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And Spring Came

Hello girls (assuming the opposite gender ain't in the audience)Wink

So, I am Meghna and a big Hi there (a toothy grin). Big smile

Won't bore you with tedious and unnecessary gibberish (not so soon, lest you all would go scuttling and I'll be left with no audience at all), hence, hopping onto the main agenda: And Spring came; it's a story about loss, guilt, friendship(with humans and spirits! Yep, there is a ghost in there!), love... Life (Whose? Well, read on!)

I hope (Fingers crossedTongue), this won't bore you guys. If it does, please, don't hesitate to say so, Believe me, I don't and won't bite!Embarrassed

PS: this is not based on any specific show or telly couple.Ouch I have so many I like, I couldn't choose among them.(You see, I don't discriminate) LOL

 
 
 
Table of Contents
 
Prologue (scroll down)
 
Chapter One (scroll down)


Edited by MeghnaA - 10 December 2012 at 5:03am

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Edited by MeghnaA - 16 September 2012 at 5:13pm

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 2:55am | IP Logged

Hey Meghna,
I am not too familiar with formal introductions. But anyway this is Maggie here. That being said, I also want to say that I am looking forward for this story. I would like to read a non telly couple's story. Gives me the freedom to crib about the male lead you see. And about the Prologue, I liked it. So, Garima's fiance was in Indian Army and is no more. I wouldn't say I am so sorry about that, as that was something Garima wouldn't like. I like the girl already. She seems to share the same sentiments as of mine. It is funny how people who at first talked about his death as duty and all suddenly stopped talking about him. It is funny how people believe avoiding something would take it away from the mind. It wouldn't. I like Dyuti. The first words she uttered made me smile. Unexpected. She seems to be a cute one. Yana is nice and though I personally crib about group hugs, boy they do make us feel better sometimes. And Garima, she needed it now. Wooh! Is it me who talked so much in the first post itself? I surprised myself I must say. Anyway Keep me updated about this story and send me a Private message every time you update.

-Maggie

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hey meghna,
firstly i like your garima, not teh typical girl yet so femminine. and her bunch of friends , looking forward to how close and intense you make this story, now im hoooked girl. esp lloking forward to the road trip, bcz i just looove road trips..

secondly ,my formal intro - nina arief - 20 - die hard patriot (which is why i loved teh fact that garima is widow to a soldier who died a defending his country - just that first line brought tears to my eyes), currently residing in saudia.

could you pm me for further updates??
nina arief.


Edited by NinaArief - 18 May 2012 at 8:03pm

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Posted: 19 May 2012 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Hey Nina, I don't want to butt in, but I want to say something. Isn't it Garima's fiance who died? I re-read and observed it was her fiance not husband. SO, I don't think she is his widow. Sorry once again for butting in.
-Maggie


Edited by .Maggie. - 19 May 2012 at 8:25am

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Posted: 19 May 2012 at 8:31am | IP Logged
Maggie, you're right... It is Fiancee... she wasn't married...

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Edited by MeghnaA - 16 September 2012 at 5:12pm

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holy god, by the time i finished this is was on the edge of my chair.. it was wonderfully written, as of now im oficially in love with the trio.. yana - the perfect femminist never miss a chance to insult a guy hitting around, dyuti sees reason and garima well she's perfect.. am definitly looking forward to see the build up of teh story - so far so great!! ridaan looks like a charmer too.

regarding my comment about her being a soldier's widow - & correct me meghna and maggie if im wrong - its not that i missed that she was his fiance , i meant it as an emotional connection - the sense of loss, the people's reactions, the way i saw and read garima's feelings - . even the fact that darsh is guiding ridaan to garima - states that there was a connection , a strong bond between them, something that garima would miss, making her remorsefull. i felt she despaired in her loss hence my statement making her an almost widow..  purely in my opinion.

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