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Hey
I'm really loving this new concept!!
Please do pm me when you update.. really can't wait to read more!! Big smile

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dear when r u updating

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sorry for being late guys...Tongue heres my update :


chapter - 3

 


 

Manyata was resting a bit after the toil of the day with her comrades gathered around her. They were idly discussing abt their next strategies of how to put udayveer nto more trouble wen her best frnd akash came running along,shouting her name excitedly.."monia..monia..!!"

Manyata- akash tum yahan?

Akash- ana para monia.. tum ye sab kya kar rahi ho?tumhe pata bhi hain kit um kya kar rahi ho?

Manyata- akash.. baat kya hain? Kya kar diya hain humne?

Akash- of ho monia main tumhare aur udayveer singh ke beech ki jung ki baat kar raha hu.. tumhe pata bhi hain ki who kitna influential aadmi hain?wo tumhare saath kuch bhi kar sakta hain monia.. aur tum kuch nhi kar paogi'

He gripped her shoulders and looked into her eyes- monia.. main tumhe nhi kho sakta.. tum udayveer singh ke khilaf jeet nhi paogi.. mujhe tumhare liye bht darr lag raha hain..

Manyata released herself slowly frm his grip and said calmly- akash..!! tum aisi baatein kar rahe ho? Tum? Tumhe to hamare saath hona chahiye iswaqt.. tumhari sabse zyaada zaroorat hain hume'aur kisne kaha ki hum uske khilaf kuch nhi kar payenge? Kisne keh diya yeh tumse huh?akash hum jung ka ailaan kar chuke hain.. aab hum peeche nhi hat sakte.. aab agar hum peeche hatt gaye to hamare papa ko insaaf kabhi nhi mil payegi.. akash plzz samjhne ki koshish karo'

Akash- are bas karo monia.. bas karo.. ye sab jung,insaaf, ye saab filmon mein hota hain yaar.. asli zindagi mein nhi'. Bas karo yar.. aur apne ghar wapas chalo' ye sab chod do yar'. Khud ke liye kabar khod rahi ho tum.. main janta hoon'

Manyata- nhi akash.. hum wapas apne ghar tabtak nhi jayenge jabtak ke hamare papa ko insaaf nhi mil jate.. tum agr chaho to hamara saath do.. warna humne tumhe kisi baat ke liye kabhi roka to nhi hain'.

Akash was stunned at her rudeness- monia'.?

Manyata- aab hamare zindagi ka sirf ek hi maksat hain.. hamare papa ko insaaf dilana' aur uske katil ko saza dilwana'

Akash- tumhare papa ne khudkushi ki hain manyata.. unhe kisine mara nhi hain..

Manyata- jhut hain ye.. hamare papa ne khudkhushi nhi ki..unhe apni jaan dene par majboor kiya gaya tha'. Akash plzzz.. abhi sahi waqt nhi hain tumhare saath behes karne ki' hume ' hume bht kaam hain.. tum'. Tum jaa sakte ho'. She turned away frm him' he took few staeps back then said- monia. Maine hamesha tumhare bhale ke bare mein socha hain.. aur marte dum tak tumhare liye hi sochunga'

With that he left'.

Manyata felt a terrible pathos inside her heart' she loved akash.. she lovd him since her childhood days bt cud nvr say it to him.. she had nvr wanted to hurt him like this bt she knew that his support,even his words had great influence on her and cn divert her fr her aim.. and she did nt want this.. her soul aim was to bring down udayveer singh and she was firmly committed to this aim.

 

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Mujhe udayveer sigh se milna hain plzzz.. mujhe unse milne dijiye- cried akash deparately.. the guard were holding him tightly so that he cud nt ebter the mansion.. and he kept on pleading to them..

Uday was coming out wen his eyes fell on him.. he became curious- ye kya ho raha hain wahaan? Guards.. chodo ise'.!!

The guards released him immediately..

Uday- kaun ho tum?kya chahiye?

Akash- sir mujhe bas do min apse baat karni hain..plzzz sir.. bas do min.. manyata ke bare mein'.

Uday- man'manyata'.? His eyes glittered at once' bt akash did nt notice it' he said to the guards- ise andar aane do.. the guards obeyed and opened the gates for him..

Akash- thank u sir.. mujhe aapse.. uday held up his hand and stopped him- yahaan nhi..hamare saath aao.. he walked back to the palace with akash following him slowly'

Inside he took him straight into his private quarters and told him to sit down. He obeyed..

Uday- chai coffee kuch peeoge?

Akash- nhji sir.. bas aapse'

Uday- pani? Pani to pee sakte ho naa?

Akash- ek glass thanda pani agr ho sakta hain'

Uday-sure.. ramsingh..!! ram singh..! the servant came running..

Uday- inke liye ek glass thanda pani aur kuch sweets la do jaldi' the servant left nodding his head..

Uday sat down on the sofa in frnt of akash- aab batao.. kya kehna chahte ho tum..

Akash- sir.. mera naam akash hain..main manyata ko bachpan se janta hoon.. bht ziddi hain who.. agr kuch bhi than leti hain to wo karke hi chodti hain sir.. who abhi bhi bacchi hain sir' nadani kar rahi hain.. aap plzz use maf kar dijiye na sir'

Uday smirked- baas ye kehne ke liye tum itna natak kar rahe the bahar? Kyun? Aisa kya ho jayega agr humne use maaf nhi kiya to?

Akash- nhi sir.. aisa maat kijiye' his voice started shaking- who bacchi hain sir' bas 18 saal ki hain..use pata nhi who kya kar rahi hain.. aap to aap ho sir.. aapke bare mein koi kuch bhi bole use aapko kya?

Uday- nhi umm' akash.. tum galat ho' hume farak padta hain.. jab ye sara hungama elections ke pehle hota hain na.. to hume fark padta hain'.

The servant came inside with the snacks and the water..

Uday- lo.. kuch kha lo.. au tension karna chod do' hum koi gunda mawali nhi hain ki ek ladki ko pareshan karenge.. ya fior uske saath kuch aisa waisa karenge.. manyata bht sahasi ladki hain.. acchi lagti hain who hume.. akash was abt to drink water bt uday's words made him numb'

Uday got up and continued- actually' hume wo kafi pasand hain' unki jaisi ladki.. itni choti umar mein itni bahadur.. humne aaj tak nhi dekhi.. waise.. u know.. ladkiyan humne kam nhi dekhi hain apne life mein.. par manyata mein kuch alag si baat hain.. isiliye to tum bhi daurte daurte chale aaye hamare paas uski hifazat ki bheek mangne.. kyun'. Akassshh? He smiled at him' akash cudnt say a word.. he was perspirating..

Uday- tum chinta karna chod do.. aab manyata ki zimedari hamari hain'. Okay? He turned towards him- aab tum jaa sakte ho'

Akash got up and without a single word left the place almost running as if someone was chasing him.. he continued running till he reached his house' there he sat down on his bed and started thinking of wat to do.. how to save manyata frm udayveer's clutches.. bt the more he thot the more his words echoed in his ears.. he decided to speak to manyata agen..

 

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Manyata jiji'- a small rajasthani girl called manyata who was leaning against a tree and trying to catch some sleep..

Jiji..- the girl shook her gently.. manyata got up- aree..!! kaiun ho tum beta?

The girl- jiji ye aapke liye.. she handed her a note and then ran away'

Manyata was surprised.. she opened the note.. few words were written on it in calligraphic style-

" hum aapko apne ghar mein chai ke liye bulana chahte hain.. chai bhi pee lena aur baat bhi kar lena.. jo aapko kehna hain hum aram se sunenge..istarah bahar dhup mein naare lagane se kuch hasil nhi hoga..

                                                                                      --- Udayveer Singh "

Manyata got up at once.. she called out to her comrades- doston.. ye dekho us jahil insaan ne kya bheja hain' she showed them the note.. they all started speaking in excited tones.. she asked them- kya lagta hain.. jana chahiye hume? Kya ho jayega? Kam se kam uske muh par aur kuch galiyan to de aa sakti hun?kyun?

One of the people said- lekin manyata ji agar ye koi chal hua to?

Manyata- chal? Wo aab koi chal nhi khel sakta.. kyunki media ko unke bare mein sab kuch pata chal chukka hain.. aur is note ke bare mein bhi pata chal jayega' she smiled confidently to herself'

 

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Uday switched on the tv just in time to see manyata speaking to the meia abt his note..

Thr media people were really excited abt this tea invitation to manyata. Jay was a bit upset to see this..

Jay- uday tumne use khat bheja? Chai ke liye invite kiya? Kyun? Ye saab kya hain uday?

Uday laughed- jay' bas maza dekhti jao' ye chiriya kitna bhi fur fur.. kare.. ise pinjre mein band karna hume acchi tara se ata hain'

The reporter asked manyata- kya aap jayenge Singh mansion mein?

Manyata- zaroor jayenge.. kyun nhi.. khud udayveer singh ne hume nauta bheje hain'agar hum mana kar de to unka apman hua na? aur hum itni choti tarike se unka apmaan nhi karenge'

Uday laughed out again- ha ha.. is ladki mein wakehi bht dam hain ' hain na jay? Dekha tumne? Kaise baat kar rahi hain hamare bare mein'

Jay- hum dekh rahe hain uday.. tum is mamle ko leka kuch zyaada ki casual to nhi ho rahe ho? Ye mat bhulo uday ki overcnfidenc eka result kabhi accha nhi hota.. kahin aisa na ho ki tumhara yehi overcnfidenc tumhe le dube'

Uday- c'mon jay' kaisi baat kar rahi ho? Game to abhi shuru hua hain.. bas aab sirf chal chalna baki hain'. His face became devilishly attractive due to the smirk playing on his lips'.

 

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Manyata stood outside the huge gate,gazing sternly at the palace like structure on te other side.. she seemed to feel nauseated at the idea of having tea with the person whom she hated the most in the world.. bt she had no choice. This was what they called politics and HE was a very good politician.. she had to win against him in his own game'

Sighing,she stepped inside. The guards lead her inside and told her towait while they went to inform udayveer. She looked around her.. everything was so perfectly placed.. and perfectly arranged.. not a single thing was incongruous. A servant came towards her and asked her to follow him.. she did.. he took her inside thru a long passageway.. the palce was soo lonely,her footsteps echoed in the hallway.. she felt lil afraid bt then shed away all her ill feelings.. she knew she was safe as the media was with her.

Sounds of shrill laughter was being heard frm somewhere.. and they became louder and louder as she approached near a big hallroom frm where it was coming.. the servant said- madam aap chale jaiye.. hume wahan jana allowed nhi hain.. saab wahi par hain'

She nodded and took careful steps towards the hall. What she saw there made her freeze for some moments.

Uday was siting at a round table with a chessboard on it.. jaynandini was sitting on his chair's handle,leaning herself against him while his hand was placed around her waist. On another hand he held a glass of beer.. and on the opposite side of the table sat Suraj Thappar, the politician who was assaulted by udayveer and his people,at least manyata father said so.. bt here, he was seen to be extremely happy and was laughing away loudly with two girls on the both sides of his chair'.

It was he who first noticed manyata..

Thappar- are ye kaun hain? Nayiwaliu hain kya? Lekin jagah to nhi hain.. ise bithane ka.. ek kaam karo.. tum hamare god mein baith jao..kyun? hahahaha

Manyata felt like vomiting.. she had nvr been insulted like this before'

Udayveer got up frm his chair and came to receive her,smiling.. he held out his hand- thanks for coming manyata..uski baton ka bura mat manna manyata.. actually use chad gaya hain' bht pee li hain usne' do tin peg kya gale mein dal liya aur shuru ho gaya' fir bhi peena nhi chodta'

Manyata did nt take his hand.. she replied sternly- kyun bualaya hain hume yahan? Kya dikhana chahte hain aap?

Uday smiled- bas yeh.. yehi dikhana chahte the tumhe..

Manyata- ye? Ye ghatiya'

Uday- aha.. ek min.. inhe ghatiya bolne se pehle ek baar soch lo.. ye tumhare bht kaam aa sakta hain' kyunki tumhare pujjya pitasree ne hi inke liye hamare khilaf awaz uthaye the hain na?

Manyata cud nt answer.. she looked up at him,stunned'

Uday- o manyata manyata' kitni bacchi ho tum'.tum ye bhi nhi samajhti.. ki agr tum apne papa ko innocent aur hume gunegaar proof karna chahti ho to tumhe inki madat to leni hi hogi' inke bayaan ke siva tum kuch proof nhi kar paogi manyata ji'.isiliye to humne aaj inhe yahaan bula liya.. jao baat kar lo inse.. jee bhar ke baat karlo.. chaho to'. Hum tum dono ko akele chod de?

Manyata looked at the drunk man,playing with the girls as if they were his toys.. tears welled up in her eyes as she realized the hollowness of all her cause,what she was fighting for.. she wasn't fighting for this? If she succeeded in defeating uday what will happen? He will lose this election and will be replaced by this man.. who was no less than him in terms of inhumanity.. .. her vision blurred..

Uday- ye kya hua manyata? Tum ro rahi ho? Baat nhi karogi? Darr lag raha hain? Are darne ki kya baat hain .. sirf ek piwakkad hi to hain.. ye tumhara kya bigad sakta hain manyata'?

Manyata- tum kyun kar rahe ho aisa?

Uday- humne kya kiya? Of ho.. !!

Manyata- humne tumhara kya bigara tha? Hamare papa ne kya bigara tha tumhara?

Uday- sabkuch' sabkuch bigad sakta tha tumhare papa ke liye' uday's voice changed.. it became serious'

Manyata tried hard to fight back her tears bt they kept on rolling down her cheeks.. uday turned his face away..

Manyata- tumne accha nhi kiya.. apni swarth ke liye itne niche gir gaye? Yahan ke log tumhe apna bhagwan mante hain.. hum bhi pehle yehi sochte the kit um ek acche insaan ho'

Uday- ye tumhari galati hain.. hamari nhi'. Hum ek politician hain.. neta hain hum.. aur hum neta log aise hi hote hain.. swarthi,kamine aur kuch kuch to unse bhi badtar.. jaise ki ye' he pointed towards thappar who was busy satisfying his hunger now that he had satisfied his thirst.. manyata looked away.. she cudnt tolerate such egregious things..

Uday lowered down his voice- dekho manyata.. hume sachmein bht dukh hain tumhare papa ke maut ka.. nhi.. sorry.. I feel apathetic towards it.. coz he was no one to me.. he was a kind of enemy on the contrary.. par am sorry kyunki who tumhare papa the..  bas hum tumse sirf ek hi reqst karenge.. ki job hi kar rahi ho.. who sab band kar do.. isse kisiko kuch hasil nhi honawali hain.. na tumhe aur nahi humein'  tum is baat ko bhul jao.. hum bhi bhul jayenge'

Manyata closed her eyes and wept.. she remembered her childhood days with her father and how he used to teach her all abt truth and honesty and fighting for justice and wats right.. she gained her courage.. and turned back at uday.. she looked at him in the eyes and said- hum itni asani se haar nhi manenge' agar tum swarthy ho.. to hum bhi swarthy hain.. hum kyun soche ki agar tum har gaye to desh ka aur bhi bura haal ho sakta hain? Waise bhi tum sab ek jaise ho' HUM HAR NHI MANENGE.. ye elections to tumhe hum kabhi jitney nhi denge.. chahe kuch bhi ho jaye..

Uday smiled- chahe kuch bhi ho jaye eh manyata? He stooped towards her..she backed away bt he caught her shoulders' hisface was so close to hers that she cud even smell his breath of whiskey..she struggled to free herself bt he was stronger than her..

Uday whispered to her- chahe kuch bhi ho jaye? Jo bhi ho manyata.. hum to already har chuke hain'.

Manyata,still struggling..- matlab?

Uday- hum apne dil ki baat kar rahe hain' hum tumse apna dil har chuke hain manyata'.

He released her with a lil jerk.. she looked at him,her eyes wide.. she cudnt believe what he just said'

Uday smiled- aab ye dekhna baki hain.. ki tum kabtak apne aap ko humse door rakh pati ho'

Manyata felt as if she cudnt move.. then she gathered all her strength,turned back and ran.. she ran as fast as she cud, his voice chasing her frm behind.." tum kabtak apne aap ko humse door rakh pati ho'manyata..!!"

 

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Edited by kasturika_kashu - 15 May 2012 at 2:14pm

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
kasturia, amazing girl,
mind blowing update, please give some intense ManVeer scenes in your next updateEmbarrassed then i would forgive you for indulging pakash in your FF. LOL
love the concept, real face of today's politics.feel bad for manyata and this bad UV and his obsession for manyata wendy likey. loving it.
i personally like these kind of passionate, impulsive, forcefull and love-hate type saga, hence is huge ManVeer fan.Embarrassed
tel me when do you update, eagerly waiting*makes puppy dog face* 

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
awesomeee...wohooo...loved it...ClapClapi loved the character of uv...really i was imagining ashish doing and saying all this...and i enjoyed it alot...update soon...looking forward for this story... interesting one...

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
very, very well written!!!!!!!!!!ClapStar
ur update made up for everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Wink
i have to say, i just luved this line:
" tum kabtak apne aap ko humse door rakh pati ho'manyata..!!"

it was very interesting to read!!!!Thumbs Up
thnx so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!Wink

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
dat was awesome just loved it especially the last line of uday telling manayata hayeee made shy update soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
LOVED IT!!! Plzz pm me when u update(if possible) Thanks in advance!!:)

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