Posted: 11 years ago
frnds it is midnight...no almost morning.4.45 am.n i cant sleep😭 because of this virman os...hmmm so dis is my first one.i was never good in writing skills..so pardon me for mistakes n comment or like if u appreciate..ur comments matter because dis is my first tym. 😊 😳 πŸ˜‰


Chandigarh

Virat entered manvi's room. And saw that she picked up the remote n switched off the tv.n threw it on the pillow.she muttered something to herself.
M:stupid people.stupid movie.
Virat:kya hua hero bade gusse me ho?? Tv valo ne aisa kya dikha diya??
And he went n sat very close to her on the bed.now both facing the tv..both of them failed to notice they they were almost leaning over each other.manvi stared on the switched off tv..rather sadly.
M:virat,tv p anjaana anjaani mv aa rhi thee.
V:ohhh hn maine vo dekhi h..uski ending acchi lagi mujhe..
M:ohhh maine to aage dekhi hi nahi mera mood off ho gya..
V:kya hua partner?? 😭 hmmm mai samjah gaya..
M:hn partner vohi bt h.tm kaise samjhe????? πŸ˜• yaha mai zindagi jeena chahti hu to bhagwan mere sath hide n seek khel rahe h..problems khtm ho hi nahi rahi.n vo log itna accha sab hote hue bhi marne chale h.ppl dnt really consodrr life to be a blessing..
V:manvi grass is always green on the other side of the road..n manvi chaudhary..my hero kabse har maannne lagi.sahi kaha tha tmne bhai ko.bhagwan bhi tmhari bakbak nahi jhel paenge islie tm kahi door nahi jaogi.
With dis he had tears in his eyes...manvi looked into his eyes n noticed.
M: partner ye equation na thodi complicated h...
V:to ise solve kardo na.vaise bhi meri maths thodi weak h.hehhe
M:virat mai lad rahi hu cancer se...but pta nahi kyun chemo session accha hone k bd bhimujhe aisa lg raha h ki mai harti ja rhi hu isse.ofcourse I won't give up..but ye faith n facts k beech ki jung me mera chota sa dimag confuse ho gya h.my faith says I will survive n facts k according maybe I won't.
Sometimes I think abt wat wld be my last wish..but then I think ki abhi to di n jiju ke bete se bhi nahi mili..
V:bhai n bhabhi ka beta..nahi unki beti hoegi..mujhe baby girls pasand h..
M:nahi na beti to meri hoegi.di ko to beta hi hoga..
V:mujhe bhi beti hi chahiye..😳
And then he realised wat he said n smiled..actually blushed..
M:virat singh vadhera did u blush???aye hae meri heroine...
V acted like a heroine..hahha
M:chalo tv dekhe.she switched it on once again.

After some time..
M:partner...
V:hn bolo partner
M:mujhp gussa to nahi karoge??
V:kyun mujhe maarne vali ho?? Nahi fir mai tmh marunga..
M:nahi mai ye kehne wali hu ki kal shyd mera last bday ho..
Virat suddely kept fingers on her lips n his eyes filled up with tears..
M:isse accha to tm gussa hi ho jao..
V:tmh kaha h na humne aisi baate mt karo..tmh kuch nahi hoga.kuch nahi hone dunga mai.
And with thaat he hugged her..gave her a bear hug.
Manvi felt comfortablein his arms...
Virat then moved away n said:hmmm awkward...tmh bura to nahi lga??
M:nahi actually I felt good...I neede one right nw..
M:meri kuch wishes h...
Virat thot ohh I wld do anything to see a smile on ur face..
V: btao bandariya.he smirked.. πŸ˜‰

Should I continue????
Plz comment..
Posted: 11 years ago
do continue... i will like to read more
Posted: 11 years ago
nice yaar...liked it...πŸ‘πŸΌesp their convo on beta ya beti chahiye...
hope 2 gt such a convo in the show too...😳
well...plz do cont...n pm me wen ya update...😊
Posted: 11 years ago
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This was amazing! You should continue!
Edited by Veronica1504 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
wow dear loved it...πŸ‘πŸΌ
it was really awesome and lovely...πŸ‘
of course u must continue...😊

don't forget to PM me and thanks for the PM...πŸ€—


Posted: 11 years ago
@all
Thankyou for your appreciation..:-) 😊 it really means a lot.
Posted: 11 years ago
plz continue and pm me when u update
Posted: 11 years ago
Do continue ! Its sweet 😊 Do PM me
Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it do continue and please pm me thanx
Posted: 11 years ago
Yes! You need to continue,
but don't let her die please...

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