~inshi ff~"ur love is my strength"CHAPTER12, Pg15

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baspa

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Hi frnds! i'm planning to write my first ff on inshi

this is my first attempt in writing any ff so i hope my mistakes will be forgiven

my story will start 1 yr after inshi marriage. inshi arter kidnap story have tied the knot and moved out of sharma niwas. The story will deal with inshi relationship after marriage and focus will be mainly rishi and how rishi will reunite with his estranged familiy and how he will try n bring sharma's back in indu's lyf.

guys plz suggest me whether i should attempt this ff or not all ur suggestions are welcome

chapter 1
location: at city hospital outside emergency operation theatre

He was walking impatiently back and forth outside the emergency OT sometimes looking at his watch and sometimes at the OT door and with each passing second the anxiety n fear on his face was increasing. suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder... Ricky avoice called. he turned back and saw his best frnd standing in front of him...Sanjay he said and both hugged eachother.

Snjay: Ricky yeh sab kya hua aur bhabi wo kaise hai?
Rishi controlling his emotions in a grim tone said"pata nahi 4 ghante hogaye hai indira ko operation theatre mae lejaye hue par drs abitak bahar nai aye. Sanay meri jaan ja rai hai pata nai kya hoga agar use kuch ho gaya to mai jee nai paoga aur kabi kudh ko ko maaf nai karsakoga. saab meri galati hai agar meai indira ko is halat me chod kar nai jata to yehsab nai hota. meri wajah se indira aur mere bachoo ke jaan pe ban ayi hai."(indira is 8 months pregnant and has fallen down from stairs)
Saying this rishi starts crying
Sanjay: khud ko sambhal ricky aur khud ko dosh dena band kar teri isme koi mistake nai hai. honi ko koi nai taal sakta. Tu himmat rakh aur bhagwan pe bharosa wo teri aur indira ki khushion ko kuch nai hone dege.

suddenly the OT door opened and a ward boy came out with a list of some medicinesand called out"who is with the patient"

Rishi came forward and asked " meri wff kaise hai?

ward boy: aap yeh daviya leke ayiye

suddenly Rishi sees the Dr coming out of the OT and he quickly goes towards Dr and asks " meri wyf kaise hai Dr?"

Dr: Mr diwaan aap mere cabin me ayiye kuch zaroori baat apko batani hai.
saying this Dr goes to his cabin
sanjay goes near rishi

Sanjay: Ricky tu DRr ke paas ja daviya me leata ho.

Rishi hesitatingly goes to Dr's cabin...

to be continued

Edited by baspa - 26 August 2012 at 1:44am

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baspa

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guys plz give me ur feedback whether i shd continue or not. I won't mind if it's negative.

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged

WOW!! nice starting...plzzz do condt yar...

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 8:06am | IP Logged

nice n interesting starting.
keep it up. Thumbs Up

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 8:07am | IP Logged

hmmm...nice...keep it up...

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 10:51am | IP Logged

nice

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged

Nice (imagination me hi sahi inshi ek sath to hai. )

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nice proceed

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