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Wow the much awaited update ………Thanks Shona 😃
Shona I loved the update. Kya dhamakedaar start hain dear. Loved it totally. ⭐️
The main essence of the theme Is its completely based in collage matlab full on
masti, Nok-jhok, Ruthana-Manana, Gussa, & dheere dheere kareeb aana.😳 The
best thing I always loved in your writing is the way Arjun pursues Arohi.😃 The
way he made her fall in love with him is always like a dream & Super
adorable. 👏
WOW arjun is a hunk, full collage is fida on him.😊 Our dude is star of collage at the same time he is most responsible & studious too I loved the concept completely. 👏 But U find t boring …….Kyun??? 😕 Waise I know I am being selfish here but I feel its wonderful when writer don't like her work much 😳,,,,,,,,,,Lol being a reader hamari chandi ho jati hain. 😆
I Loved the way u described Arohi's personality.😊 She looks
stunning yaar kya superb describe kiya hain apne loved it totally. 👏 Lol Sunjay
is hilarious, complete namoona. 😆 I love it as har group mein aisa ek bakra hona
hi chahiye. 😉 Lol he tries to patofy every girl. Lol trying on shefali. I loved Billus character,. Superb dear ⭐️
I loved the way u described Romit & shefali.😊 Completely in Love & love
the way romit reacted to Billu. When his trance broke , his romantic moment was
disturbed by Billu.😛 with a stupid question ……Lol Dog walk …….hahahah. 😆 U have explained that Beautifully. Amazing
dear. 👏
LOl sunjay got a nice lesson from Arohi.😛 But he was still dreaming about her.
& he wanted Arjun to make her fall for him. LOl I loved Romit's line when
he asked arjun to hook him up with her. "Sher ko chodke bunder" 🤣 hahahaha plus a
guy praposing guy wala part ,,,,,,,,,,Hilarious Shona.🤣 Ishhh it was mind blowing
Arjun saw Arohi & couldn't stop himself from admiring
her beauty,😊 he was so lost in him that he forgot o blink his eyes 😃………haaye
amazing dear the way u wrote it was superb, it actually plays like a visual in
readers mind. Kudos to you for writing it so beautifully. 👏
I loved the Part ……..Poor sanjay phir se bakra 😛 "iss gaal pe maara tha na, bhabhi hai bura nehi mante". 😆 LOl it was hilarious …..amaizng dear ⭐️
I am excited as yeh start hain toh aage toh dhamake honge, I loved the bonding
shared by the gang. u have their frindship amazingly 👏
Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
Excellent Shona - the update was very nice - come on Shona, jaldi SE basking story bi update Jarod naaa
Originally posted by: KaranKittu4eva
Awesome! I really enjoyed the atmosphere of the game and school! It's a nice young vibe! glad u liked the idea
Omg, Arjun is so funny first glance at Arohi stole his heart! 😆 yup she did
LOVED the Dogwalk Dialogue 🤣 Hahah soo funny! actually I was thinking if catwalk then why not dogwalk😆
thanx billi...
Originally posted by: zoya_naziya
Arohi ki ek jhalak se Arjun ki bolti bandh ho gayi😊 Arohi ki jalwa tha...age age dekho hota hai kya!!
Update was awesome😊 Continue soon yaar... thank u Zoya!!
Originally posted by: Jerryberry
Wow.. finally u updated..yup finally
dat girl is arohi na? find out on next update😉
lovd d way arjun tld sanjay 'bura nai mante, bhabhi hai na'.. lol.. i cnt stop rofling at dat dialogue..😆
ab arjun usko kaise pateyega? continue soon yaar..😊 Arjun ka style...hmm what abt Singhania style😃
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