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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 2:19pm | IP Logged

whens the next part coming * ^ Princess **??

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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
thanks so much 
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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
dk: ohh in front of maa u are inocent but u are not

disha: yay

they reach the party

dk is sitting with disha

dk: may i offer u a dance

disha: sure

they both get up

disha: dk i was thinking yayy what never mind

dk: u sure

disha: yayy

a guy comes mr dk seigal can i dance with u wife

dK : ofcourse

disha and the guy dance for an hour then dk ok enouugh he gets jealous Angry

disha: bye

guy: bye

dk and disha leave

dk: why were u saying bye why who is heAngryAngryAngry
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disha: u told him to dance with me

dk: ok jaan i am sorry please please forgive me Smile

disha:Ok stop getting emootial

they reach home

next week

sumirta: dk disha can i take the kids to disha home

disha: of course mamaji

sumirta: thanks

dk and disha are reading  there books




Edited by * ^ Princess ** - 18 May 2005 at 4:02pm
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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 3:15pm | IP Logged

THIS STORY SHOULD BE FOR OVER 18'S, SO THEREFORE YOU SHOULD NOT BE EVEN WRITING THIS STUFF (BEING ONLY 16). 

I have noticed that all your stories end up in the bedroom with them getting 'busy'.  I am sure DK and Disha's love and marriage is more than that.

Im not trying to put you off from writing, u carry on, story isn't so bad.  Don't mean to upset, take it as constructive criticism.

  

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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by eyez_on_mimi

THIS STORY SHOULD BE FOR OVER 18'S, SO THEREFORE YOU SHOULD NOT BE EVEN WRITING THIS STUFF (BEING ONLY 16). 

  

By this I meant the D's getting physical side of the story, I did NOT mean the whole story itself.

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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
i hope now u understand i have cahnged my story ok sorry if that makes u feel uncomfortable
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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
guys so i changed my story becuase  mimi didn't like it so hope u all enjoy now kk 
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Posted: 11 May 2005 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by eyez_on_mimi

Originally posted by eyez_on_mimi

THIS STORY SHOULD BE FOR , SO THEREFORE YOU SHOULD N

i changed ok

  

By this I meant the D's getting physical side of the story, I did NOT mean the whole story itself.

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