Originally posted by NinaArief
holy god, by the time i finished this is was on the edge of my chair.. it was wonderfully written, as of now im oficially in love with the trio.. yana - the perfect femminist never miss a chance to insult a guy hitting around, dyuti sees reason and garima well she's perfect.. am definitly looking forward to see the build up of teh story - so far so great!! ridaan looks like a charmer too.
regarding my comment about her being a soldier's widow - & correct me meghna and maggie if im wrong - its not that i missed that she was his fiance , i meant it as an emotional connection - the sense of loss, the people's reactions, the way i saw and read garima's feelings - . even the fact that darsh is guiding ridaan to garima - states that there was a connection , a strong bond between them, something that garima would miss, making her remorsefull. i felt she despaired in her loss hence my statement making her an almost widow.. purely in my opinion.
you nailed it where u described Yana
(Spoiler: she is gonna warn Ridaan off Garima
Honestly, I didn't expect anyone to see beyond the surface in case of Dyuti, not so soon at least. But then again, you did.
She is so much more then what meets the eye
. Garima... hmm... I'll rather let you discover as you read...
When I read the comment I thought that you meant the widow part as in literally...
Talking about Her bond with her fiancee... I wouldn't call her his widow even figuratively. Not because of lack of potency in thier relation but there's another reason. She loved him, undoubtedly, but what kind of love that was, you'd have to wait to find out.
I would refrain from saying much else, lest I spoil the story...
Ps: Thanks for the input
PPS: Sorry for not sending out the PMs, it just slipped my mind!