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tere liye- Angad, Garv, Kumud, kripa (Page 2)

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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
great part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
Part 3
Garv and Angad are outside, about to go somewhere.

A: Bhai, where u going? Kumud ke paas?
G: Yea, n u?
A: I have a date.
G: Subah subah?
A: yup, got 4 dates today bhai!
G: tu kabhi nahin sudhrega
A: Bhai how can u stick to one girl, and that too someone like kumud, I mean she is so bossy, she is a journalist too.
G: What's journalism got to do with this?
A: No, bhai u aint seeing the connection, here. U see journalists are soooo nosy and so u know - I mean …
G: Angad mere bhai, don't think too much. U won't understand so I won't even go there, once u will fall in love, u will understand it all on ur own.
A: Bhai, whatever. All I can say is that this is the only thing we differ in, but hey what's with this army thingi. Are u serious, or just to shut dadu up.
G: I am serious.
A: You don't have to do this.
G: I have to in order to prove to myself and dadu and everybody else who think I am a loser.
A: you won't change ur mind.
G: No.
A: Well suit yourself. I am gone, to meet priya, then riya, then jiya, then liya, then diya…
G: Bus, kar yaar!
A: aur ek hai!
G: Angad!
A: ok I am sorry bhai, today u are very angry- so I will let u go. See you tomorrow morning.
G: what, u aint gonna be back home
A: 4 am is morning na bhaiya.
G: right (they both laugh) I am such a fool. Go ahead have fun.
A: thanks bhai, u have FUN too.
G: ok.

They both hop in their respective convertibles and go to meet their ladies. For Angad its LADIESssssssssssssssssss.

Part 4 coming soon.


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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
nice part do cont soon!
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Awesome job! Hmm....I kinda like Garv's attitude better than Angad's, in the aspect that he is only sticking with Kumud LOL
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
quick update.nice
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Posted: 06 June 2006 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Clap a fab story
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Posted: 06 June 2006 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Great parts!!!
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Posted: 07 June 2006 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Part 4

Garv comes to meet Kumud at her place. Kumud lives with her parents, but right now her parents are not at home. Kumud's parents also think that Garv is good for nothing and that he needs to do something in life before they give away their daughter to him. They are aware that he is from a rich family. But they want their daughter's husband to be an independent man.

Kumud: Hi Garv
G: hi, your mom dad aren't at home?
k: nope, they went to some seminar.
G: hmmm.
K: What's wrong, y do u sound so upset?

Kumud is sitting on the sofa, Garv just lays his head on her lap and tries to relax, u know in a sleeping way. She caresses him, she makes him feel like she is there for him.

G: Kumud, why are u the only one who bears with me, excluding Angad, he is just like me but yea why do u love me?
K: Because you are hot
G: can't argue about that one

They both laugh and kiss.

G: no seriously, Kumud
K: I know you are capable of achieving the best, you just need that motivation to achieve that….
G: What's the word?
K: What word?
G: In English it is objective. Or goal. What is it in Hindi?
K: The word is LAKSHYA!
G: right, Lakshya.
K: You just need that.
G: I think I have found it.
K: Really. Kya hai tumhara lakshya.
G: besides, you?
K: Yea!
G: I am joining the Army.
K: That's great, I am sure you will make it jaanu. I am so happy for ya.
G: you are the only one supporting my decision.
K: coz that's what u want, right? I mean I hope you doing this because YOU want to.
G: I really want to.
K: Well then, I can't say anything to discourage you. Now is that why u were upset coz other people are not supporting you.
G: Yea! But now I don't care, as long as you are by my side.
K: I am always by your side.
G: I love you, Kumud.
K: I love you too, Mr. Garv Khanna or soon to be Captain Garv Khanna.

They both laugh and cuddle up to watch a movie or something.

Next scene.

It is almost 9 pm and surprisingly Mr. Angad Khanna is done with his dates, and he decides to go to a club with his secretary, who manages his expenditure, and dadaji has asked him to go around with Angad and make sure he controls his spending. Unfortunately the secretary ends up falling into Angad's trap and covers all the bad stuff that Angad does and calculates only half of what Angad spends or even less.

Angad and his secretary reach at a club, where Kripa dances. Now lets name the secretary Mr. Singh. Kripa starts performing, Angad is blown away by Kripa's simplicity and her beauty, she is probably the most beautiful girl he has seen. Angad joins her too, they both dance and Kripa begins to like him. Angad approaches Kripa in a prince charming manner. Kripa is impressed by Angad because he is not indecent like other guys who make nasty gestures at her. He is a total charmer. Kripa has a good impression of him by the end of the dance.

The same night Angad ends up at Kripa's dressing room.

A: Hello Ms…
K: Kripa, mera naam Kripa.
A: Well, Ms. Kripa… just wanted to tell you that I am a fan of your dancing.
K: Aap khud bahut acha dance karte hai, it was fun.
A: you meant funNY?
K: No, I really had fun, you are a good dancer Mr…
A: Oh I am sorry, I forgot to introduce myself. I am Angad, Angad Khanna.
K: Nice to meet you Mr. Angad Khanna.
A: Hey.. Its VERY nice to meet you.

Kripa blushes.

A: So u wanna go have some coffee?
K: Umm, no thanks, I am getting late, some other time, good night.

Kripa takes her stuff and leaves.

A: Man she is really something. I like her, but I think she is different, other wise Angad Khanna ko koi no thanks kehkar nahi chala jaata. No No.
I need to find out about her, Mr. Singh please get me some information about this girl, other than what I know. Got it?

S: Yes, sir! I think the club owner might know something about her.

A: good job Mr. Singh, after a long time, you have said something intelligent. Ms. Kripa get ready to be swept off by Angad Khanna.

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