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hi friends today i am going to start bandhan#3 .wow its really a great journey for me but i know that it wont be possible without all ur support .and help i really thank u all from the bottom of my heart who have taken out time from their busy schedule to comment on my ff .plz guys i reaaly need ur support and comemnt in future also so dotn left me alone  and be with me .
 
Bandhan #1
 
 
index
character introduction :-pg 1
part 1 :- pg-8
part 2 :- pg -17
part 3 :- pg - 24
part 4 :- pg -32
part 5 :- pg -40
part 6 :- pg- 47
part 7 :- pg- 51
part -8 :-pg - 65
part 9 :- pg - 79
part :- 10 pg - 91
part :- 11 pg -102
part :- 12 pg - 113
part :- 13 pg - 126
part :-   14  pg   -  138
 



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By seeing naian like this pia gets really tensed she goes near her and while placing her hand over her shoulder asks her with a worried tone "kya hua di aap ke tabiyaat toh thik haai naa ?"ab naina jis ne aapne pregnancy ke baare mein kissi ko nahin baateye the pia ko aase achanaak aapne sammne dekh kar ek dam shocked ho jaate haai woh jaldi se aapne face ko wash kar ke pia taraff dekhte hue aapne stammering voice mein pucchte haai"pi pia tu tu yahaan kya kar rahe ?"

ab pia jisse ke liye us waqt naina ke sawaal se zada uske tabiyat ke baare mein jaana zada zaruri tha uske sawaal ko ignore karte hue kahete haai"di is waqt yeh important nahin haai ke main yahaan kya kar rahe hu is waqt jo important haai woh yeh haai ke aapko kya hua haai r u ok ? should should i call the dr ?" dr ka naam sunte he naina jo ke abhie tak yeh sochne mein ulljhe hue the ke woh pia se kya kahege uska mann jaise ek dam kaap utthta haai kunki usse pata tha ke agar dr aayega toh sab ko uske pregnancy ke baare mein pata chal jayege woh aapne darr aur ghabbrahat ko kisi tara aapne ander dabate hue aapne hootho par ek halke se smile laate hue kahete haai" pia tu bhi naa kitne fikar karte rahete haai main main bilkul thik hu woh toh bas but before she could say anything further pia jisse convience karna bohot he muskil haai naina ko aapne taraff turn karte hue kahete haai"di plz yeh drama naa aap kisi aur ke sammne kijiyega kunki mere sammne aap kabhie bhi jhooth nahin bol sakte isliye yeh sab choriye aur mujhe saff saaff baataye ke aapko kya hua haai "aapne bahen ko is tara se usse change karte hue dekh ke naina jis ne bohot he muskil se aapne ander heemat jhutaye the uske woh sare heemat jaise tute hue nazar aa rahe the usse samajh mein nahin aa rahe the ke woh pia ko kaise samjhaye woh aapne mann he mann bhaagwan se pray kar he rahe the jab raj jo ke waha naina ko dhudhnte hue gaya tha pia se kaheta haai"main tumhe baata hu pia ke tumhare di ko kya hua haai ?

raj ko yun achanaak waha dekh kar jaaha naina jo ke pahele se he ghabbraye hue the uska haal aur behaal ho jaate haai wohi pia se jaise ab aur sabar nahin ho rahe the woh raj ke pass aate hue kahete haai"thank god jiju aap aa gaye yeh di toh mujhe kuch baata nahin rahe haai ab aap he hume baataye ke di ko kya hua haai is she ok ?" aapne saali saheeba ko aase aapne di ke liye pareshan hote hue dekh kar raj ko bura toh laagta haai par woh itne aasaani se naina ko tang karne ka moka kaise chor sakta tha woh aapne chahere par ek serious sa expression laate hue kaheta haai "woh baat darasaal yeh haai pia ke tumhare jo di haai naa woh naa but before he could complete his sentence naina jis ke heart beat us waqt PT usha ke paair se bhi zada tez bhaag rahe the raj ko tokte hue kahete haai"aap aap rahene dijiye naa main main pi pia ko baata dunge aap neeche jaaye sab aap ka intezar kaar rahe honge par raj usse toh naina ke tension ko aur baaraaana tha woh uske baat ko kaatte hue kaheta haai"are naina yeh tum kya kahe rahe hoo pia yahaan itne pareshan haai aur main neeche chala jaao nahina nahin i cant do that i have to tell her the truth toh(turning towards pia he continues ) baat yeh haai ke tumhare jo di haai naa woh naa kal pure 50 plate paanipurri khaa lee the mainne usse rokhne ke bohot koshish kee the but u know her yeh kissi ke baat thore naa sunte haai ab dekho kaise tabiyaat kharab ho gaye haia iske ab tum he baatao koi asa karta haai kya bhaala woh bhi itne garamio ke seasson mein jaaha ghar ka khaane se bhi hume accidity ho jaate haai "

aapne jiju ke yeh baat sunke jaaha pia ke haase rukhne ka naam he nahin lee rahe the wohi naina ka maan kar raha tha ke woh usse waqt jaake raj ka murder kar de woh pia ke taraff gusse se dekhte hue kahete haai"agar tera haasne ka quota khatam ho gaya ho toh kya tu ab neeche jaa sakte haai mujhe tere jiju se kuch baat karne haai "

aapne di ke baat sunke pia jaaha neeche chale jaate haai wohi naina jis ka gussa tab tak volcano ka roop lee liya tha raj ke pass aate haai aur uspar aapna volcanno ka lava barsate hue kahete haai" kya kya samjhte haai aap aapne aap ko aap ko bohot maazaa aata haai naa mera mazaak urrate hue yahaan main itne tension mein the aur aap haai ke kun kiya aapne aasa baataye mujhe kunnn banaye aapne mera mazaak mere behen ke sammne kya aapko aapke bacche ke bhi fikar nahin hai haan hoge bhi kaise woh bhi toh aapka ek maaza ka he but before she could say anything further raj jo ke abhie tak chup chap naina ke har baat ko sun raha tha usse aur seh nahin hota he while pinning her against the wall says in his dangerous voice "KHABARDER KHABARDER JO TUMNE MERE BACCHE KE KHILAAFF EK AUR SHABD KAHA TOH KYA KYA JAANA CHAHATE HO TUM YEHI KE MAINNE PIA KE SAMMNE TUMHARA MAZAAK KUN BANAYA TOH SUNEYE MISS NAINA ALLUWALIA AGAR MAINNE PIA SE WOH BAAT NAHIN KAHE HOTE NA TOH AB TAK TUM DR KE CLINIC POHOCH CHUKKE HOTE kabhie toh naina kabhie toh mere baato par yakeen kiya karo kabhie toh yerh soch liya karo ke mainne aasa kun kiya par nahin tum kun aasa sochne laage bhalla tumhe toh har waqt har pal main he galat nazar aata hu naa i i am really diappointed with u naina i i "raj's voice gets chokked with his subpressed tears and pain woh naina se haatkar dur jaake khara hota haai

pata nahin kun par aaj raj ke aakhon mein yeh dard yeh aasu dekh kar naina ka mann bhi jaise dukhi ho jaata haai usse bhi jaise ehsaase hote haai ke usne aaj jo kaha woh galat tha woh aapne bartav ke liye raj se maaffe maagtne ke liye uske pass jaate haai aur aapne apologetic voice mein kahete haai"i i am sorry mr raj i shouldnt have said all thoses words plz plz forgive me " itne dino mein pahele bar naina ko aase usse sorry kahete hue sunke raj ko aacha toh laagta par woh yeh bhi jaanta tha ke usse naina se uske tabiyat ke baare mein bhi jaana haai islkiye aapne zasbaat ko aapne ander he dabbate hue aapne rudeness ko barkakaraar rakhte hue naina se kaheta haai"is mein naye baat kya haai naina anyways mujhe tumse kuch baat karne haai come to my room"

raj ke yeh baat sunke naina ko thore haairaani toh hote haai par usne abhie abhie raj ka jo gusseballa roop dekha tha us ke bad usmein jaise bikul he heemat nahin hote haai ke woh raj ke baato ko kaat sakke ya phir usse kuch pucch saake woh bas aapna sar haan mein hillate hue kahete haai "hmm chaliye"naian raj ko follow karte hue uske bedroom mein jaate haai

Raj ka bedroom jo ke naina ke tasveero se bhaara hua tha usse dekh kar naina toh ek dam surprised ho jaate haai usse samjh mein nahin aate haai ke koi insan kisi ke liye itna dewwena kaise ho sakta haai woh aapne yun taasveero ko dekhne laagte haai jab raj jo ke yahaan naina ko uske tabiyaat ke baare mein pucchne ke liye laaya tha usse \kaheta hai"in pictures ko tum bad mein bhi dekh sakto ho naina par pahele mujhe yeh baato ke tumhe aaj kya hua tha i mean r r u ok kahin humare baby ko toh kuch ab naina jo ke un taasveero mein thore kho se gaye the raj ke yeh baat sunke aapne trance se bahar aate haai aur uske taraff dekhte hue kahete haai "aap ko fikar karne koi zarurat nahin haai mr raj humara baby bilkul thik haai woh aaj mera varth tha isliye thire chakkar aa gaye the aur kuch nahin " ab "varth" ka naam sunte he raj jis ka mood pahele se he naina ke baato ke waaja se kharab tha uska gusse jaise phir se sar chaar jaata haai woh naina ke shoulder ko aapne haatho se pakaarte hue us par chillatate hue kaheta haai"HOW HOW COULD U BE SO IRRIESPONSIBLE NAINA TUMHE PATA HAAI KE THIS MONTH IS VERY CRUCITIAL FOR U AND THE BABY USKE BAD BHI TUMNE AAJ VARTH RAKHA KUN KIYA TUMNE AASA NAINA KUN JUST TELL ME DAMMIT" raj ko phir se aase gusse mein dekh kar naina jo abhie thore pahele he uska yeh gussa jhel chuke hai usse jaise aur seh nahin hote woh aapne sar ko jhukate hue aapne kaapte hue awaz mein kahete haai i "wo woh ac actually mama ne kaha tha ke aaj sagai haai toh i i have to keep fast i cant say no to her plz muhe maaff kar dijiye"

naian ko itne inncoently usse maaffe maagte hue dekh kar raj ka gussa jaise pal mein kahin gayab ho jaata haai woh naina ko waha baithne ke liye kahe ke uske liye khanna order karne jaata haai jab naina jis ko uske maa ne kaha tha that untill pandit jee fixes their wedding date she cant have anything raj ko rokhte hue kahete haai"mr raj plz aap aase khanna order mat kijiye mama ne kaha haai ke jab tak pandit jee humare shaadi ka din fix nahin kar leete tab tak i cnat have anything " naina ke baat sunke raj ka mann dukhi toh hota but he cant say anything kunki yeh naina ke vishwas se jo jure hue the woh aapna sar haan mein hillate hue kaheta haai"thik haai naina agar tumhare mama ne kaha toh i cant say anything but u can have atleast a glass of juice kunki as much as i know usse tumhar varth par koi aasar nahin hoga" raj naina ke liye ek glass orange juice maaagata haai

After having the juice raj naina ko leeker jab neeche jaata haai tab gayatri jo ke unka kab se intezar kar rahe the unke pass aate haai aur unhe datte hue kahete haai"oh so finally waqt mil gaya tum dono ko neeche aane ka yahaan pandit jee kab se tum dono ka intezar kar rah haai par tum dono ho ke kaha the tum dono kya kar rahe the itne der " gayatri jee ko pahele bar aase gusse mein dekh kar jaaha naina ke haath paao thande par gaaye the wohi raj jo ke ab situation ko handle karne mein master ban gaya tha aapne hottho par ek cute se smile laate hue kaheta haai "uff oh nani kya aap bhi itna gussa karte haai main toh bas naina ko aapne kamre mein leeker gaya tha taaki shaadi se pahele woh mujhe baata sakte ke usse humare bedroom mein kya kya changes chaheye kunki u know naa i dont like fights i love only love " aapne poote ke yeh baatein sunke gaaytri jee jo ke abhie tak usse naraz the unka gussa jaise ek dam gayab ho jaate haai woh raj ke kaan ko paakarte hue kahete hai"tu bhi naa raj bohot besharam ho gaya haai ab chal pandit jee humara intezar kar rahe honge"

 
 
raj aur naina gaytri jee ke saath jab pandit jee ke pass jaate haai tab woh dekhte haai ke pandit jee baare he mann laagaa ke aapne kitab mein dekh rahe haai pandit jee ko aase dekh kar gaytir jee who was really anxious to know about the wedding date pandit jee ko pucchte haai"toh pandit jee aapne dekh liya haai naa kon sa din thik hoga humare pote ke shaadi ke liye " ab pandit jee jo ke gayatri jee ke bohot purane log haai aapne kitab ko close karte hue unse kahete haai"jee haan humne shaadi ka din toh dekh liya haai par ab yeh "par" sunkte he waha baithe sangeeta jee jo ke bilkul gayatri jee ke tara he is shaadi ko leeker bohot he utsuk the unke chehere jaise ek fikar se cha jaate haai woh aapne ghabbaraye hue awaz mein pandit jee ko pucchte haai"kya hua pandit jee koi samasiya haai kyaa sab thik toh haai naa ?"ab pandit jee jo ke unhe pareshan nahin karna chahate the aapne sar ko hillate hue kahete hai"are nahin nahin aap aase pareshan kun ho rahe haai hum toh bas yeh kahe rahe the ke shaadi ka din tai toh ho gaya haai par woh agle mahine nahin balke december mein hoge kunki december se pahele koi bhi shaadi ke liye subh muhurat nahin haai " pandit jee ke baat sunke jaaha sabhie logo ke chahere par ek rahat dekhaye dete haai wohi raj jo ke yeh aache se jaanta tha ke aagr yeh shaadi december mein hoge toh naina ka 9 month ho jaayega gets reaaly worried usse samjh mein nahin aata haai ke woh is muskil dur se aapne aap ko aur naina ko aase nikale


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congratulation for new thread
awesome, nice part

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First of alll... 

For new thread of BANDHANClapClapClap


Now coming to the Update

it was just awesomeClap

Pia apni di ki kitni care karti hai isiliye wo doctor ko bulana chahti hai but Naina manaa kar deti hai kyunki agar doctor aa jaye ga to sab ko sachai pata chal jayegi!!!!ShockedConfused


But Raj akar sab kuch sambhal leta hai Thank God!!!!D'ohD'ohSmileaur kyaa bahana banata hai!!!LOLLOLLOL


But ye bahana sun kar Naina JEE ka to paraa high hi ho gya uff ye naina bhi na apne gusse ke age kuch isse samajh hi nahi ata!!!ab jhele Raj ka gussa!!!!!


Are ye kya Naina ko Raj ko iss tarah bebas dekh ke acha nahi laga...iss ka to ek hi matlab nikal raha hai ke kahin Naina Raj ko exccept to nahi kar rahi hai aur agar kar rahi hai to yeh to achi baat hai!!SmileBig smileSmile


OMGGG!!!!! Date 9months ke baad ki nikli hai ab Raj aur Naina kya karenge!!!!!chalo iss bat ki tenssion mein kyun loon iss ki tension le hamari Writer urf meri betiLOLWinkWink


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Congos Shongos...bhai thread pe thread aa rahe hai yahan to...Clap
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sorry for being super late lateef alsi vyaktiEmbarrassed...lekin yaar kya bolu exams wagerah ka jhanjhat hi aisa ho jaata hai..Ouch
really nice partStar..raj kitni smartness se naina ko bachata hai doctor ki visit seCool.. raj to waise bhi bachpan se hi smart hai..EmbarrassedBlushingLOL
ye pandit ji bhi na, naina ki delivery karva ke hi shadi karvayenge kya??Confused Do something ria, raj ko koi brilliant idea dilwaoApprove...seems naina mellow down ho rahi hai raj ke liyeBig smile..lekin abhi bhi kafi kadvahat hai man me..hope ye jaldi se solve ho..
Update sooon
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Congratulation for new thread! Nice Uptade! Like it! love the RajNaina scene!

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