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Arhi FF: Teri Khair Pe Vaar Diya(Note,19,20 ) 22/1 (Page 88)

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged

Thank you so much for this maha update. I love every thing about this FF from the title to the way you write each chapter.

Chapter 19 presented the turmoil both of these lost souls have. They love each other but fail to trust and tell each other their feelings. Khushi always fears him and holds back, always wanting to do the right thing by everyone but herself.. Hopefully she will stop for the sake of her son and do what ever it takes to save him.

Arnav wants to believe her but his past always makes him cautious, I hope he can come around and just for once, just for Khushi and their sons sake let the past go and believe her to help her..

Chapter 20a

The journey in flashback is proof of all they have felt for each other, the love was always there but again either of then denied it, to even bring it to the surface. Khushi has been through so much since she was a child, never having anything or anyone to really call her own.. along came Arnav and finally a ray of hope but that was short-lived for her thanks to an evil man named Shyam but now at least she has her son who truly is her token of love and if only now Arnav would accept them both.

Chapter 20b.. Finally some truths are spoken giving them both food for thought.. Surely Arnav cannot still have doubts about Khushi involvement especially since she has told him that Anajli has copies of he will... I hope Anjali is stronger in your story and will support Khushi along with Nani and the rest of the family... Lav and NK are great...

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Read chapter 19 and reviewing...because you asked for a separate one :)...I do not understand why Khushi is still hesitating to tell the whole truth to Arnav, since it seems to be the only way she can save her son. Does she still plan to walk away after getting her son back? I do not mind her walking away, but she and Armaan will be at greater risk from Shyam if she stays alone. She must stay back with Arnav, just for her son's safety. And for that, she should tell him everything, whether he believes her or not.

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:44am | IP Logged
so the mystery unfolds...awesome...
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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Chapter 20 isbasically a recap of the Arnav-Khushi love story, and how badly Khushi was missing him when he got kidnapped... It was beautifully done...me missing the good old IPKKND days :(

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:53am | IP Logged
nice parts
finally khushi is telling truth to arnav
but then why she is hiding some facts from arnav
continue soon

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:57am | IP Logged
20B brought tears to my eyes, as every update of your does... wonder how you manage to make it so emotional every time you write. You are a genius at portraying emotions.

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:58am | IP Logged
great updates..

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Very emotional - loved it

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