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enjoyed it.
Thank you for the suggestion. I will keep it in my mind. And Ahem already remembers Holi, Poonam. Remember, they were at the mandir to celebrate Rashi's pregnancy and some chandan powder flew and he remembered it. He just hasn't told Gopi that he knows. That's why he made his move on her. 
And got R-E-J-E-C-T-E-D! I will make Gopi and Mahua meet though. They have to meet. 
u describe the scene very well. keep going dear...
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Loved all the character of your FF good rashi is positive.Liked agni character most and gopi is more vocal not too shy.
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.indeed u r a good writer
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