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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NinaArief

holy god, by the time i finished this is was on the edge of my chair.. it was wonderfully written, as of now im oficially in love with the trio.. yana - the perfect femminist never miss a chance to insult a guy hitting around, dyuti sees reason and garima well she's perfect.. am definitly looking forward to see the build up of teh story - so far so great!! ridaan looks like a charmer too.

regarding my comment about her being a soldier's widow - & correct me meghna and maggie if im wrong - its not that i missed that she was his fiance , i meant it as an emotional connection - the sense of loss, the people's reactions, the way i saw and read garima's feelings - . even the fact that darsh is guiding ridaan to garima - states that there was a connection , a strong bond between them, something that garima would miss, making her remorsefull. i felt she despaired in her loss hence my statement making her an almost widow..  purely in my opinion.
you nailed it where u described YanaLOL (Spoiler: she is gonna warn Ridaan off GarimaLOL)
Honestly, I didn't expect anyone to see beyond the surface in case of Dyuti, not so soon at least. But then again, you did.Big smile She is so much more then what meets the eyeSmile. Garima... hmm... I'll rather let you discover as you read...Big smile 
 
When I read the comment I thought that you meant the widow part as in literally...
Talking about Her bond with her fiancee... I wouldn't call her his widow even figuratively. Not because of lack of potency in thier relation but there's another reason. She loved him, undoubtedly, but what kind of love that was, you'd have to wait to find out.Smile 
 
I would refrain from saying much else, lest I spoil the story... LOL
 
Ps: Thanks for the input Big smile
 
PPS: Sorry for not sending out the PMs, it just slipped my mind!Embarrassed

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Posted: 20 May 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MeghnaA

Originally posted by NinaArief

holy god, by the time i finished this is was on the edge of my chair.. it was wonderfully written, as of now im oficially in love with the trio.. yana - the perfect femminist never miss a chance to insult a guy hitting around, dyuti sees reason and garima well she's perfect.. am definitly looking forward to see the build up of teh story - so far so great!! ridaan looks like a charmer too.

regarding my comment about her being a soldier's widow - & correct me meghna and maggie if im wrong - its not that i missed that she was his fiance , i meant it as an emotional connection - the sense of loss, the people's reactions, the way i saw and read garima's feelings - . even the fact that darsh is guiding ridaan to garima - states that there was a connection , a strong bond between them, something that garima would miss, making her remorsefull. i felt she despaired in her loss hence my statement making her an almost widow..  purely in my opinion.
you nailed it where u described YanaLOL (Spoiler: she is gonna warn Ridaan off GarimaLOL)
Honestly, I didn't expect anyone to see beyond the surface in case of Dyuti, not so soon at least. But then again, you did.Big smile She is so much more then what meets the eyeSmile. Garima... hmm... I'll rather let you discover as you read...Big smile 
 
When I read the comment I thought that you meant the widow part as in literally...
Talking about Her bond with her fiancee... I wouldn't call her his widow even figuratively. Not because of lack of potency in thier relation but there's another reason. She loved him, undoubtedly, but what kind of love that was, you'd have to wait to find out.Smile 
 
I would refrain from saying much else, lest I spoil the story... LOL
 
Ps: Thanks for the input Big smile
 
PPS: Sorry for not sending out the PMs, it just slipped my mind!Embarrassed


its ok aboutr teh PMs and thanks for the insight into the story,
just so i undersatnd author intentions, a lil bit detail about yourself please? Wink
im a very judgemental person , so i guess i picked up on dyuti..
and im quite eager for the continuation of this story.



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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 12:04am | IP Logged
This update has been a roller coaster. I got to see different persona, and loved each of them. While Darsh has been funny and irritating, there was an underlying concern he has for Ridaan (Just so as you know I love the name Ridaan). Ridaan and the bonding with his siblings seemed cute, his protective brotherly attitude towards Leo was likable. But, I liked Annie more. The perfect mother. I would love to see how this story unfolds. Keep up the good work Meghna and sorry for catching up so lateOuch
-Maggie


Edited by .Maggie. - 15 June 2012 at 12:05am

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