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princess_sara

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Hey guyz...i m sarah...
Before i start, i made a disclaimer for my story.
have a look,i hope i am clear with my words. 


today i made my mind FINALLY To write a FF on VirMan...Wink
Well let me ask u guyz that have u ever watched Bollywood movie FORCE Starring John and Genelia
Anyways...my SS is quite similar to this movie..NOT EXACTLY ,but the character of Virat is same...
but the character of Manvi is not similar to genelia..
In case u guys didn't watched the film...
Let me give u guyz a Character sketch of the LEAD Pair of my OS.


Here we start.


Virat Singh Vadhera


Well main uske baare mein kya bolu...(drooling)LOL
Virat is a Cop...aa no no...he is ACP Virat Vadhera of Mumbai...
He works for Crime Branch with his secret gang...
He is Single,28 years old, have no Family, lives alone and he wants to live alone as he find being alone is best "Neither u will ever be hurt nor u will fall weak."
Virat has No Weakness.He is Damn strong never scared of anyone. all the Cops works under him.He controls every worst situation.
Okay that's it from virat's side...


Now lets move on to our darling
Manvi Choudary


She is beautiful,young 23 years old doing her MBA ,she lives with her divorced mama.
she is very funny,bubbly, fun loving verryy humble,girl with golden heart,
is very unhappy living with her mama,as he find her burden on him.he criticize her that she will never let him live his own life...but manvi never mind this ,
in fact she love her mama very much...
Manvi lives with er mama in Delhi.


Okay so this is manvi's character...she is same like ehmmbh manvi..only different is that she don't her her ek hazaaron mein jeevika behna...
but i'll surly get Viran-Jeevika in frame from virat's side when my story will move forward.


The title of my SS is

                                                                   Tumse Hai Zindagi...

Part 1
Introduction part.

Mumbai morning 7 a.m
We can see a Tall,tough,fully build body man by having pistol tucked on his back of jeans walking in the building of 6 levels with an inspector walking beside him.
the inspector was giving him information.
they walk in the elevator...it takes to the top level.they came out and straight away enter in to the interrogation room.
he stood there by folding hands looking with his light eyes staring on that criminal who was sweating badly and answering the one who was asking him questions.
Ins : Sir humne usse saare sawaal kerl liye ..!!!
Per yeh saala kuch nai bol raha hai !!!
Kya kare...???
Now finally we can see his face...he is non other than Our Virat Vadhera
Virat : (cold and angry voice) Maar do saale ko..!!!
As the criminal heard this..he said in begging way
Cri : Sir..sir..sir..main sab sach bolta hu...mujhe matt maaro...
(he gulped) sir...Maine kuch nai kiya...mujhe sirf uss drugs ko waha uss mall mein pahonchane ke paise mile the...main kuch rupiyo ke liya...bass wohi kiya jo un hone kaha...!!! maine kissi ka kuch nai bigada hai sir...!!! mujhe jane do..
Virat : (his angrily banged the table and said) Ek drug supply karna matlab tune ek insaan ki jaan li hai...!!!!!!! Aur tune kuch nai kiya...!!!
Cri : sir main kuch ani jaata hu sir !!!!! mujhe kuch rupiyo ki zarurat thi..toh maine unka kaam kerdiya...
Virat : DRUG SUPPLY kerke ????
Cri : Maaf kardo sirr...Dubara kabhi aisi galti nai karunga...!!!!(begging)
Virat : Crime aur meri zaati dushmani hai...Aur tujh jaise criminal ko main chod jo ?????
Naam bata !!!
Cri : (stammering) Sha...shanker...
Virat : TERA NAI...!!!
Uska naam bata jisne tumjhe paise diye drug supply kerne ke liye...!!!
Cri : Naa...naam nai maalum sir...
Virat : (immediately removed his gun and pointed towards his head) Meri Goli,Teri Khopdi (skul)
Cri L (almost crying) sir..sir...sir...main sach bol raha hu...sach bol raha hu...Mujhe usne naam nai bataya...
Virat : shakal pehchaan ta hai uski..???
Cri : Ji sir..
Virat : (ordered to the inspector standing behind him) Sketcher to bulwaker sketch ban wao !!!
Ins : Yes Sir...
Virat left the interrogation room.

Delhi 7:30 a.m
A young girl just woke up from her bed.stretching her arms and welcoming new day of her life.
she walked up to her window and let the cool breeze touch her face.
she gives her Million dollar smile seeing the sun
Girl : (she wishes to herself )Good morning Manvi...
Hmmm...!!
then she walks to her dressing table and look at her self in mirror.
she gives a flying kiss to herself.
Manvi : Finally Aaj ka aakhri exam...Aakhri semister !!!
Yesss !!! Yooohhooo
Aaj se main apni life jiyungi...
Job Karungi !!!! (Excited)
Waah manvi tu kitni badi ho gayyi hai...Job Karegi...???
Muuuahhh...love u zindagi !!!!
she quickly freshen up.
she sees her mama is sleeping in his room.
she kept his breakfast on table and left for her collage.

Well this was the introduction part of this Pair.
Right now Who are Extremely Strangers to each other,
But they are Unaware of thr Fate,Kismet,Destiny...
They have their own plans in thr mind,But God always have some other plans.
What ever happens.It happen for a Cause Be it GOOD or BAD...
God have made thr destiny to be same...Letz see how it Happens to be...

I really hope u guyz liked it...
Feel free to say anything be it Criticism or Praising OR Improvement
but i really hope it was good.


Writer : Sarah.

 

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Edited by princess_sara - 20 July 2013 at 6:45am

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
i just loved ur concept
luking forward to read more
please can u pm me wen u write next

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sounds interesting...please update soon,,

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Nice concept update soon and pm me...!!!

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
sara...aww u strt writitng Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clapso sweet and loved virat's character
great idea
keep writing and pm me next
m looking forward for more

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Hey nice os yaar.loved virat's charecter sketch.continue asap.

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good job.. continue soon Smile

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Continueee soon n pm me :) :)

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