OS:: Sins of the Heart :: ArHi

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Edited by Nmyra - 11 years ago

loved it! Something I'd love to see on the show. Their emotions were well-written. Good job!! Edited by farfar319 - 11 years ago

awesomee!!! well written ya!!!

As usual...awesome...:)...loved how arnav held khushi and she just moved away like he didnt mean anything to her anymore...hope to see this in the show...arnav realising the intensity of what he did and its consequence...:)...loved the lyrics that you used...This was my fav part...

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Maybe redemption has stories to tell
Maybe forgiveness is right where you fell
Where can you run to escape from yourself?
Where you gonna go?
Where you gonna go?
Salvation is here.

Will be always eager to read more such OS' from you...:)...

PS...Update STT!!!;)...:D...

you are avery gifted write dear... love your OSs

Beautifully written !!!!!!!!!
You are an Amazing writer !!!!!!! Loved the way you wrote the OS !!!!!!!

Aww Nami!!

Love it! Wish the actual show would be this intense... 

Nimmy jaan🤗 I missed you sooo much...
And when you come you come with a bang man !!!Just tell me one thing...Is this a stand alone OS ??plll pll say no...Cause I want it to be continued if not a part of this...then just can you plll just continue it from here to a different one ?? And I guess you said you would...Cuase this OS was just amazing..
And I just loved how amazingly it was written... totally shocked to his very roots thats what both of them are .Khushi and Arnav are joined even by the strings of emotions...most of the times feeling hte same thing as each other...And this time it was realization..For one that realizatio gave a chance to build his world again...And for Khushi..well for her I guess its completely shattered her world...
Though I am sure probably it may be rebuilt but the re-built things aren't just as fascinating as the first new thing you had...And I guess thats what makes me feel more bad for Khushi than for Arnav..

So now all I can say is you rock woman !!And big time...cause you made me cry and I also want this kind of a scene when he realises that she is the innocent one...the totally heartbreaking scenes..cause I love these more then anything...it actually lets me sympathise with them more !!

Loved the OS...

PS: yaayy I commented without a PM

i can see both behaving like this, But my heart ached for both of them. And how i wish for a happy ending.