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OS:: Sins of the Heart :: ArHi (Page 5)

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BEAUTIFUL...UR AN AWESOME WRITER
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That was a beautiful description of their relationship in limbo 
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That was so sad Cry! Her pain, his desperation, their undeniable love - she hurt, he hurt... BRILLIANT!!!
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Absolutely beautiful.
He doesnt have the fairytale words, but for her he would find them.
Heart touching words
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awww awesome, loved it, its so sad, please continue and pm me.
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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
Brilliantly written !
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I really love how you explained how Khushi's beauty attracted "monsters" and the "awful people" in her life (ironic but true ;) ) and most of all I truly enjoyed how the lyrics matched with the emotions you were trying to express in the oneshot :D 
beautiful ;D need to say more? ;D
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Great OS

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