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Arhi FF: Teri Khair Pe Vaar Diya(Note,19,20 ) 22/1 (Page 105)

greenMoss Senior Member
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Part 19-
I seriously pity Khushi..
My heart goes out for her..
Arnav cared to put the ointment.. Huh!
Khushi's relation with her closed ones and her life since she became an orphan was very,very nicely written.. It is so heartfelt.

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Part 20A-
The flashbook was perfect to the T!
It reminded me of those episodes of the show in July'12.
Khushi's longing and realization of the unbridled love for Arnav is so sweet to read!
The songs were very,very apt-every word of the songs exactly meant what she felt.. And that 'Nafrat-wala-Rishta-which-has-something-more-to-it' is my one of the favourite monologues which you used.
The ambience of moon-lit poolside which held a multitude of memories was perfect for Khushi's state of mind at that time!
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Part 20B-
Once a Moron,always a Moron.. well I'm talking about Arnav.
I can't believe that the guy who claims to be having a Very Fertile Dimaag, can be so,so Horribly Blunt! I don't wish to say anything about this Hopeless Hunk..err I mean Hopeless Moron. Period.
.. Thank God,Khushi decided to come out of her "Always-Keep-Mum-When-Arnavji-Asks-About-The-Truth" habit and was letting out a few secrets.
.. And again it was one of the well written chapters!
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged

Can't believe,seriously.. even after reading all the three wonderful chapters, I couldn't digest the fact that you thought about showering some love and posted Three chapters!
The emotions were excellently written.. One could easily feel Khushi's pain and suffering, Arnav's dilemma and the anxiousness of the family. .
.. I hope things will change for the better as Khushi revealed a lot of things to Arnav.. Khushi should be off-limits to Arnav (Arnav has a very bad tendency of taking her for granted).. He should redeem himself and make himself worthy of such a selfless soul
.. And I also wish that Armaan is safe- poor soul is caught up in the mess.
.. Thank you so much once again for the Maha-updates.
You know,you can always be this kind.. And give us this great updates.

Edited by greenMoss - 31 January 2013 at 10:00am
aayt IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
I have read ur ff in one go im really impressed  to ur work
it was funny at some point but very emotional roller costar  ride
can't wait for next part loved ur ff plz update soon
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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
All 3 were lovely updates
jhawaraayushi Groupbie
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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 8:24am | IP Logged
i hav been reading ur stories since long...bt nvr cmnted...
sryyy...
bt i jst luv ur story alooottt...
thnx fr pming me...
waiting fr ur updte...ClapSmile
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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Wow great job! Thanks for sending me a pm! I cannot wait to read arnav's reaction to the truth of both khushi and their son!! I feel it is going to be great!! Looking forward to arnav's love instead of anger. Continue soon!!

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