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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Angel.KMH.AK


HAHA THT  eid was my mistake

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this is wht i was riting 🤣🤣🤣
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by mansi_47


HAHA THT  eid was my mistake

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this is wht i was riting 🤣🤣🤣


LOL u just changed it Mannu🤣🤣

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Angel.KMH.AK




LOL u just changed it Mannu🤣🤣

OFc i jst changed it how am i supposed to rite same crap twice??
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see lyk this

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by mansi_47


OFc i jst changed it how am i supposed to rite same crap twice??
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see lyk this

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ROFL I know right how u can write smth twice when u don't even know what u wrote🤣🤣 but I can exactly right what u wrote😆🤣

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Angel.KMH.AK





Hahahah!! His besharmi is rubbing off 😆
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by KaranKittu4eva




Hahahah!! His besharmi is rubbing off 😆


LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wah shona. I love u. Ur writng is amazng. Aftr a lng tym i found my jhagralu arjun in ur os. I kinda missng my ladaku arjuhi so much. Thanks for dis superb os.
Posted: 11 years ago
WOW 

This is Superrr Cuteee 

Thanks A ton dear ...Loved it to the Core :) 

I love the the start & the concept of Arrage marrage...Bith were getting married as their parents have selected them. Loved their Self talks ...Specially The galiyas  😆  😆  😆  😆  😆 It was Hillarious Shona :) Lol i am laughing my heart out when i read there self talks Specially Komolika & Ravan  😆 Amazing 👏 Fantastic concept. 

Lol they can Take the Jagdalu couple of the year Award 😉 Okk Sorry on a serious note I loved the way u discribed their Characters & feelings .,...Both Love Each others but didnt confessed it. Arohi's & state & her feelings were visible when she was discussing about arjun's close dance to other girls. Loved the teasing wala Convo between Shefali & Arohi 😆

Ohh ...la ...la the bedroom sence was Campletely amazing ☺️ full on blush blush part 😉 Finally arjun understood his feeling about arohi & couldnt stop himself. Arjun;s remark abt being Husband was Khatarnaak ...Awesomeness ki hadh yaar ...Loved it 😊

Wow Arjun gave a Cute surprise to would be wifey .,...he actually praposed her ,,,,,,,,,Thats So fantastic ...Awee ,,,,,,,,,,,he is a Sweet heart 😃 loved last part the most 👏 Specially the way he express his feeelings & Arohi too confessed ...LOVED IT 👏

the last kiss was absolute ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Amazing dear ...U Rocked ...Thnx for Pm otherwise would have miss this amazing Os 😊

Best Luck for your exams ...Lol exams ke stress mein aisa likhti ho toh baki time toh kamaal karti hongi ap 😛

Best Luck dear 👍🏼 ...Rock it 😊

Love
Pranjal.
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Angel.KMH.AK




ROFL I know right how u can write smth twice when u don't even know what u wrote🤣🤣 but I can exactly right what u wrote😆🤣

shona phool even i can rite it i can copy paste it
bt yeah bakwas talent cums to me from my heart mind and soul soo i can rtie it twice bt u can stil copy  paste it  🤣 🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
most fav scene i luv bold/witty ans from Arjun :-*

kamina admni, janbaar…" her voice lost finding Arjun
inches away from her face. Arjun with a stern face "bol
diya, aab mein bolu??" Arohi finding her voice again
"nehi, tumhari himmat kaise hui mere kamre mein
ane ki wo bhi bina knock kiye" Arjun with smirk
"wrong, Arjun Singhania ko kisi cheez ki permission ke
jaroorat nehi hoti and for your kind information this is
my room" Arohi with a smile "haan tumhara room",
she paused "tha par aab mera hai, so you better stay
in your limits, warna"…she poked a finger in his chest.
Arjun in a serious tone "warna, warna kya Arohi??"
Arjun started to move forward and Arohi backwards.
Arohi only managed to say warna again when Arjun
turned her around and her back hit with his rock-male
chest….Arjun's hands now on her bare stomach
holding her close to him. They could feel each other's
warmth which was creating havoc inside them. Arjun
pushed her a little but she was still in his hold….he
moved his hands to her dori but before tying it,
unknowingly his lips moved to her bare back, she was
one such flawless beauty, his lips started its work
which made Arohi moan in pleasure, he moved her
choli down and left her shoulders with shower of
kisses. Arjun's dangerous action made her mind
clouded with wild thoughts, she gasped when he gave
her a bite, hearing a loud sound from her mouth made
Arjun stop; he quickly tied her dori but didn't leave it
before caressing her back seductively. Arohi instantly
moved back from him and hit with the giant wardrobe
behind, so Arjun followed her and stand with close
proximity between them. Arjun whispered near her
ear "warna kya Arohi?? Tumne bataya nehi" Arohi was
blushing hard and on top of that their closeness was
creating butterflies in her stomach. Arjun came close
to her face and left a smooth kiss on the neck. Arohi
gasped for air, a shiver ran down her when he touched
her so soothingly. Arjun moved away from her and
started to walk back to the door when Arohi said "good
thing you didn't kiss me on my lips, because only
boyfriends or husbands have the right to do that".
Arjun smirked on her remark and start walking again.
Arohi thought she won this time but Arjun stopped
right in front of the door, without turning "sehi kaha
Arohi, only boyfrineds or husbands got the right, well
in that case I'm lucky" mockingly "kyunki tumahri
future husband mein hi hoon" Arjun enjoying each and
every single words "about your lips…give them some
rest kyunki aajke baad they'll be always swallowed,
aur tumhari soon to be husband sirf lips pe nehi, woh
kaha kaha kiss kaar sakta hai tumhe andaza bhi nahi
hai, "one
more advise, tumne kaha than na mein janzbaar hoon,
sehi kaha kyunki shaadi ke baad mein apni wife ke
saath kaisi janbaaro jaisi harkaat karne wala hoon
you'll see then"

komolika n ravan,proposal n the kiss <3 all jus fab
want more OS n u hv Xams X( All the best 4 rest n mahi u too :-)
this is the one of the best OS :-D

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