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-Grace-

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Posted: 05 May 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged

Dedicated to my two most favorite and closest sisters

Shiz and Fari, this one's especially for you guysEmbarrassed

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As I grew up

I always found you by my side

Mom and dad often forgot to say goodnight but you never left me un tucked under the soft covers

 

As I grew up

I always faced challenges and judgment from the society

Soon my owners became the crowd too, but you still remained on my side

 

I would cry in the dark, under the shower, while everyone was asleep

They would believe my lies but you always saw through me

Saw through the lying eyes, the brimming tears in the steam, the quiet sobs in the dark

 

They never believed me, went unnoticed my pleas

Even though you were a part of them just as I was, you needn't ever a tearful plea

 

Life became rough

Not just for me, yours was worse too

Despite, I had always remembered that cheerful smile

Don't get me wrong but the pain in those eyes was visible too

 

Yet you assured that everything was right, just right

I knew you wouldn't tell me but I understood too well

 

Life took a u-turn and we stood where we had started

Again and again it all had repeated

 

I could take it no longer

Wonder what you went through

 

Our hopes had died, your smile soon faded

Pain in those eyes grew as we lived

 

Until those eyes closed too

 

i felt so alone, so rejected, in despair

But I made sure your smile didn't die

 

You no longer had pain but with that the soul was gone too

I let them say whatever they wanted but inside I knew you were always here

…right by my side

 

I still see you tugging me under the covers

Your scent lets me know you came to look me over

 

As I grew

I smiled for you

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OnlyHope

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Awww it's BEAUTIFUL <3
You never fail to make me smile with your writing..it's so amazing!
I love youuu Hug
It touched my heart Embarrassed
& woh dedication ke liye bhi thank you Hug

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IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by OnlyHope

Awww it's BEAUTIFUL <3
You never fail to make me smile with your writing..it's so amazing!
I love youuu Hug
It touched my heart Embarrassed
& woh dedication ke liye bhi thank you Hug

THANKS FARIIIHug
and u never fail to make me smile with ur comments hehe
ILY2Embarrassed

it was completely out of boredom/randomness lol
thanks again!

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 1:41am | IP Logged

& that's when we write the best :P

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Wow that is beautiful writing Grace, loved it . <3
So lovely, thanks for PM . Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
beautiful dear 

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Posted: 07 May 2012 at 1:18am | IP Logged
I love this piece. So nice and so serene. thanks for the pm which led me to here. I really poems and this one is just amazing.
Do not hesitate to pm me in the future regarding such fantastic pieces.

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Very nice. Very solemn and beautiful. This poem had an ascetic value.

Smile

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