FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2)) - Page 4

Originally posted by: serialjunkie

well begun is half done!!

and now you know you must continue or the readers will hound you to the end of earth. 

pls contnue.. going good..

Nisha! Wow! Superbly paced and the characters intact. ASR's anger in this situation is understandable after-all THAT is a real MU but I like how she couldn't help but find herself chasing after him! Continue soon! ASR will survive but will a life-threatening situation give him new perspective, that is the question!
Edited by Rabba-Ve-Delena - 11 years ago

Hey Nisha 🤗
Sorry I am bit late 🤔
A very intense piece of work.. the emotional storm of Khushi has been penned down very nicely..
Though I personally love to read about kickass, unforgiving and stubborn Khushi, I really appreciate her helplessness over her turbulent and unrelenting heart which never deters to love the man who treated her most rudely here..
She is devastated here to know about his fatal conditions and all the supressed and trampled love for him has been surfaced through this difficult time; very poignantly written..
I felt sad for her crying heart.. She deserves to be loved like a princess..
I think the signed papers may create more misunderstandings between them in the show too; good point that u brought up that issue here..
And dear please continue..
I would love to see their mutual reactions when he gains conciousness, I hope Arnav saw her innocence before the accident..
Much love,
Manaal 😳
Edited by Doc_Manaal - 11 years ago

really nice. You should turn this into an SS. Great job!

Continueee Pleashhh 😳

nisha 🤗

Originally posted by: Doc_Manaal

Hey Nisha 🤗
Sorry I am bit late 🤔
A very intense piece of work.. the emotional storm of Khushi has been penned down very nicely..
Though I personally love to read about kickass, unforgiving and stubborn Khushi, I really appreciate her helplessness over her turbulent and unrelenting heart which never deters to love the man who treated her most rudely here..
She is devastated here to know about his fatal conditions and all the supressed and trampled love for him has been surfaced through this difficult time; very poignantly written..
I felt sad for her crying heart.. She deserves to be loved like a princess..
I think the signed papers may create more misunderstandings between them in the show too; good point that u brought up that issue here..
And dear please continue..
I would love to see their mutual reactions when he gains conciousness, I hope Arnav saw her innocence before the accident..
Much love,
Manaal 😳

good start,,,continue...

wow lovely... i like how u have captured the emotion and everything... pls continue