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FANFIC-YEH KAISA DEEWANAPAN HAI-PG 21UPDT (Page 8)

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Posted: 30 June 2006 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Nidhi honey thts awsome waiting for the next part plzz continue soon-ur one of the talented wrtiers,Keep it up


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Posted: 30 June 2006 at 8:12am | IP Logged

hi all.......

here's the next part......

kunal looks at saily..... while nimmo is lookin at kunu......

K-actually saily woh kya hai naa ki mujhe aur nimmo ko kuch jaroori kaam ki wajah se ...........abhi india jaana hai  to im really sorry but i hv to leave......... but i think we will meet.in mumbai whenever u are back...

s-its ok kunal (both of them continue to look at each other while nimmo is feeling more jealous about everything )

N-kunal lets go..... hamari flight ka time ho raha hai.....

K-haan ....lets leave.......

on the airport .....

K-(hurriedly)nimmo tum yeh pakdo main abhi aata hoon..........

N-are par tum jaa kahan rahe ho?

K-stupid itna to samjho ki itni jaldi mein koi kahan jaata hai.....

nimmo smiles

kunal n nimmo hv reached the sehgal house ....... everyone is shocked

dadaji-are kunal tum itni jaldi kaise aa gaye ?????

K-dadaji woh actually hamein aap sabb ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi naa is liye

D-koi baat nahi tum dono thak gaye hoge jaao jaa ke aaram kar lo

kunal n nimmo come to the room.................

nimmo remembers her first entry in the room n then the things that happend in mauritius n  then kunal loving saily ...........she has tears in her eyes ........

K-what happend nimmo, main subah se dekh raha hoon ki tum thodi upset ho........ jo kuch bhi hua woh.................bhul jaao

N-nahin kunal its not that.........woh to bas aise hi.......

(romantic scene)

K-oh god ab main kya karoon taki tum khush raho ........

N-tumhe kuch karne ki jaroorat nahi hai im just fine..........

suddenly kunal loos deeply into nimmo's eyes.........he holds her hand  n says .........nimmo mana ki hamari shadi jhoothi hai par we are fiends naa.......tum mujhe apni problems bata sakti ho ........i will try my best to help you

nimmo gets really emotional n hugs kunal n holds him tightly................Hugeven kunal hugs her n both of them feel something strange................. kunal for the first time is feeling about how much nimmo is in need if kunal.......while nimmo is just crying a lot holding kunalCry ...........

and then suddenly they are apart...........

N-i m sorry kunal ......... i know u dont like it ......... im really sorry

K-no....... nimmo its alright u ........u just calm down dont worry im always there wd u

has kunu realised his feelings for nimmo .............

what is nimmo up to now........

all this n more watchout for the next part...............

bye for now.................

nidhi.........

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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 1:37am | IP Logged
dat was rely gud Clap please cont soon!!!!!
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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 2:10am | IP Logged
rocking, too good

Lovely part yet again Plzz continue soon

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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 9:51am | IP Logged
red oh my god u r xcellent and going more well then ekta.if u have bee n the storyriter of nimmo....plz cont.ur frend forever
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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 9:54am | IP Logged
awesome.continue soon
ndjha Senior Member
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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
sorry guys will try to post the next part soon
a bit busy.......
still i'll try..to post it today

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