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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
hi guys ,this is another work of her ,this ff starts after the ape ram hug...hope you all love this too..






My other works of RAYA..


FF HugSirf Meri Ho ,  FF  ... Heart Ishq Heart,

FFSmile Prediction ,  SS Wink Love Journey,

OS Star Love And Life ,

OS Blushing SpecialGiftOs:Missing !!!

SS:Custody,SS:Rayape meet,Os:I Miss You

OS:Tere Bina Mushkil Hai Jeena




part 1-page " 1
part 2 -page "1
part 3-page " 4
part 4-page " 9
part 5-page " 12
part 6-page " 13
part 7-page " 16
part 8-page  "18

part 9-page  " 22
part 10-page "23
part 11-page "27
part 12- page "31
part 13-page "37
part 14-page "41
part 15-page "48
part 16-page "52
part 17-page "55
part 18- page "61
part 19-page "64
part 20- page "68
part 21- page "74
part 22-page "76
part 23-page "82

part 24-page "86
part 25 -page " 102

part 25 edited version with images ..page 105
-page 112 
PART-26
-page 112  PART-26
page 133 
PART-27

            

  part-1



after the scene of ape-ram hug ...ram wil tel to priya pack our bags ,we wil go back to india tomorrw & he left d room ...
in the hotel room ...
priya...is crying alot ,dont knw wat to do ,how to react on this ,she is going mad by thinking of this &thought to go out for sometime ,wash her face changes in to blue salwar wil go to near by lake...
after 1 hour ram will come to hotel room
finds priya nowhere ...searches everywhere in the hotel & lawn ,frustated ,angry ,he calls her mobile ...but priya wont attend the call...
he keep on calling & searching ... :brokenheart: :brokenheart:
sitting helplessly in the lawn tears in his eyes ...thinking that why i yelled yet her ,y she hide from me already she met apeksha

after sometime ...
priya sitting by lake side crying heartout feeling dizzy & headche ,her phone slips from her handz...
priya picks her mobile thinks to call her papa &sees 21 missed cals from ram ...
oh...mr.kapoor called these many times ,it was in silent mode i dont knw how  much angry he is now ???
still she dont want to go ...
but she got up &starts raining  & walks hurriedly to hotel way...

ram -oh its heavy raining out ..where the hell priya was ,he himself ready to go out to search her ,while he came to entrance he found priya is coming to hotel ,all wet &lost in her thoughts ...he is very happy to see her aswell as angry
he quickly go to her ...grabbed her hand immediately he pulled her in to hotel room hurriedly ...
priya startled &asks him mr.kappor  wat u r doing ,u r hurting my hand leave me ...
angry ram-wont say anything to her ..up to he reaches their room ...
after entering the room ...
he is shouting at her ...
where the hell u r ,wat u r thinking u r self ,didnt u inform me when u r going out ,y u didnt attend my calls ,wer r u ...

priya looks at ram longingly
& tells him when i asked same question to u [when ram went outside in d night with oout informing her]on that day wat u hav told me d answer ...same answer from my side now..

he shockd by her answer &
he saw her swollen , red eyes &pale face ,looking so innocent ,pretty with sad face ...
he shuts his mouth dont knw wat to talk
he is staring at her ,aftr sometime he realizes her tears r cuming nonstop &she is all wet .
ram breaks the silence by telling her priya go & fresh first... givin the towel to her ..
she takes towel & went 2 fresh & when she came from washroom he ordered food , waiting 4 her...
ram-  priya come have dinner ...
priya told that im not hungry mr.kapoor aap kayiye na...
achha from mrg onwards u didnt hav anything & now also u r not hungry &i shud believe that
plz mr.kapoor dont force me i will eat later ...
ram- ok than i wil wait 4 u ...
priya wil go &sit wit him 4 diner ... again lost in her thoughts nt able to eat but bcz of ram she ate slightly...
ram sitting on the bed seeing priya ..thinking wat to tell priya &how to tel priya about apeksha he dont want to tell but her tears hurting him alot ...
priya is packing everything in absent minded ..
ram phone rings both came in to theiir senses , ram lifts d call ,daljit tells bhayya no tikets 4 two days,as the weather not good they cancelled many flights so u shud better go aftr 2days &tomorrow we will go for opera show ...ok bhai good night ,we will meet tomorw...

he calls priya ...she wont say anythin just turns her face to him to tell ...
flights r not there so our flight will b after 2 days ...
come & sleep ...
she wont say anything turns her face & concentrate on packing ...he wil see her some more time and calls again tells priya after 2 days our flight dont bother abt packig now...she almost finishd &close the zip gets from there went to waranda &seeing the rain catching rain drops in her hand ...
ram wil go to her &asks priya come & sleep already u got wet in rain &now for this cold breeze u r health will spoil ,it hurts u ...
she turns him with teary eyes ...&says i feel better if im alone 4 sometime...
he rushly go to room &sleep ..thinking plz priya dont cry ..i cant c u r tears ,& i dont want 2 ruin our relationship like this ...he too mind disturbed fall asleep...
wakes up at 3.30am midnight and sees priya she didnt cum to room yet ...
he wil go to waranda to check priya he shoked to c there...





Edited by luvsakshi - 29 May 2014 at 12:30am

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i m read it now it awasome start Big smileClapClap why always rain came in romanceWinkbut i love wet romanceEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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nice plz upd8 soon..

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Nice post...keep it up

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by viny_queen

i m read it now it awasome start Big smileClapClap why always rain came in romanceWinkbut i love wet romanceEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


haha the writer loves rain ...so always she is bringing this haha thank you

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
wakes up at 3.30am midnight and sees priya she didnt cum to room yet ...
he wil go to waranda to check priya he shoked to c there...
part -2...

priya sitting there in the corner of  waranda ,her hands folded on her knees,she is getting wet in rain totally ..ram  hears her sobbing  ...angrily went to her grab her in to room ,she starlted &shoked 2 see wat was hapening ..
ram is yelling yet her badly ...wat u r thinking about u r self ...how much time u sat ter in d rain ...
priya scared 2 see rams angry ...
u r kid r wat ,dont u knw wen its raining cant u come inside & sit r sleep ...
im sorry i didnt knw wen raining started &dont knw wat to tel him ..she just seeing him helplessly...
he again yells at her ... y u r crying this much ..wat hapend now ,wat u r thinking im not able to understand u ,i cant c u r tearz plz stop u r cryin go & change , i wil cal d doctors ..
priya -no need of any doctors ,im 5n ,u juzz go to sleep peacefully ..
ram dont knw wat to do ...
she rushes to the washroom & change d dress & come &sleep on the bed facing back to him ...
he tries to call her but she wont reply him.[thinking ..ram said correct y im crying lik this ,wat relation between me &mr.kapoor ,iits juzz a compromised marriage ..really im i loving ram !!!!!}..dont knw wen they both slept ...

mrg time ...
they woke up by hearing continuesly banging on the door ...
ram &priya woke up they found they 2 r close &rams hand is on her ... they both see each other .cant take eyes from eachother &again they heard bang on d door...
ram getup from the bed &opens the door ...
kuljeet &daljeet greets him...
daljjet askd bhayya wat hapend to u r phone y u r nt attending & u didnt ready yet we hav to go to opera show ...
haaa not had a gud sleep thats it cum ...
all go to room ...he orders breakfast for four of them ...
priya wil come from washroom wearing a blue&white combination sareee.abs**tely stunning ... ram staring at her ...she was very beautiful but he can see  sadness on her face,she wont utter a word while breakfast r while driving to opera ...she is calm &quite lost in her thoughts all the while ...
ram is unable to see her in this position..all he wants is her happiness ...
if he see her smile ..the day wil b soo good for him ...
they went to opera show ...ram wants to see the show today along with priya [dont drift of to sleep]
the show is tooo goood ram involves in that .. priya is watching the show but her mind was  not there... thinking to get out of this situation ... as she is nt trusting ram y she askd abt the truth when she heard it from him... y she is worrying this much , she is unable to digest ram told he has connection with apeksha &she knw its a comprmaised marriage but she cant live without ram,when he was nt ther around he will search for him,early mrg if she wont see his face first" she wont feel gud the whole day&now she is thinkin that if he leaves her ,wat im i supposed to do ,wats my life ...frm 33 years im i waiting  for this oly to hapen to my love life...
the whom i love most in the world going to leave me ... s priya u r loving him she said her self ...she realizes that she is loving him so much she cant live without him..as soon as possible i hav to tell my love to mr.kapoor...
but if he says no , i cant lov u ,its just compramised marriage wat i supposed to do ... tears in her eyes ... the show ends all gotup still she is in her seat...kuljeet asks priya wat hapen u involved so much in d show...she got up from the seat walks unknwnly towards...
only ram knws her feelings &went back towards her ...
but priya neglects his view goes to kuljeet&daljeet they wil tel here we wil go to breeze resturant for launch...
priya says im having so much headche i cant come u people go & enjoy ...
daljeet asks kya bhabhi...im also seeing from mrg onwards u r looking pale wat hapen...
nothing telling na slight headche plzzz juzz drop me near the hotel u r bhai wil accompany u ...
ram stared at her [feeling very bad 4 her]
ram tells i wil hav launch with priya in the hotel u people carry on ...
there 1 daljeet family friend wil met them & thy r talking ..priya unable 2 stand there feeling dizzy ,nausea,darkness infront of her eyes ... but she dont want 2 tell ram she just holding herself momentamly... she went &sat near the window ...
ram looking at her went 2 her &sit besides her ...
asks if she is ok...
she wil close her eyes dont want to see ram ,if she sees he can find her tears again he yells ...
& she nodds her head [yes]
ram asks her dont want to talk with me ,plz once talk with me im waiting from mrg onwards...
they heard hi from one lady ..thy too looks at the side thy found apeksha ter...
she is cuming towards them ...
ram fumes in anger ...
priya got up &tell ...im leaving mr.kapoor mayb u wont feel gud & cant show u r love 2 her...IF IM HERE ,u carry on
 sayin this she moves hurriedly  towards steps,going down from the steps ...
ram want to catch her up ...
before that priya feels her surroundings rolling ,darkness appear infront of her ,unable to hold herrself she fainted ...rolled &fall from the steps ...
ram shocked only sees woozing blood from her head...




Edited by luvsakshi - 01 May 2012 at 9:37pm

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