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..Jessie..

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 8:10am | IP Logged

Hello friends!!!!!!I am back after long time with an OS!!!A  Jeevika and Maanvi OS!!!!!

Again last few days was completely was completely focused on their painful love!!!This drove me away to write an OS.I am sorry if this Os has drowned any of your expectation!!!!!This was just an random idea!!!!!!!

 

Yet to watch yesterdays episode!!!!!Just read the reviews!!!!

Maanvi was lost thoughts about her di.She kept on thinking how her di and what is going on with her now, millions questions were raising in her mind she kept on thinking when her di come back to come back to conscious and when will talk to her. Tears were rolling down her cheeks .She wiped them at every moment. Maanvi tried to close her eyes and take some peace as she found herself emotionally drained out.

In Chandigarh:

Viren was sitting beside Jeevika .His face look more worried. He consoled himself by telling Jeevika will soon become alright.

IN Rishikesh:

It was late night.Beeji came to Maanvi's room to switch off the lights. Maanvi was sleeping.Beeji felt relaxed and told"bechari bahut tak gayi hai aapni di ke bare me such kar aapne aap ki dekbal  nahi kar rahi haii '.bahut taaaki hai  .. aacha hua ki ab wo soo rahi '."

Beeji switched off the lights and went away. Half an hour later everyone were waked by Maanvi's scream "Di". Every one woke up and ran towards her room. Maanvi was sitting awake and her face fully filled with tension and fear.Beeji switched on the light and came nearer to her "Maanvi beta kya hua  kyun itne pareshan lag rahe ho."Maanvi hold Beeji's hand and told Beeji paata nahi beeji aachnak muje  di ke bare me bahut bura sapna aah gaya '..beeji '.muje abi abi aapni di  ko dekna '..mein  bahut dar gayi hoon beeji '.muje di ke paas jana  hai 'aur di ko iss halut me mein akle nahi chud sakthi'..di ne mere liye kya kuch nahi kiya hai '..ab iss halat me muje di ki saath hi hona chahiya'."Beeji got worried more she din know what to tell.Viraat noticed  Maanvi pain in her eyes.He  said Beeji "aap fikar math ki jiye me Maanvi ko Chandigarh  le jata 'ab use uski di ki paas rehna bahut zaroot hai'aaur ab babhi ko bi Maanvi saath rehna bahut zarooth hai"Beeji said "nahi beta lekin"Viraat interfered "beeji Maain hoon naa '.aapko mujme vishwaas hai na tho aap fikar math ki jiye 'Mei sab dek lunga''.aab mere babhi ki behna  chal mere saath mere babi ko saas se zyadha  tumari zarooth hai .."

 

Soon they headed towards Chandigarh and hours later they were in the Vadhera House.

Maanvi rushed toward to Jeevika room .Viren starred at Maanvi .Maanvi moved towards Jeevika .She couldn't notice anyone but simply Jeevika's face was before her. She moved towards Jeevika.

Viraat pulled Viren away and walked out of the room .Maanvi opened her bag and took the mother Mary from inside it. She started speaking"di aapko yaad hai ye Mother Mary apne muje gift diya aur bola ki ye mera kayal rakega lekin di aapse zyada koi mere kayal rak saktha hai kya '.Jab aapko kooi mushkil ho tho mera halat kya ho ga'.eh Mother Mary ko mein apni hathoon se aapki hathoon mei de rahi  hoon ''taki eh ek  ki raksha nahi balki ham dono ki raksha Karen '..Mere kushi aapki kushi hai aur mere jivan aapki jivaan hai '.aap teek hogi tho mein teek ho javogi '..aur ham kushi ho jayenge'."

Manvi place the Mother Mary on Jeevika's hand and holded her tightly.

 

Outside the room Viren is angry for  Viraat did He keeps on starring at him.Viraat says "bayi aap tho mujse naraas honge aap dho minute mere baathey sun ki koshish ki jiye na'."Viren "tum tho uski support karne aaye na '.tum kabhi bi suchthey bi nahi ho sab ek second ka decision hai tumare liye.."

Viraat asked "baya aap kabhi suchthey hai kya ..aapne sucha kya Maanvi apni di ke liye aapni life ko bi sacrifice karthi hai'..lekin aab kaya problem hai ki ab wo khoon dene se Maana karthi hai'..aapne sucha iss ke pichey zaroor kuch reason hoga 'aapne sucha kya ???"

Viren stood still he couldn't answer anymore.Viraat told "bayi iss ke pichey ek bahut bada karan chipa hua '..ju ham sab ko mar dalega '..Maanvi aapne jivan me bahut badi tuff situation mei hey '.use cancer hai  bahai ''.jise wo sab ki kushi ke chipa rakhi hai'"Viraat's eyes were filled with tears as soon he ended this sentence.

Viren  gave a shock reaction when he heard these words .He couldn't believe such a truth has really been haunting her life  .Viren started speaking "Kya bhai cancer 'aur mene kabhi uski halat ko bi samaj nahi raha tha ''..wo zidhagi ki sabse bade problem se lad rahi aur mene wuse aapni baathoon se bhi uska problem zyada kar liya '"

Viren realized Viraat was  equally in pain he said "bhai ti fiquar math kar ham Maanvi ki treatment ki shuruvat Karen ge ''.Viraat replied "mein bhi  tho eh such raha tha'..mere dosth ke papa ek bahut badi specialist hai ..unke paas jak ham cancer specialist ko contact kar ke ..bahut hi jaldhi..treatment shuru Karen ge"

Viren said "aab muje kitna hi jaldi Maanvi se Maafi Mangni hai .."

Both rushed towards the room.

Maanvi was still holding Jeevika's hands .She started Talking to her Mom and dad"Aaa aur papa '.aapdi halat deko naa '.muje bahut hi jaldhi apnihasthi hoyi Jeevika di ko dekna hai '..aap  hamara iss halat ho jaldi teek kar lene .."Maanvi couldn't control herself Slowly her tears started rolling down, each drop touched Jeevika 's hands .Slowly as each tear  reached Jeevika 's  hands her hand started showing movements . Maanvi felt the moment and looked speechless .Jeevika stated opening her slowly.Her lips moved. The nurse beside her removed the ventilator .Jeevika holded Maanvi's hands tightly she said "Mannu''.Maanu .."Maanvi started smiling "di'.."She looked at Viren who standing beside Jeevika.

Viren looked shocked and he looked happily at Maanvi .Jeevika took her hand rubbed off the tears  in Maanvi 's face .She said "Manu tu dar math '.jab tak mere Manu mere saath hai muje kuch nahi hoga'.."Maanvi 's lips moved to smile on hearing this.

Viren and Viraat looked at the loving sisters and smiled.

That's all friends I am extremely sorry If I had not satisfied you.

 

Comments and Criticism are most welcomed!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by jessiekarthik - 27 June 2012 at 12:44am

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
nice one how sweet was that

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 8:27am | IP Logged
This was reallly nice i loved it!!!! Esp the mother Mary stuff...It was so cute something i had forgotten about!!!

Mother mary is to take care of Mannu and now Mannu puts it in J hand and says only her Jeevika di can take care of that!!!

The true soulmated!!!!

Hats of to Jessie darling!!!

Loved your OS

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
beautiful os. love the mannu jeevika scene. Wish they show something as touching in the show.

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Well written! :)

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by indian10

nice one how sweet was that
thank you!!!glad that u liked it 

..Jessie..

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by uniquebluerose

This was reallly nice i loved it!!!! Esp the mother Mary stuff...It was so cute something i had forgotten about!!!

Mother mary is to take care of Mannu and now Mannu puts it in J hand and says only her Jeevika di can take care of that!!!

The true soulmated!!!!

Hats of to Jessie darling!!!

Loved your OS

hey thank you for your comments!!!!!!!
i always wanted mother marry to be a part of the storyline Embarrassed

..Jessie..

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preetivr

beautiful os. love the mannu jeevika scene. Wish they show something as touching in the show.
thank you for the sweet comments ...glad u liked it!!!Smile

@veronica thank you!!!!!!loved your comments!!!!


Edited by jessiekarthik - 09 May 2012 at 10:21pm

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