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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by moonkmh


Wah shona. I love u. Ur writng is amazng. Aftr a lng tym i found my jhagralu arjun in ur os. I kinda missng my ladaku arjuhi so much. Thanks for dis superb os.


luv u too dear...
what else cud be better...I wrote smth that u wanted for so long๐Ÿ˜ƒ
it made u happy big thing for me๐Ÿค—

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by -pranjal-


WOW 

This is Superrr Cuteee ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanks A ton dear ...Loved it to the Core :)  thanx to u sweetheart!!

I love the the start & the concept of Arrage marrage...Bith were getting married as their parents have selected them. Loved their Self talks ...Specially The galiyas  ๐Ÿ˜†  ๐Ÿ˜†  ๐Ÿ˜†  ๐Ÿ˜†  ๐Ÿ˜† It was Hillarious Shona :) Lol i am laughing my heart out when i read there self talks Specially Komolika & Ravan  ๐Ÿ˜† Amazing ๐Ÿ‘ Fantastic concept. it makes me excited when I see ur excitement n I love it๐Ÿ˜Š

Lol they can Take the Jagdalu couple of the year Award ๐Ÿ˜‰ Okk Sorry on a serious note I loved the way u discribed their Characters & feelings .,...Both Love Each others but didnt confessed it. Arohi's & state & her feelings were visible when she was discussing about arjun's close dance to other girls. Loved the teasing wala Convo between Shefali & Arohi ๐Ÿ˜† aww u observe every single thing na๐Ÿ˜‰

Ohh ...la ...la the bedroom sence was Campletely amazing โ˜บ๏ธ full on blush blush part ๐Ÿ˜‰ Finally arjun understood his feeling about arohi & couldnt stop himself. Arjun;s remark abt being Husband was Khatarnaak ...Awesomeness ki hadh yaar ...Loved it ๐Ÿ˜Š feeling ๐Ÿ˜ณ now

Wow Arjun gave a Cute surprise to would be wifey .,...he actually praposed her ,,,,,,,,,Thats So fantastic ...Awee ,,,,,,,,,,,he is a Sweet heart ๐Ÿ˜ƒ loved last part the most ๐Ÿ‘ Specially the way he express his feeelings & Arohi too confessed ...LOVED IT ๐Ÿ‘  yup he did n glad to hear u found the scene lovable

the last kiss was absolute โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ awww

Amazing dear ...U Rocked ...Thnx for Pm otherwise would have miss this amazing Os ๐Ÿ˜Š ll bug with my pm always๐Ÿ˜†

Best Luck for your exams ...Lol exams ke stress mein aisa likhti ho toh baki time toh kamaal karti hongi ap ๐Ÿ˜›  ROFL๐Ÿคฃ

Best Luck dear ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ...Rock it ๐Ÿ˜Š aww dear a big ๐Ÿค—

Love
Pranjal. <3
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by mansi_47


shona phool even i can rite it i can copy paste it
bt yeah bakwas talent cums to me from my heart mind and soul soo i can rtie it twice bt u can stil copy  paste it  ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
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madam I can also write from heart๐Ÿ˜†
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by luv_karankri.


most fav scene i luv bold/witty ans from Arjun :-*

kamina admni, janbaar'" her voice lost finding Arjun
inches away from her face. Arjun with a stern face "bol
diya, aab mein bolu??" Arohi finding her voice again
"nehi, tumhari himmat kaise hui mere kamre mein
ane ki wo bhi bina knock kiye" Arjun with smirk
"wrong, Arjun Singhania ko kisi cheez ki permission ke
jaroorat nehi hoti and for your kind information this is
my room" Arohi with a smile "haan tumhara room",
she paused "tha par aab mera hai, so you better stay
in your limits, warna"'she poked a finger in his chest.
Arjun in a serious tone "warna, warna kya Arohi??"
Arjun started to move forward and Arohi backwards.
Arohi only managed to say warna again when Arjun
turned her around and her back hit with his rock-male
chest'.Arjun's hands now on her bare stomach
holding her close to him. They could feel each other's
warmth which was creating havoc inside them. Arjun
pushed her a little but she was still in his hold'.he
moved his hands to her dori but before tying it,
unknowingly his lips moved to her bare back, she was
one such flawless beauty, his lips started its work
which made Arohi moan in pleasure, he moved her
choli down and left her shoulders with shower of
kisses. Arjun's dangerous action made her mind
clouded with wild thoughts, she gasped when he gave
her a bite, hearing a loud sound from her mouth made
Arjun stop; he quickly tied her dori but didn't leave it
before caressing her back seductively. Arohi instantly
moved back from him and hit with the giant wardrobe
behind, so Arjun followed her and stand with close
proximity between them. Arjun whispered near her
ear "warna kya Arohi?? Tumne bataya nehi" Arohi was
blushing hard and on top of that their closeness was
creating butterflies in her stomach. Arjun came close
to her face and left a smooth kiss on the neck. Arohi
gasped for air, a shiver ran down her when he touched
her so soothingly. Arjun moved away from her and
started to walk back to the door when Arohi said "good
thing you didn't kiss me on my lips, because only
boyfriends or husbands have the right to do that".
Arjun smirked on her remark and start walking again.
Arohi thought she won this time but Arjun stopped
right in front of the door, without turning "sehi kaha
Arohi, only boyfrineds or husbands got the right, well
in that case I'm lucky" mockingly "kyunki tumahri
future husband mein hi hoon" Arjun enjoying each and
every single words "about your lips'give them some
rest kyunki aajke baad they'll be always swallowed,
aur tumhari soon to be husband sirf lips pe nehi, woh
kaha kaha kiss kaar sakta hai tumhe andaza bhi nahi
hai, "one
more advise, tumne kaha than na mein janzbaar hoon,
sehi kaha kyunki shaadi ke baad mein apni wife ke
saath kaisi janbaaro jaisi harkaat karne wala hoon
you'll see then"

komolika n ravan,proposal n the kiss <3 all jus fab
want more OS n u hv Xams X( All the best 4 rest n mahi u too :-)
this is the one of the best OS :-D


Muaah sweetheart for ur precious words!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by pinky.padda


very cute and romantic


thanx Pinky๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by kkian


i seriously neeed  a part 2 of this os!!! oh ho no more ouch...gave u Mr. Besharam Singhania๐Ÿ˜‰
 
this was mind blowing!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ thanx
 
loved jhagralu arjuhi๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ me too love them๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
thier characters were like arjuhi2 aww thanx for saying that...but their magic was smth no one create๐Ÿ˜Š
 
the BOLD dailogue by arjun made me โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ me๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
i think exams k time padai k alawa sab jagah dimag tez chalta hai๐Ÿ˜† hahhahaa๐Ÿคฃ...don't wrry padhai bhi sehi chalta hai๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
keep it upโญ๏ธ thanx loadsโค๏ธ
 
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by -vrshn-


You know Shona, I LOVE EXAMS!! hhehehhe I know exactly why๐Ÿ˜‰...naughty naughty๐Ÿ˜†

Afterall it gives us so many Awesome-Stories!! :D :D so true๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by soni4eva


Wow beautiful os luvd it x


thank u so much Soni๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by mansi_47


resv wil edit whn im home...! :)

And shona...ncdeidfnehsujckhbhwyeysl

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*edited*

Wow...jahgrte lovers ha ha..! Had me cracked how they fight lyk small childern and how even whn they luved each other...they didnt confess..! Omg awesome story shona ! cute one...! And janglii billi he he ...!
Perfecto...how it ended...! Luv it...!


muaah Paari...
thanx for every single sweet word...
u no more jhagra...more love๐Ÿ˜‰

Edited by Angel.KMH.AK - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by cool_SK


sooo loved this OS shona...
so different and so loving...it was really funny to see them calling eachother with names...๐Ÿคฃ
oye hoye...the room temp increases with that jalaoo bhalaooo scene betweeen aru n arjun...sooo hawttt!!!!!!!!!!!
and the proposal and kiss...so dreamy๐Ÿ˜

hayeee.

loved ittt


Ana I love how u use words to describe when it comes to romantic scenes...yeah they r two fighter but in love๐Ÿ˜ณ...made me feel happy u loved it so much...๐Ÿค—

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