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Hi friends!

Updating after a Looong time. Only coz I didn't have any motivation left to write while the show proceeded with Rajjo Bhaiyya's prem kahani Dead and Conda's irritating presence Angry. Crapfest it was!!! Now that the show is back in action, I am all upbeat with motivation and a big push by the gang (Thank you very much Santhi, Nands, Amby, Priya, Chitra - twitter pe jeena dushwaar kar diya tha.. LOL Tongue)

All your comments make my day guys. Thanks so much for loving this FF. Means a lot! Smile

P.S - Was missing apne original Neha-Vikram like hell in the show. They are only the ghost of their original self but return they did, and I thought why not include our awesome foursome in this update. So here it goes. Hope you all like it.

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Guys, writing after 2 months. So pls be considerate, haan... Wink


Gori Teri Aankhein Kahein ' Part 17

 

Early Morning

 

Ram wakes up hearing the alarm clock on the bedside table.

'Now why is this alarm ringing in a different tone today?' he wonders sleepily, spreading his right hand on the table to find his phone. He grabs it but, hello! It's not his phone ringing. 'Then what...' he wonders groggily.

And then everything comes rushing to him.

He opens his eyes apprehensively, in case it was still a dream. He relaxes on finding Priya snuggled close to him, with her left arm on his chest and her head on his left arm. He lets out a sigh of relief, thanking God that it wasn't a dream and his Priya was there with him. Last two days had been a whirlwind of findings, emotions, actions and what nots. He gazes at his sleeping beauty and an involuntary smile creeps on his lips, watching her sleep peacefully, despite the alarm ringing on their heads. He picks up her phone and silences the alarm. He then tries to draw out his left arm from below her but madam makes herself more comfortable with his twitch. He looks at her, mesmerized.

'What can be a better view to wake up to, than this?' He thinks. She is looking so gorgeous that he couldn't help but sigh with happiness at his destiny to get her back, in this lifetime.  He leans in and places a soft kiss on those luscious lips. Her lips twitch and form into a dreamy smile. He gathers her closer to him and goes back to sleep.

 

Morning

 

Ram opens his eyes to find Priya not by his side.  He hears the sound of shower in the washroom. He wakes up lazily, propping himself against the head rest. He picks up his phone to see the time but it's switched off. 'Power gone.'

He glances around the room to find a wall clock. His wandering gaze falls on the opposite wall where he finds a 'happy Ram and Priya' gazing lovingly at each other, locked in each other's arms. He remembers that day clearly. It was taken by Neha at Vikram-Neha's home. It was one of their get-togethers where only he and Priya were the invitees.

 

*Flashback*

 

Vikram - Kya yaar Ram? Aaj hum chaaron kitne mahino baad aise eksath mile hain aur tu baith ke TV pe match dekh raha hai? Heights!!

Ram - Abay chup kar yaar. Itne dino baad TV pe match dekhne mil raha hai. Janta toh hai ki pichhle 10 dino se din-raat kaam kar raha hoon. Kitna late ghar aata tha aur aate hi so jata tha. Koi life hi nahi rahi yaar last ten days mein.

Priya (entering the room with Neha, carrying a tray of snacks) - Bilkul sahi keh rahe hain ye, Vikram. Inki toh koi life hi nahi rahi...

Ram - Dekha!

Priya (continuing) - Life mein itne dino baad wife aayi par ye hain ki... Life mein wife ki koi qadar hi nahi hai.

Ram's jaw drops at this. Neha and Vikram try to suppress their grin.

Priya (continuing) - Itna late ghar aate hain, subah jaldi chale jaate hain... phone karo toh 10 calls ke baad mushkil se ek reply aata hai, "Priya, abhi busy hoon. Thodi der mein call karta hoon." Aur wo 'thodi der' space mein kahin kho jati hai. Aur phir...

Ram - Aa.. haan.. bas haan.. hum sab samajh gaye ki tum kya kehna chaahti ho. Ab full stop please, haan.

Priya glares at him.

Neha - Kyun fatty? Full stop kyun? Tumhari pol khul rahi hai toh chup kara rahe ho ise? Koi nahi Priya, you continue...

Ram - Arey kya continue? Cricket ki commentary suna rahi hai kya wo, jo continue? And what's this pol khol rahi hai? Main kya kisi se darta hoon kya? Kaam kar raha tha, koi club mein ja kar enjoy nahi kar raha tha jo apni har pal ki report har kisi ko deta phiroon.

Priya - Haw!! Har kisi ko? Toh ab aap mujhe 'har kisi' mein include karne lage? Matlab life mein wife ki toh koi value hi nahi hai. (Turning to Neha) Tum sahi kehti ho Neha, ye saare mard ek jaise hote hain. Jahan married life 6 mahine purani hui, (Sulking) wahin biwi ki ehmiyat khatam hone lagti hai.

Ram - Arey ye kab kaha maine? Priya tum aise kuchh bhi kaise bol sakti ho? (Turning to Vikram) abay, kuchh bolega bhi ya ye stupid si grin liye baitha rahega?

Vikram - arey main kya boloon ismein? (Ram narrows his eyes on him) Arey.. mera matlab.. haan.. Ram bechara theek hi toh keh raha hai. Usne kab aisa kaha, Priya? Wo koi club thode hi jata hai. Office mein baith kar raat din kaam hi toh karta hai bechara.

Neha - Arey! What bechara? Humein kya pata ki wo sach mein kaam karta hai raat din. I mean, din mein toh theek hai... par kya pata... raat mein... you know, thakaan mitane ke liye...  club mein... (trying very hard to suppress her smile)

Ram - Oh hello! Neha...

Priya (Cutting him) - Haw!! Neha, I think you are right! Is angle se toh maine socha hi nahi.

Ram - excuse me! Is angle se sochne ki zaroorat bhi nahi hai. (turning to Neha) Tum ye kya ulta seedha bole ja rahi ho Priya ko? (Turning to Vikram) Oye! Sambhaal apni double paagal biwi ko! Kuchh bhi bole ja rahi hai.

Neha (clearly enjoying the way the things are heading, she winks at Vikram to stay mum) - Arey, wo kya bolega. Usne kabhi tumhaare khilaaf kabhi kuchh bola hai jo ab bolega? Tumhein toh hamesha maine hi handle kiya hai. And ab jab Priya aa gayi hai toh wo karegi tumhien handle. Main toh kehti hoon, it's high time that Priya is made aware of your 'past'. Tabhi lagegi tumhaari life mein lagaam!

Ram and Priya (together) - What??!

They both look at each other and then at Neha.

Priya - Kya past? Neha, pls tell me.

Ram - Neha, you'll keep your mouth shut nahi toh I'll... I'll.. I'll sit on you!

Priya - Neha, pls batao. Tumhein meri qasam!

Neha - Fatty, ab toh batana hi padega. Priya ne qasam jo de di hai. (Turning to Priya) Pata hai Priya, ye tumhara bhola bhala sa dikhne wala husband Ram jo hai na, itna bhi bhola bhala nahi hai jitna dikhta hai.

Priya - matlab?

Ram - Oye!

Neha - Ram, shush! Tumhein Priya ki qasam.

Ram throws her a murderous look.

Neha (continuing, unperturbed) - Pata hai, jab Ram ne Lalaji ke baad business take over kiya tha na, toh ye lagaataar kaam hi karta rehta tha. Din raat bas kaam.. kaam.. kaam.. aur kaam! I mean, kabhi kabhi toh office mein hi bistar daal ke sota tha. Shuru ke 6 mahine toh isne office mein hi guzaare the.

Priya - haan toh? Ismein aisi kaunsi baat hai jo tum mujhe...

Neha - Arey tum poori baat toh suno. Humein toh lagta tha ki bechara kaise raat bhar jaag jaag kar mehnat karta hai office mein. Vikram bhi uske sath tha but ye Vikram ko raat mein ghar bhej deta tha, ye keh kar ki you have a wife and she needs you. Ek din Vikram ne ise bina bataaye office mein night stay kiya tab ja kar is fatty ki pol khuli.

Vikram - Neha...

Neha glares at Vikram to keep quiet. Ram is busy grinding his teeth.

Neha - Pata hai tumhein ye fatty raat bhar kya kaam karta tha? Ye aapke Mr. Kapoor every second night office se seedhe 'Club Elevate' pahunch jate the, wind down karne. Us din jab Vikram ne ise range haathon pakad liya toh isne use bhi apne sath shaamil kar liya night outs mein. Aur phir dono milkar khoob enjoy karte they. Sab kuchh meri naak ke neeche, office mein kaam ke bahaane se. Aur ye sab toh pata nahi kab tak chalta agar meri tez nazar Vikram ki shirt par nahi padti. And you can guess, what I found on his shirt!

Priya - I can't believe this! (She shakes her head in disbelief) I just don't believe this. Ram, aap...

Ram shakes his head frantically, pleading her not to believe any of Neha's words.

Vikram - Neha! Enough yaar...

Neha - Vikram, tum kuchh nahi bologe. It's high time ki Priya ko ye baat pata chale ki ye fatty sach mein purane dinon ki tarah kahin kaam ka bahaana kar ke raat bhar clubbing toh nahi karta...

Priya - Ab mujhe samajh aaya ki ye roz subah jaagte sath hi nimbu paani kyun peete hain! Hangover utaarne ke liye aur mujhe kehte hain ki weightloss ke liye faaydemand hai! This is too much!

Neha - Arey abhi kahan too much? Too much toh tab hoga jab tumhein iski shirt par... I mean, I am just saying, nazar rakhni chaahiye tumhein Priya. In logon ka kya bharosa...

Priya - Ram, main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi ki aap ye sab karenge, wo bhi mujhe bina bataaye... You are just... hunh!

And she storms out of the room. Ram looks at Neha with a murderous rage. Neha promptly hides behind Vikram and says,

Neha - Sorry yaar fatty. Wo bada mazaa aa raha tha tumhaari aisi shakal aur ye gussa dekh kar. Isliye control nahi hua aur main kuchh bhi kahaani sunati rahi Priya ko. Ab pls jao na... lagta hai overdose ho gayi.. ja kar manao use. Aur haan, ab tum bol sakte ho. Qasam over. Bologe nahi toh manaaoge kaise.

Ram takes a step forward to strangle Neha's neck but she screams, ducking behind Vikram,

Neha - Arey mera gala baad mein dabana... pehle apni biwi ko ja ke manao... nahi toh tum maare jaoge...

Ram - chhodunga nahi tumhein main, Neha! Vikram ke peechhe kab tak chhupegi?

With this he storms out of the room to find Priya. He finds her standing in the balcony, with her back towards him.

He looks heavenwards and prays to God before facing her raging tigress.

He steps forward gingerly and places his hand at her shoulder.

Ram - Priya...

She promptly shrugs it off, without even looking at him.

Ram (gulping) - Priya, suno na. Wo sab jo Neha ne kaha... Aisa kuchh nahi hai. Wo toh kuchh bhi faaltu bakwaas kar rahi thi.

Priya - Ram, mujhe koi safaayi nahi sun ni hai.

Ram - Arey par meri baat toh suno na. Main sach keh raha hoon. Tum chaaho toh Vikram se pooch lo. Neha ne ye sab just abhi abhi bana kar bola hai sab kuch. Arey, maine toh aajtak kisi club ke andar paon tak nahi rakha. Sachchi!

Priya - achchha? Matlab Neha jhooth bol rahi hai. Lekin wo jhooth kyun bolegi?

Ram - Kyunki wo by default aisi hi hai. Ekdum atrangi! It's her childhood problem!

Priya - Rehne dijiye Ram. Kyun bekaar mein Neha ko dosh de rahe hain...

Ram - Arey? Tumhein Neha par bada bharosa hai, apne pati par zara bhi bharosa nahi hai?

Priya - Achchha? Toh sach sach bataiye, raat bhar kahan rehte hain aap?

Ram - Office mein, aur kahan?

Priya - Aur mere calls ka reply kyun nahi karte?

Ram - Uff!! Galti ho gayi meri ma! Aage se urgent se urgent meeting ke beech bhi agar tumhara phone aaya na, toh clients se yahi kahoonga ki "Lady ACP Pradyuman ka call hai, ignore nahi kar sakta."

Priya  Achchha? Aur woh... woh roz subah uthe sath hi nimbu paani kyun peete hain?

Ram - Oh god! Tumhi ne toh kaha tha.. nimbu paani with honey subah subah lene ko.. weightloss ke liye!

Priya (not finding anything to complain about) - Aur... aur... wo...

Ram - aur kya? Tum kaho toh tum mere sari shirts bi check kar sakti ho. Ruko ek minute, (he searches in his pockets) abhi phone kar ke Bansi kaka ko bolta hoon ki laundry ke liye jo shirts rakhein hain, wo waise hi rehne de. Priya madam ko wo check karna hai. Ok? Happy?

Priya - Not happy!

Ram - Kyun? Ab kya hua? Ab tumhaari marzi ka hi toh kar raha hoon...

Priya - Aapko lagta hai ki main itni shakki hoon ki main aapki shirts check karoongi?

Ram (flabbergasted) - Kya?

Priya (coming close to him and wrapping her arms around his neck, biting her lower lip) - I am sorry...

Ram (confused) - Kya? Ye tum ekdum se smile kyun...

Priya - Wo mujhe bhi na Neha ki tarah aapko tang karne mein bada mazaa aa raha tha... isliye ye sab... (she looks at him sheepishly)

Ram's jaw drops at this revelation.

Ram - I can't believe it! Tumhein pata tha ki Neha bakwaas kar rahi hai?

Priya nods a little with a sheepish smile.

Ram - Jao, mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai. (trying to remove her arms away) Sare ke sare paagal log bhagwaan ne meri hi life mein bhar diye hian... ek wo Vikram, ek wo maha paagal Neha aur ab tum bhi... Bahut tang kiya hai tumne mujhe...

Priya - Achchha? Aur aapne mujhe tang nahi kiya?

Ram - Maine? Maine kya kiya?

Priya - Wahi toh! Aapne kab se kuchh nahi kiya. (blush tinge her cheeks)

He looks at her trying to make sense of this unfounded accusation when the meaning behind her words hits him. He rolls his tongue in his cheek and locks his arms around her waist, pulling her closer.

Ram - Achcha?

Priya (trying hard not to blush) - Aur nahi toh kya. Pichhle dus dino se kaam... kaam... aur kaam. Mere liye no time!

Ram - Arey madam, itni si baat...

Priya (cutting him in between) - Itni si baat nahi hai ye. Bahut badi baat hai mere liye. Jaante hain kitna miss kiya maine aapko itne dinon? Baat toh door, theek se dekh bhi nahi paayi aapko.  Suabh uthte sath office nikal gaye aur raat ko kitni late ghar aaye. Aur aate hi kharraate lene shuru. Meri taraf dekha bhi nahi. You don't have any idea kitne bure gaye mere ye last 10 days.

Ram - Oho. Toh meri biwi mujhe miss kar rahi thi? I am so sorry. Mujhe dhyan dena chaahiye tha. Koi baat nahi abhi theek karta hoon sab...

And he leans forward.

Priya - Ram! Ye kya kar rahe hain aap?

Ram - Arey, tum hi ne toh kaha ki aap kuchh karte nahi. Toh abhi kar raha hoon na... compensate.

Priya - Ram...

Flash! Click!

They both look towards the source of disturbance, only to find Neha with a camera in her hand and a big, naughty smile on her face while Vikram stands behind her, looking apologetic.

Ram - Neha!!! Tu toh gayi! Ye kya kar rahi hai...

Neha - Shush fatty! And thank me for clicking this most romantic pic of you two. Dekho, kitne pyaare lag rahe ho tum dono... made for each other!

 

*Flashback ends*

 

Priya comes out of the washroom, only to find Ram gazing at their photograph with a lovely smile on his face.

 

Priya (walking towards the dressing table) - Sahi kaha tha aapne, bhagwaan ne saare atrangi log aapki hi life mein bhar diye.

Ram - Tumhein ab tak yaad hai...?

Priya (smiling at him) - Aap bhi toh nahi bhoole.


They both look at each other with their faces sporting a warm smile each.

Priya - Waise aapki Anshi bhi na kuchh kam atrangi nahi hai...

Ram (getting up from the bed) - Ae, meri beti ko kuchh mat bolo tum. Apne papa pe gayi hai ekdum...


Just then,

Knock knock!!

 

 



Edited by PunyaS - 29 September 2012 at 5:17am

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OYE!
Anshi Pihu kaise ban gayi? LMAO! Wink


Partner, you are too good girl! ClapClap
Nok Jhoks and flashbacks are definitely your specialty! PERFECT UPDATE!
GMTA better work cuz i have nothing to say to you! 
Just know that i have a huge grin on my face and im squealing a little bit right now.. That should give u an idea of my feelings.. ROFL. Tongue

Love ya babe!
Waiting for the next part! 
Hug


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too cute i love this foursome raya n nevik
FB nok jhok was too cute

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hey Punya,
taras gaye the humare dil aisa ek scene ke liye.. 
I know that the guys that are at BT are not gonna allow anythign like this to happen so i am enjoying every second of your FF. 
you know ram-priya like few else punya 
waiting for more dhamakas from you. 
thanks girl for this one and biiig ramwala hugs to you

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[QUOTE=azk92]OYE!
Anshi Pihu kaise ban gayi? LMAO! Wink


Partner, you are too good girl! ClapClap
Nok Jhoks and flashbacks are definitely your specialty! PERFECT UPDATE!
GMTA better work cuz i have nothing to say to you! 
Just know that i have a huge grin on my face and im squealing a little bit right now.. That should give u an idea of my feelings.. ROFL. Tongue

Love ya babe!
Waiting for the next part! 
Hug
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haan punya,

mujhe bhi poochna tha,,anshi became pihu and how.. but it's okay.. 

love to you both girls.. as long as you'll write 
i am a happy happy camper

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That was really awesome yaar...Nice update with RaYa and NeVik...Awesome...

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