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Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:55am | IP Logged

sorry guys but i was not well so cudn't write soon

nimmo is searchin kunal everywhere n she's a bit surprised what happened to kunal suddenly n why is he behavin like that

nimmo-pata nahi yeh kunal kahan chala gaya ? yeh bhi na ,lagta hai ise mujhe pareshan karne mein mazaa aata hai Confused

vik-don't worry use koi kam yaad aa gaya hoga .chalo hum shoppin karte hain

n-are u mad agar woh kisi musibat mein hua to aur mujhe abhi shoppin nahin karni .shoppin mere liye kunal se jyada imp nahin hai

v-its ok hum use dhoondhne ki koshish karte hain

they try to search him everywhere but cudn't find n come back to the hotel

n to the receptionist-xcuse me did u see kunal sehgal mmmm my husband

receptionist-yeah mam woh shayad kuch upset the aur bar ki taraf gaye hain

nimmo imidiately rushes to the bar n finds kunal drunk like hell N- kunal what happened ?tum kahan chale gaye the ?jante ho i was sooo. worried for u ? how irressponsible u are ?

K- kya main irresponsible kabhi tumne socha hai ki shoppin karne hum gaye the .hum..na ki tum aur main .aur tum mujhe akela chhoddkar kahan chali gayi thi hun.......?

nimmo also gets angry n she's actually surprised by his strange behaviour  she picks up k's glass n also gets drunk finally vik leaves them in there room n gives an evil smileEvil Smile  nimmo n kunal in their room N  -u are so rude tumne mujhe sab ke saamne kyun data ?

K- im sorry nimmopar tum bhi to vik ke saath jane kahan chali gayi mujhe akela chodd kar .

both cry like babies n finally Cry they wipe each others tears n hug each otherHug

then they both look at each other's face n suddenly nimmo realises what is she doin n tris to go away frm kunal but she again falls n then both sleep on the sofa itself

in the morning nimmo finds herself sleepin almost over kunal in his arms n starts looking at kunals faceTongueSmileHeart

N(thinkin)-waise kunal itna bura bhi nahin hai .he is so humble n carin but usne kal mujhe aur vik ko lekar aise react kyun kiya ?

kunal wakes up n finds nimmo in his arms lukin at him even he stares at her k(thinkin)-mujhe kal use sab k saamne nahin daatna chahiye tha  waise she is luking so beautiful these days EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

suddenly then kunal says-im sorry nimmo woh main kal...

n-no kunal im sorry

suddenly they realise there position n nimmo tries to get up but again falls over kunal then somehow she manages to get up EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

are nimmo n kunal fallin in love?

what is vik's intention over doin all this?

watch out for more

pls tell me ur comments over this

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Posted: 07 June 2006 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 07 June 2006 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
it's fantabulous Embarrassed .
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Posted: 08 June 2006 at 1:34am | IP Logged
plz continue soon!! Big smile
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Posted: 08 June 2006 at 7:33am | IP Logged
please continue soon,loved it, and plz take care of urself,u all r amazing[ all the ppl who write the fan fic]
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ndjha Senior Member
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Posted: 09 June 2006 at 1:47am | IP Logged
sorry guys i wont be able to continue the fanfic for a day or two more as i had a severe migraine attack yesterday n im not allowed to be on the pc for a longer time once again sorry Confused
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Posted: 09 June 2006 at 2:30am | IP Logged
hey plz take care dear, we can wait, dont comprimise on ur health honey get well soon

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