Just then a servant comes in to call them for breakfast.

At the dining table, manika and komal were talking generally.

Jay: DS these are the things that we are going to have in the party she said handing the list to DS who was looking at it carefully. Just then Vijay bhai came.

Vijay: nani Saab these are the list of the guest that has been invited from our side and girirag uncle side he said handing it to her. DS was impressed how her other two grandchildren were trying to make the party superb by working hard on it. Vijay sat down and was about to have his breakfast when he saw the person walking towards the breakfast table''''''.

Ok guys I end the first part here lol hmm well I have started to write the second part and may update it later on depends on how much likes and comments I get lol hope you like it and don't forget to press the like button and do leave a comment. Well I think I might be able to update part 2 today lets see



Edited by preya_radev - 31 October 2013 at 11:48am

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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged

sounds 2 b interesting...plz cont Smile waiting 4 nxt update

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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 11:39am | IP Logged
nice plot dear,Clap
please do longer update next time.

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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Itz really nyc update and thanx 4 d pm

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Nice one n thanks for pm.

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Posted: 24 May 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Awesome start Thumbs Up...really nice plot...update the next part soon...and make it a little longer if u cn...plzz...and can u pm me as well?? Smile
On name suggestions i would like to vote for 
Tu hi mera
Tum se hi
Thoda sa pyaar hua h thoda h baki
Dil ne jise apna kaha
Kahi pyaar na ho jaye
Ek main aur ek tu
Main Hoon Na

hey i wanna suggest some name as well...bt i guess since the voting is already going on...so Confused

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ok guys i really cant wait anymore lool and i got about 3 pm saying forever and always so the ff is changing into that name


Edited by preya_radev - 24 May 2012 at 2:00pm

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congratulations for the name...i love it LOL 

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