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Arhi FF: Teri Khair Pe Vaar Diya(Note,19,20 ) 22/1 (Page 105)

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Part 20A
Nice update...
Uurgh... This shyam... Ugh... I will kill him if someone else wont... Uurrghh...
Loved d way u wrote d flashback...
Also d poetic lines in between...
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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Part 20B
Superb...
Good that she told him all truth... Even abt anjali... Ofcourse he ought to know... Wen she saw him getting pale... She went & knelt before him & took his hands... Omg... Hw can she be soo selfless... Hw heart for that girl who loved that man withall her heart inspite of all hatred he showered upon her...
Uff... Arnav good that some realisation have started to sink on you... I was getting tired of ur stupid ego & stuborness...
But know ur nature... I still doubt you... U wont believe her even if she open her heart & show...urrgh...

Beautiful written... It evoked all emotions in me...
Hats off to you...
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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
J read the whole ff in a day
please pm me when you further update! :-)
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged
You were on a roll girl! I still can't believe it-
Three updates..
Together!!
Hayee..
Thank you so much for the Maha-updates..
All the chapters were beautifully written-so poignant and profound!
Khushi's motherly concern is heart-felt ("Hum kuch bhi kar sakte hai.. Kuch bhi")
The selection of songs were very much apt for the situations..
.. Another thing I extremely like about your writing is your flawless use of Shudh Hindi,used by Khushi.. It is so Khushi-like,makes me relate to the Khushi of the show.
Ch 20A was very much reminescent of the episodes of the show..
All the three updates were Awesome!

Edited by greenMoss - 31 January 2013 at 9:55am
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Part 19-
I seriously pity Khushi..
My heart goes out for her..
Arnav cared to put the ointment.. Huh!
Khushi's relation with her closed ones and her life since she became an orphan was very,very nicely written.. It is so heartfelt.
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Part 20A-
The flashbook was perfect to the T!
It reminded me of those episodes of the show in July'12.
Khushi's longing and realization of the unbridled love for Arnav is so sweet to read!
The songs were very,very apt-every word of the songs exactly meant what she felt.. And that 'Nafrat-wala-Rishta-which-has-something-more-to-it' is my one of the favourite monologues which you used.
The ambience of moon-lit poolside which held a multitude of memories was perfect for Khushi's state of mind at that time!
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Part 20B-
Once a Moron,always a Moron.. well I'm talking about Arnav.
I can't believe that the guy who claims to be having a Very Fertile Dimaag, can be so,so Horribly Blunt! I don't wish to say anything about this Hopeless Hunk..err I mean Hopeless Moron. Period.
.. Thank God,Khushi decided to come out of her "Always-Keep-Mum-When-Arnavji-Asks-About-The-Truth" habit and was letting out a few secrets.
.. And again it was one of the well written chapters!
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged

Can't believe,seriously.. even after reading all the three wonderful chapters, I couldn't digest the fact that you thought about showering some love and posted Three chapters!
The emotions were excellently written.. One could easily feel Khushi's pain and suffering, Arnav's dilemma and the anxiousness of the family. .
.. I hope things will change for the better as Khushi revealed a lot of things to Arnav.. Khushi should be off-limits to Arnav (Arnav has a very bad tendency of taking her for granted).. He should redeem himself and make himself worthy of such a selfless soul
.. And I also wish that Armaan is safe- poor soul is caught up in the mess.
.. Thank you so much once again for the Maha-updates.
You know,you can always be this kind.. And give us this great updates.

Edited by greenMoss - 31 January 2013 at 10:00am

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