lets see the journey till now..
Me: hey!! Dude wake up...i said wake up now...
" what the hell??"
Me: ummnn... happy new year...
"what ?? seriously tune mujhe yeh kehne k liye uthaya"
Me: or ni toh kya..?? i just now started a new ff on new
years eve...i jus posted it n saw the
time its 12 am so thought...to...
"what.. thought ..mai nahi so rahi hu toh kissi aur ko sone ni
du??.."
Me: shut up u lazy
crap...
"hey am not lazy ..ok..!! bas pure universe ka khayal rakhte
rakhte was just tired so dozed off a little.."
Me: yeah yeah i know tum pure universe ka khayal rakhte ho
thats why kria used to call u " universe
ji"...but see na my new ff..tell me na howz it ??
"kria who kria??"
Me: arrey kria...gosh tum kria ko nahi jaante...mujhe toh
laga tum "universe ji" ho tumhe toh sab
pata hoga...tum kria ko ni jante...kria ko??
"gosh yeh humans itna dramatic n emotional kyu hote hai??
Pehle pata hota toh inme itne emotions dalta hi ni"
Me: u said anything??
"no no..i was just..."
Me: whatever!! let me tell u , kria woh hai jiske piche rey
latoo hai...
"ab ye rey kaun hai??"
Me: ahh!! Kuch din pehle hi toh bataya tha rey ek hot sa
munda hai..i love his eyes..hmmnn...his smile...n...he has a hot body n...
"ahem ahem..stop drooling..little devil..but tumne toh kaha
tha ki tum rey par latoo ho..."
M: ha kaha tha toh??waise bhi he looks gud only with
kria...n kria woh hai jo swayam ki best friend hai..
"arrey ab yeh swayam kaun hai..."
Me: arrey swayam woh jo bahot cute hai n jiski sweet si
smile n dimples hai...n joh Sharon ke picche latoo hai hai
" ab yeh Sharon kaun hai...??"
Me: offo universe ji !! u don't know anything..sharon diva
hai..diva...bahar se thodi sakt hai but andar se bahot cute..arey jisse Vicky
darta hai...
"Vicky???"
Me: uff !! Vicky aka babu aka deewana...
"deewana?? U mean...deewana like majnu...?? like romeo...??"
Me: haan ..haan deewana...neha ka deewana...
"umm..nn..ne..."
Me: ab ye mat mat puchna kaun neha...she is the bollywood
queen..n babu ki kagu...n kria ki best friend...
"ek question hai??"
Me: now what dude??
"yeh sab hai kaun?? As per i remembered maine toh aise koi
characters duniya mein banaye hi nahi"
Me: nope they r characters of d3...
"d3??"
Me: dude seriously i am pissed off !! am pissed off of ur
unawareness..seriously u should come to earth...n watch d3...get a life
dude..get a life...d3 is dil dosti dance...now go n watch it on youtube from
starting ...
"but now?? Its 2am !!"
Me: shutup dude!! i said now toh now...no arguements...
"pata nahi is ladki ko banate waqt mera dimag ghaas charne
gaya tha...yeh itna chilati q hai...??"
After sometime... 5am
Me:dude what r u doing?? Sona ni hai kya??
"dude don't disturb me i am watching d3..."
Me: What till now??i thought it would take u not more than 5
mins to watch whole d3...forgot u r "universe ji " kya??
"dude ...but its so addicting that i watched every episode
at least 99999992345668... times n still watching it"
Me: really?? R u mad ??
"😡😡"
Me: ok ok i can understand... d3 addiction...welcome to this
addiction...all have this d3 fever..
Now stop it n read my ff...n tell me how it is...
"well the no. Of likes in ur ff will tell u how it is.. am
not reading it ..."
"Ch-1 no.of likes=19
Me: "shit!!! sirf
itne hi likes?? Dude m nervous now...only 19 likes??"
Universe ji aka dude: take a chill pill yaar !! this is 1st
chapter...n it's written by jenifer ..u just made slightly changes
Me: u cant blame me ok ...i asked her permission 4 continuing
it n she readily agreed as she wasn't going to write it anymore...only introduction
n ch-1 is hers n rest our creativity...
Uni: "ours?? who??"
Me: of course me n kosha
Uni: oh yeah but
where is she...??
Me: 10th mein hai na so little busy u know study
n all...
Uni: yeah yeah...studies... i am glad mujhe study nahi
karna padta...
Me: yeah lucky dude!!!
anu-arsha, lover_D3, shenz_kriyaansh, pkriyaansh,
joshyalbinaAlBz,
aashima.jindal, isnat, geethapapi, Hot.Pink.Heels,
Anyaa_012, sujucoolstar, magical_mania, lovely7010,
tinatartari, sun-naaa, prash_t,The007Shivani, luv_arsha,
sukanyaa,
Ch-2 no. Of likes=50
Me: oh shit !! 50
likes wow...balle balle...
Uni: hmm this was ur
own creativity na?? see i told..u can write well...
Me: yup..am happy but...
Uni: but what gal??
Me: (frowns) only 50 likes??
Uni: tum humans ki yahi problem hai .. kabhi satisfied nahi
hote...
Me: but only 50??
Uni: abey yar pakaa mat..kaha na chill...ek toh...intro, pm
list, character sketch,promo , ch-1 n
ch-2 sab ek hi page mein itna sara!!
readers confuse ho gaye honge..kis topic ko like kare ..half ke toh like button
hi work nahi kar raha hoga...
Me:uff whatever!!!well did u read it??
Uni: ummnn no...!!
Me: very well !! u know what i don't need ur comments.. my
IF readers r enough 4 commenting
See they liked this chapter
kritikakapoor,
preetibaheti, via123, grungta11,
anu-arsha, KoolKatz, AKSHATA3110,
ardy03, deepa101, palaksaluja,
joshyalbinaAlBz, Amti4u, geethapapi,
singhkhusboo, tish18, 21Neha21,
...Pwinch3ss...,
aashima.jindal, awesomeabshu, suchitrabehera, LOV_ARSHA_KREYA, shenz_kriyaansh, isnat,
lover_D3, pkriyaansh, Anyaa_012,
Hot.Pink.Heels, medha16, lovekriyaansh, anniemathias,
Kriyansh, nams_arsha, sweetapple2995, 100littledevils, aditi061,
DamonCrazy_D3, upasna_mishti, SugarCubes,
Saumya_D3, _Monu_, lovely7010,
Asha_ArSha, magical_mania, achuAR,
dazzlerfan, sujucoolstar, sukanyaa,
The007Shivani, luv_arsha, kriyanshfan,
Next day...
Ch-3 no. Of likes=36
Uni: hey what happened u looked so gloomy...n sad...
Me: only 36 likes...not happening dude...!!
Uni: oye sabr rakh sabr..sabr ka fal meetha hota hai...
Me: whatever u say...
Well see these people liked
kritikakapoor,
via123, Fariharoshnichy, grungta11,
anu-arsha, KoolKatz, palaksaluja,
ramya26, Khush94, joshyalbinaAlBz, singhkhusboo,
awesomeabshu, isnat, ArSha_Forever, ...Pwinch3ss..., shenz_kriyaansh, lover_D3,
Anikz003, partyprincess16, Anyaa_012,
PD_puja, Hot.Pink.Heels, Kriyansh,
SugarCubes, Saumya_D3, Asha_ArSha,
magical_mania, achuAR, swaron24,
kriyansh960, sujucoolstar, sukanyaa,
aria009hera, luv_arsha, The007Shivani, kriyanshfan,
Ch-4
No. Of likes=49
Uni: so whats up??
Me: hey am awesome...I got 49 likes 4 my last chap dude am
really happy...
Uni : hey thats really gr8 dude...
Me : yup am happy 4 getting
43 likes that too from
kritikakapoor,
Fariharoshnichy,
poojachandran, grungta11, anu-arsha,
AKSHATA3110, AlexArsha, ardy03,
KoolKatz, tish18, nityaa02,
Hawaida, isnat, ArSha_Forever, singhkhusboo,
joshyalbinaAlBz,
partyprincess16,
suchitrabehera, ...Pwinch3ss..., aromakriyaansh, ekiholo,
shenz_kriyaansh, 21Neha21, lover_D3,
Anikz003, PD_puja, shaffy_arsha,
Kriyansh, DamonCrazy_D3, prrk86,
sweetapple2995, medha16, Hot.Pink.Heels, Anyaa_012,
sujucoolstar, lovely7010, Asha_ArSha,
magical_mania, achuAR, swaron24,
kriyansh960, SugarCubes, Saumya_D3,
luv_arsha, shaani2209, sun-naaa, The007Shivani, aria009hera,
sukanyaa,
Ch-5
No. Of likes=61
Uni: Hey gal see u
got61 likes...
Me: what?? Urgh!! U
mean last chapter right??
Uni: arrey u or ur
chapter one n the same thing...
Me: really??
Uni: yup really ,..see u wrote this chapter right ?? n this
chapter got 61 likes..so indirectly u got 61 likes right??
Me: u know what u r pathetic at making excuses like
rey...but i guess i was really expecting this much likes this time as this chapter was the
turning point of my ff..
These 61 people liked
toshanaik3011,
kritikakapoor,
Fariharoshnichy,
poojachandran, _lovekriyansh_, _Cutiepie_Tiya_, grungta11,
anu-arsha, shanu0529, KoolKatz,
AKSHATA3110, deepa101, harshitagangwan, Karunyandrea,
AlexArsha, isnat, ArSha_Forever, LOV_ARSHA_KREYA, partyprincess16, joshyalbinaAlBz, Amti4u,
tish18, nityaa02, 21Neha21,
pkriyaansh, aromakriyaansh, ekiholo,
lover_D3, Anikz003, Anyaa_012,
Angel56, Kriyansh, nams_arsha,
sweetapple2995, prrk86, Hot.Pink.Heels, --aimy--,
medha16, PD_puja, shaffy_arsha,
yogini64, lovely7010, kriyansh960,
Asha_ArSha, magical_mania, achuAR,
dazzlerfan, swaron24, _Monu_,
SugarCubes, Saumya_D3, sujucoolstar,
anamika143, sukanyaa, aria009hera,
swaron95, kriyanshfan, sun-naaa, shaani2209,
The007Shivani, luv_arsha,
Am again thankful to them...
Ahahaaa...mummy...mummy...ahahaaa...sobs sobs...
Uni: hey gal what happened why r u crying??
Me: didn't u read the news?? Kria is leaving the show...
Uni: i know i know even am shocked but i am happy as i can
see them alive in ur ff
Me: what really??
Uni: yup really...
Me: but i don't know what to do...kosha is not yet here now...
Uni: hey don't worry just see what others think...
.
.
.
Me: yipeee ...
Uni: stop screaming n dancing around me u stupid gal ..u r
irritating me...
Me: uff!! Khadoos!! dude i just got review am going to
continue my ff till kria is on the show...
Uni: just till kria is in the show??
Me: yup...
Uni: (smiling) we will see...
Me: did u read my ff??
Uni: well i didn't get time...
Me: yeah..yeah u r busy fellow...
Ch-6
No. Of likes=58
Uni: hey gal!!
Me: hey dude...whats up...??
Uni: well nothing much just watching d3 nowadays...n ...u
've changed their total character from
d3
Me: yeah thank u 4 noticing...thats means u read my ff??
Uni: no way i was just busy...
Me: see ..these people liked my ff
toshanaik3011,
kritikakapoor, preetibaheti, grungta11,
anu-arsha, shanu0529, KoolKatz,
ardy03, misha65, AKSHATA3110,
kimshu, ...Pwinch3ss..., deetha,
isnat, tish18, nityaa02,
21Neha21, pkriyaansh, star_2012,
chsripriya, lover_D3, Anikz003,
Arsha_Kriyansh, Amti4u, joshyalbinaAlBz, partyprincess16, geethapapi,
Shweta-kriyansh,
shenz_kriyaansh,
ArSha_Forever, prrk86, D3_kriyaansh,
sweetapple2995, Nirju99, Kriyansh,
nams_arsha, medha16, PD_puja,
shaffy_arsha, -Nia-, Anyaa_012,
yogini64, Hot.Pink.Heels, Asha_ArSha,
magical_mania, achuAR, dazzlerfan,
kriyansh960, lovely7010, sujucoolstar,
SugarCubes, Saumya_D3, luv_arsha,
shaani2209, sukanyaa, asmaju,
The007Shivani, kriyanshfan,
First of all...lets see who all commented ..
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