OS:: Sins of the Heart :: ArHi - Page 5

Do anything but leave.. Ouch heartbreak! Thats what he loves about her I think, the fact that she always resists and reacts to him, she challenges him,, Thats who she is! I love how you wrote this, she found out in such a horrifying way!.. Human Steel! Awesome!!

I m shaking... You leave me wounded. Like its me... Like its actually me feeling them. The pain, the anguish then the loss, the regret., all., as u alternate btn the two, my emotions shift gears. Despite wanting to hate him, I only end up feeling him coz ur words make me feel it. Gosh., only u can get the story into us rather then the other way.

That was beautifully written..Real, intense and heart-wrenching. You have a gift with words.  With few words you create magic...awesome..

a treat... as usual 😊 😊 i just love reading what you write- awesome symbiosis lol 😉

Hell no! I know she should leave but she SHOULDN'T leave. Oh what the hell am I saying! They're both pawns in a cruel game

Thanks for the PM. Nice OS. Emotional. Nice to see Arnav repenting.

Loved the OS! Loved the song! It's one of my favorites! 

awesome...loved it!

Love you way of writing, leaving most of it to our imagination.

loved it!!!!
well written 😊