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Arhi FF: Teri Khair Pe Vaar Diya(Note,19,20 ) 22/1

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Hey guys, I've been an active member on this forum ever since the show started.. I've read many amazing pieces of work by some very talented writers we have.. 

The current track, Barun gone, Arnav missing, Shyam getting creepier and a heart-broken Khushi have motivated me to begin writing a story based on Arhi..

Its my first one on this magical couple. Hope you guys like it.. Your comments and suggestions are always welcome..


                                          

                                                                                               
    
                                             


                                                    

Prologue: 

She fell on the floor clutching the phone close to her heart. No, this could not be happening. It couldn't be him.. After all these years.. But what if it was him? She needed to find out for herself..

She locked the door and took a step which she had vowed never to take. 'Devi Maiya, raksha karna'. Desperate times called for desperate measures.

Her head had started throbbing. A hundred thoughts were running through her head. Tears were waiting to escape her eyes. History was repeating itself.. But she knew, she had to be strong. For him, for herself, for them!

She boarded the next flight to Delhi. A place where her life had taken a somersault. A place which had given her happiness and pain. Happiness and pain had been done with, but memories remained etched in her heart.

A couple of hours later, she stood in front of a huge palatial residence. A mansion that had built by HIM, a house where HE lived, a home where she had dwelt with her loved ones, a paradise which held many memories, enough to cherish for a lifetime. A heaven she had left years ago, a hell she was returning to.. Shantivan!

She pushed open the majestic gates and sprinted towards the main door. All the while praying to her Devi Maiya, "humein shakti dena, aur unki raksha karna.. Unhe agar kuch ho gaya toh hum jee nahi payenge.."

She entered Raizada Mansion and banged the door.. Hariprakash ran to the door and was shocked to see her. . "Kh.. Khushi Bhabhi????"

She heard a pooja thali fall to the ground, chinaware crashing onto the floor and felt six pair of eyes staring at her. Three shocked, two surprised and one.. one pair of eyes baffled..

Avoiding their gaze, she looked around the house.. A wave of nostalgia hit her.. No.. no Khushi.. Now is not the time.. She gathered herself together, mustered enough courage to face him and yelled in a voice filled with murderous rage. A voice that would echo in this house for days to come..

'Shyam Manohar Jha.. Abhi issi waqt bahar niklo!!'

Phew.. How was it?? Did you guys like it?? Please leave your suggestions below..


Those of you who would like to be PMed, please send me a buddy request and I shall PM you when I update next.. Please press the LIKE button and leave your valuable feedback.. Take care and Keep falling in love!!

Page no. Index

Prologue: Page 1.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2983031

Chapter 1: Page 3. 
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2983
031&TPN=3

Chapter 2: Pg. 5

Chapter 3: Pg. 8

Chapter 6: Pg. 21

Chapter 8: Pg. 30

Chapter 10: Pg. 37

Chapter 11: Pg. 41

Chapter 12: Pg. 45

Note: Pg. 50 

Chapter 13: Pg. 50

Chapter 14: Pg. 56

Chapter 15: Pg. 61

Chapter 16: Pg. 69

Chapter 17: Pg. 77



NOTE: I do not own the characters.. My stories are my fantasies and are based on ideas derived from the show.. My works are only meant for members of IndiaForums and are not to be copied to other sites..

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Edited by mohabbatgirl - 22 January 2013 at 10:25am

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Please continue soon ...sounds interesting...i love any fiction where Khushi is in command!!

Btw, how many years later?
LOL on the pooja thaal falling!

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 3:26am | IP Logged
What happened
Is Arnav ok
Why is she shouting for Shyam
Update soon
Can you please add translations of the conversations please


Edited by Usma55 - 17 May 2012 at 3:36am

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
sounds amazing...

luved it...
update soon...
n plz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
awesome prologue,continue soon Tongue

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Please continue soon...Sounds Intriguing ;) PM when you update ...Thanks

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
WHYYY Did Khushi Come Back; What Did Shyam Do ?! Stern Smile

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sounds interesting, please pm me when u update

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