SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142 - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
"Phew" is my reaction...😊 I actually liked the whole bit where kria was hugging her son and crying and the way u described what Sharon was going through was beautiful. Eagerly waiting for next update now thnx for the PM.
Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly thanks for showing some mercy and updating so soon..was going mad..thinking about different scenarios, of what would have happened. 
Now coming to the second update, loved how you metaphorically show the pain in Sharon's life.
what u wrote about "losing someone or something which was yours" is damm painful. ðŸ˜­
but then again you left us on a bad cliffhanger..What did Rey do to have caused such a big havoc in 4 of there lives.  
Nicely done. Thanks for the PM.

Posted: 11 years ago
KRIYAM gosh so unexpected they are like brothers and sisters to me and hope he is there not as her husband but as a friend and thanks for the pm i loved the ff so far and especially the memories
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by AmritaluvSwaRon


"Phew" is my reaction...😊 I actually liked the whole bit where kria was hugging her son and crying and the way u described what Sharon was going through was beautiful. Eagerly waiting for next update now thnx for the PM.
lol "phew" is my reaction tooo...thank god u liked this part...and thank you for the comment.
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by sudku


Firstly thanks for showing some mercy and updating so soon..was going mad..thinking about different scenarios, of what would have happened. 
Now coming to the second update, loved how you metaphorically show the pain in Sharon's life.
what u wrote about "losing someone or something which was yours" is damm painful. ðŸ˜­...ohh thank god u liked that part wrote it in such haste didn't even read it again was wondering how it came out.
but then again you left us on a bad cliffhanger..What did Rey do to have caused such a big havoc in 4 of there lives.  ...ahhh now you have to wait ab itni jaldi update nahin hona...lol😆
Nicely done. Thanks for the PM.


thanks so much for the comment.
Posted: 11 years ago
sorry but i didnt like this at all...As i am a SWARON FAN i dont want to even think  this way...that wud be disgusting from my side...should i say i will be unfair...And suspense, twists and stories ...i was interested but not like this...i always loved your posts...i was so happy to see ur post today again...but utterly disappointed...Swayam ka bacchaa with kria...how can you do this???...u cud have tried this bit with BALAJI serials couple not with SWARON...

And one more thing jaa jaakey u have got kria hi kya???? It wud be PAAP for me as a matter of fact for everone to imagine like that...
Edited by luvSwaron4ever - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Honestly speaking i am still numbed by this FF of yours. After reading the first chapter i thought is it the same Baz who had given us the most hottest swaron OS ever. How could you make Swayam and Kriya married ?I was too shocked to say anything.

And then come the second chapter. It brought a little consolation but still this story looks one hell of a ride. Mystery is deepening . Waiting eagerly for the next update. I know this FF of yours will be one heavy dose of emotions but still intrigued to know what will happen and what had happened?
Edited by marauder - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by luvSwaron4ever


sorry but i didnt like this at all...As i am a SWARON FAN i dont want to even think  this way...that wud be disgusting from my side...should i say i will be unfair...And suspense, twists and stories ...i was interested but not like this...i always loved your posts...thank you😊...i was so happy to see ur post today again...but utterly disappointed...Swayam ka bacchaa with kria...how can you do this???...u cud have tried this bit with BALAJI serials couple not with SWARON...

And one more thing jaa jaakey u have got kria hi kya???? It wud be PAAP for me as a matter of fact for everone to imagine like that...

lol dear have you read the second part???...please read it and then say the high lighted stuff.
Posted: 11 years ago
THE BEST CLIFFHANGER...EVER!!!!! I am in love with your FF! Please please continue soon! In the first chapter itself you totally nailed it. And the introduction was very profound! I liked it!
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Sawyer_Tom


THE BEST CLIFFHANGER...EVER!!!!! I am in love with your FF! Please please continue soon! In the first chapter itself you totally nailed it. And the introduction was very profound! I liked it!
thank you so much dear...u r the first one to say this and i am happy that u r willing to give the story line a chance.

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