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ndjha Senior Member
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Posted: 28 June 2006 at 4:57am | IP Logged

hi guys hope u  all are liking it  pls do send in ur views

well here's the next part...................

the three guys are looking at nimmo........while nimmo is in her own thoughts ........thinking about kunal n saily............

the three guys -hey nimmo common lets dance........

N-sorry mera mood nahi hai ........u guys carry on

GUYS-hey common ........u cant say no ....

the guys start misbehaving wd nimmo  Angry.....Angry.AngryAngry

N-hey please leave me..........just go....leave me alone........leave

meanwhile kunal is searchin for nimmo n suddenly he saw the guys misbehavin wd nimmo

K-Angryhey what are u doing ....i said...leave her .....leave i say........n then kunu gives a tight punch.to the guys .............while all three of them hit him back...........kunu gets hurt but then he hits them back n they run away

N-kunal..........kunal are u alright..........kunal ??

K-yes nimmo i am ok but are u fine ?just then kunal sees that nimmo's hand is bleeding (actually she got heard while talking wd the guys )

N-kunal..... kunal chalo yahan se ...please chalo............

nimmo n kunal in there room .................

nimmo is crying alot Cry..Cry.CryCry.Cry.Cry..thinking about what could hv happened to her if kunal wouldn't have come

N-thanks kunal............. thanks alot...............agar aaj tum nahi aate to.............to.............pata nahi kya ho jata  n she cries.......(she is really disturbed emotionally)

K-nimmo its all right everything is fine now .............dont worry.....dont worry please.. n they both hug each other ............... while nimmo is still crying in his armsHug

K-nimmo dont cry .....its okay.........dont worry......... n he takes her to the bed n makes her sleep while he is still sitting near her head.... nimmo is really ....afraid n she sleeps holding kunals hand ...........

next day in the morning .....................nimmo gets up n again she thanks kunal  n they decide that they are going to india wd the next flight

just then vik knocks the room

K-come in.....oh vik .......tum .........aao baitho.............

N-ruko yahan aane ki himmat bhi mat karna kal tum kahan chale gaye the??? tumhe sharam nahin aayi tum mujhe un teen lafango ke saath akele choddkar chale gaye................agar kunal nahi aata to..........get out

V-par nimmo listen to me........

N-i said leave ...........leave this room now

K-nimmo woh mujhe pata nahin tha ki.................

N-it's ok kunal.......lets go now

they are about to leave ..........on the reception nimmo see's saily..............

what next............

what will kunal do?............

will nimmo help kunal to get closer to his girlfriend......

all that n more in the next part.........

good bye for now !!!!!!!!!!Smile

kamna Goldie
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Posted: 28 June 2006 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
lovely part plz continue soon
ndjha Senior Member
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Posted: 28 June 2006 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
hey guys did u kie it !!!!! or shud i stop here itself pls suggest
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Posted: 30 June 2006 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Excellent. Cant wait for next. Continue soon.
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Posted: 30 June 2006 at 6:26am | IP Logged
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continue soon Smile
kuch_kuch Senior Member
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Posted: 30 June 2006 at 6:36am | IP Logged
hi!im new but i read ur story.its just amazin.i luv kunu and nimoo is so sweet.plz nidhi im very keen 2 know wat happens next. Wink
sweet_shagun IF-Veteran Member
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Posted: 30 June 2006 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Nidhi honey thts awsome waiting for the next part plzz continue soon-ur one of the talented wrtiers,Keep it up


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