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ndjha

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Posted: 03 June 2006 at 5:39am | IP Logged

HI guys this is nidhi n i m new to this forum its the first time im writin a fanfic pls comment n tell me if u like it n should i continue or not

kunal-a dashin young guy

nimmo-his not so happy wedded wife

scene -they are on there honeymoon

kunal and nimmo are as usual not happy with each other but still hv to go on a honeymoon coz of kunal's dadaji

kunal n nimmo in there hotel room

k-hey nimmo maine hotel ke disco mein ek party rakhi hai kya tum mere saath aa rahi ho ?

n-meri majboori hai pata nahi shayad yaha bhi koi hamara peechha kar raha ho oh god !Confusedyeh musibat kab khatm hogi

k-so get ready fast (oh i forgot to tell u kunals sisters hv given a nice makover to nimmo n now she's wearin a nice mini skirt with a sweet red top although kunal is impressed but he doesn't reveal it )

n-im ready kunal chalein?

kunal leaves nimmo at the bar n goes along with his other friends on the dance floor . after sometime he returns n finds nimmo gettin bored he was about to say somethin when a cool dashin young guy comes frm behind n says-hi nimmo what a pleasant surprise!!

they both hug each other n then he kisses nimmo on her cheek

kunal is shocked at this n then nimmo turns towards him

n-hey kunal this is vik(vikrant)my college friend well we were best friends n vik this is kunal my hubby

v-hey  tumne shaadi karli aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi

n-mujhe khud pata nahi tha ki main shadi kar rahi hoon

v-tumne kuch kaha

n-nahi bas aise hi

n then vik said hey nimmo lets dance

n-ok lets go

kunal looks at nimmo n vik he is very jealous n thinks kitna chipak rahe hain jaise fevicol ka jod ho ,kaise has rahi hai,itna to yeh kanta ben ke jokes par bhi nahi hasti meanwhile he drinks a lot  kunal is fully drunk .after sometime he sees nimmo returnin back

n-what happened kunal? why did u drink so much

k-woh tum....vik.....

n-vik lagta hai ise bahut chadh gayi hai main ise room tak chhodd ke ati hoon

v-ok i'll wait for u

n carries kunal to the room kunal holds nimmos hand n says -nimmo u know what u are really beautiful.nimmo blushesEmbarrassed

but nimmo dont leave me alone i really need u just then nimmo's cell rings n its vik

v-hey nimmo where are u im waitin

n-vik woh actually

k-(murmuring)nimmo i really need u dont leave me alone please!!!!

what will nimmo do will she go leavin kunal or will she say vik that she's not comin watch out

please tell me3 how it is n shud i continue or not



Edited by ndjha - 27 July 2006 at 5:56am

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its cool..continue soon Big smile Big smile Clap
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good job continue soon

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Posted: 03 June 2006 at 6:49am | IP Logged
wow plz conti Tongue unue

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Posted: 03 June 2006 at 6:55am | IP Logged
pl write next part it very nice

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Posted: 03 June 2006 at 6:58am | IP Logged
cute story Nidhi, welcome to this forum, please continue soon............. Smile

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very gud yaar u should rote more

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