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Hey guys I was getting bored so I've
decided to write this FF. Please do read and give me your suggestions.


This FF is about two Best Friends
Prem and Heer and discovers thier new relationship together i.e. "LOVE"


Sorry for the grammer mistakes

(credit goes to meEmbarrassed)






Maan Family:-



Balraj
Maan
:
He is a businessman. He is a down to earth person. He loves his wife and his two darling daughters a lot.



Teji
Maan:
Wife
of Balraj maan. She is an idol wife and mother. She loves her family a lot.



Heer Maan: Elder daughter of
Balraj and Teji Maan. She is doing B.com final year. She is very sweet, caring
and fun loving girl who loves to live happy in her life. She loves her younger
sister a lot.



Meher
Maan:

She is a younger daughter of Balraj and Teji Maan. Pampered by all her family
members especially by Heer. She loves her Di a lot. She is doing BA first year.



Juneja Family:-



Lalit
Juneja:

He is also a businessman. Best Friend of Balraj Maan. He is father of three
children, happily married to Gayatri his wife. He loves his family and he admires
his elder son Prem a lot.



Gayatri
Juneja:
Wife
of Lalit Juneja. A caring wife and mother who can do anything for her family especially
for Prem.



Kulraj
Rathore:

Eldest daughter of Juneja Family, happily married to Kiran Rathore. She has
three years old son Aryan.



Kiran
Rathore:
Son-in-law
of Juneja Family. He is doing is small business. Respect his Father-in-law and
Mother-in-law a lot. He is also a fun loving person.



Prem
Juneja:
Hayee'.
All I can say about him is he is the best son and brother. He is an apple of
everyone's eyes. He is a fun loving, caring and charming person. Just now he
had join his family business after completing his studies. He loves his younger
brother preet. And the last but not the least BEST FRIEND OF HEER MAAN.



Preet
Juneja:
The
biggest prankster in the world''spoiled by his elder brother Prem. He loves to
tease his father. And loves his PB very much and can do anything for him.



Others:-



Kunnal: Common friend of Prem
and Heer. His family is close to Premeer's family. He is such a naughty person
who loves to trouble other and Preet and Meher both are his crime partners.



Sanjana
Rampal:

She is also common friend of Prem and Heer. And she had a huge crush on Prem.



Rishab
Rampal:

The elder brother of Sanjana. Also friend of Prem (not that much close) and he
likes heer a lot.


Ashlesha
and Misha:
College friends of Heer. They always help her in all situations.






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precap on pg 2- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&PID=57107622&#57107622

chapter-2 on pg 3- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=3

chapter-3 on pg 5- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=5

precap on pg 7- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=7

chapter-4 on pg 8- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=8

chapter-5 on pg 10- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=10

chapter-6 on pg 12- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=12

precap on pg 14- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=14

chapter-7 on pg 14- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=14

chapter-8 on pg 18- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=18

precap on pg 21- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=21

chapter-9 on pg 21- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=21

chapter-10 on pg 26- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=26

precap on pg 28- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=28

chapter-11 on pg 29- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=29

chapter-12 on pg 36- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=36

chapter-13 on pg 42- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=42

chapter-14 on pg 45- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=45

chapter-15 on pg 48- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=48

chapter-16 on pg 53- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=53

chapter-17 on pg 57- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=57

Precap on pg 63- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=63

chapter-18 on pg 66- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=66

chapter-19 on pg 73- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=73

chapter-20 on pg 77- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=77

chapter-21 on pg 80- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=80

precap on pg 82- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=82

chapter-22 on pg 84- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=84

chapter-23 on pg 88- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=88

chapter-24 on pg 94- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=94

chapter-25 on pg 97- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=97

chapter-26 on pg 101- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&PID=73182174&#73182174

Precap on pg 106-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&PID=75853680&#75853680 

Chapter-27 on pg 111- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&PID=76860551&#76860551

chapter-28 on pg 114- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&TPN=114&#77277727

chapter-29 on pg 118- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&PID=79101520&#79101520

Chapter-30 on pg 122:- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&PID=80472027&#80472027

Chapter-31 on pg 131:- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2973117&PID=82801670&#82801670

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 3:56am | IP Logged

Chapter-1


 

Note:- 1) Maan Family lives in "Maan Villa" and Juneja Family lives in "Juneja Mansion"

         2) Both families are really close

         3) And Kulraj and Kiran lives in Juneja Mansion

-> In Maan Villa

(Balraj Maan is sitting in drawing room in his business suit reading news paper.)

Balraj: Teji'..Teji mera breakfast kahan hai. Muje office ke liya late ho raha hai.

Teji: Arre han baba la rahi hun sabar rakho thorda sa

(She said coming running from kitchen holding the breakfast tray in her hand)

Teji: yeh lijiye apka nashta.

Balraj: han lao lao bohot bhook lagi hai.

(Balraj started eating his breakfast, then suddenly he wondered why there is so much peace in the house and ask his wife)

Balraj: Arre Teji aj ghar mein itni shanty kyun hai Heer or Meher  kahan hai, abhi tak uthe nhi hai kya. College nahi jana kya un dono ko?

Just then'''

"Good Morning Maa", "Good Morning papa" Meher greeted her parents happily.

Teji: Ye lo shaitan ka naam liya or shaitan hazir.

(Teji laughed and Meher pouted. Seeing her daughter's face expression Balraj also laughed and greeted her daughter back)

Balraj: Good Morning mera bacha

(He said while kissing  her on her forehead. Meher gave teasing smile to her mother and teji showed her fake angered face and again laughed)

(Then Balraj ask Meher)

Balraj: Meher tumhari Di kahan hai? Uthi nahi abhi tak?

(Before Meher can answer to his question, Balraj turned his face towards his wife and ask her)

Balraj (worriedly): Teji Heer ki tabyait to thik haina. Kal raat wo der tak pardai kar rahi thi. Usse bukhar to nahi hua na. Mae jaake dekhta hun.

Teji: Ap pehle shant ho jaiye. Ap chinta mat ki jiye apki ladli bilkul thik hai, use koi bukhar nahi hua hai. Apko to pata haina ki Heer ke final semesters chal rahe hain aur aj uska last exam hai, isiliye wo kal der raat tak pard rahi thi. Aur aj subha mae uske room mein gait hi to wo so rahi thi. Isiliye a bap shanty se nashta kijiye.

Balraj (again worriedly): Han Teji wo to thik hai par abhi 9.30 baj rahe hai or Heer ka exam 10.30 baje tak shuru ho jata hai, aur''..

(But Meher interrupt in middle)

Meher: offo papa ap bhi na, phir bhul gaye aj di ka computer practicle exam hai, jo ki second shift mein hoga yaniki dopeher ke 1.30 baje. Kal hi to Di ne bataya tha bhul gaye.

Balraj (embarresly): Arre han Heer ne bataya to tha. Mae to bhul hi gaya tha.

Teji: Dekha'.isiliye mae kehti hun ki raat ke khanna khane ke baad so jaiya kariye kyunki subha apko office jaldi jana hota hai. Lekin nahi ap meri sunte hi kahan hai, der raat tak bas cricket match dekhte rahete hai. Aur need poori na hone ki waje se ap din bar din bhulakar hote ja rahe hai.

Balraj (impatiently): Arre ab tum mere cricket match ko beech mein kyun la rahi ho.

Teji: Aur nahi to kya. Is cricket match ki waje se na to apko ghar ka hosh hai or na hi apni sehat ka, yahan tak ki apni dawaiyan bhi lena bhul jate hai.

Balraj: Dekho Teji tum'..

(Before they can continue their fight, Meher interrupted)

Meher: Ok ok ma-papa please a bap dono subha subha shuru mat ho jaiye. Ap logo ki awaz sun kar Di uth jayengi.

Teji: Dekha ap kitna jhagarh karte hai mujhse. Agar apki awaz sunkar Heer uth jati to.

Balraj (shocked): Kya! Meri awz se. Maine jhagara shuru kiya!

Meher: Acha acha ab bus! Papa mae college ke late ho rahi hun, ap please muje mere college drop kar dijiye please,please.please.

Balraj: Han chalo. Aur waise bhi agar mae yahan tumhari ma ke sath behas karne laga na to poora din yahin beet jayega

(He murmured into Meher's ear and Meher giggled)

Teji: Kuch kaha apne?

Balraj: Umm.. Nahi to. Chalo Meher mae tumhe drop kar deta hun.

Teji: Acha suniye aj yad se lalit bhaisab ko phone kar dijiyega. Yad haina aj unki family ko dinner pe invite karna hai, ya yeh bhi bhul gae.

Balraj: Han han yad hai muje.

Meher: Oh no! iska matlab wo idiot Preet bhi aayega, Shit yar!

Teji: Dekh Meher agar aj tune koi shaitani kin a to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

(She warned Meher)

Meher: Ma mae kuch nahi karti. Wo Preet hi muje pareshan karta rehta hai.

Teji: Meher tali kabhi bhi ek haath se nahi bajti hai. Bus maine keh diya na, teri taraf se koi problem nahi honi chahiye.

Meher: Ok ma. Pata nahi uss preet ne app e kya jadu kiya hua hai. Hmmm!

Balraj: Chale Meher. Ok bye Teji. Heer ko yad se utha dena time pe.

Meher: Bye ma

(Meher said while kissing on her mom's cheeks)

Teji: Bye beta.

(Balraj and Meher both leave)

Teji (to herself): Pehle ghar ka kaam khatam kar leti hun, phir jake Heer ko uthaoungi.

(Then she goes in the kitchen)

 

[Ok that was the first chapter. Please do read and leave comment] Tongue



Edited by kiran_28 - 15 December 2012 at 6:29am

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awesome concept
please add me in ur pm list
waiting for the update

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WOW u started a new ff... really nice..

first of all Congrats for ur new FF..

and i really loved the concept and the first part..

DO add me to your pm list

continue soon..

take care

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yaayyy...u started writing an FF...superbbbClap!!!!

great starting, waiting for more n esp premeer scenessBlushing!!!!

update soon n add me to ur PM list if u hav onee!!!

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Originally posted by Oblivious

awesome concept  Thank u so much
please add me in ur pm list   ya i will surely add u
waiting for the update

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Originally posted by zigzagway_sadi

WOW u started a new ff... really nice..

first of all Congrats for ur new FF..

and i really loved the concept and the first part..

DO add me to your pm list

continue soon..

take care
Thanku sooo much  for loving my concept. I will definitely add u in my pm list

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Originally posted by repunzell

yaayyy...u started writing an FF...superbbbClap!!!! Thank u dear

great starting, waiting for more n esp premeer scenessBlushing!!!! hmm premeer scenes k liye abhi time hai but its my promise there will be more scenes of premeer

update soon n add me to ur PM list if u hav onee!!! I will surely add u in my pm list

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