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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged

hi guys another short story from my dear friend , i know everyone is upset with on going track,just to cheer up yoy guys im posting her short story how the raya s love journey happend ,hope you all like this too ,thank you in advance ...plz do leave your good and bad comments ...


My other works of RAYA..


FF HugSirf Meri Ho ,  FF  ... Heart Ishq Heart,

FFSmile Prediction ,  SS Wink Love Journey,

OS Star Love And Life ,

OS Blushing SpecialGiftOs:Missing !!!

SS:Custody,SS:Rayape meet,Os:I Miss You,

OS:Tere Bina Mushkil Hai Jeena

A Promice To Keep



SS: Love Journey


Purple kingdom ...a boy and girl were standing in a purple school uniform ...
Sonu 7year old boy  trembling with a fear...sony 6year old girl standing with a confident in her  eyes...
priyakapoor is having their proficiency reports ,her eyebrows knotted with irritation ...
what happen to you ,how many times i should tell you to study hard ,you people wont listen to me everytime playing ,playing ...Where is the time for study hai na??On her usual motherly tone...
Today priya kapoor was not in mood to explain her kids about studies...as she was irritated as well as shell shocked after the doctors consultation followed by early in  the morning,as yet she can apprehend nehas gigling in her ears ...
sony whispered in sonu ears ,bhai don't worry papa will come than we can escape, stop whispering sony i know you are waiting for your papa,im also waiting for him we will see what he will do today ?sonu gave "what to do look "at sony as he scored, lower than her,sony explaining to sonu papa will come ,give a kish to mama,
mama cool,kids escape,daddy ko warning,he is catching her sister point meanwhile biting his nails with tension, stop biting your nails sonu .Their  mom is observing them.
Meanwhile ram enters with chocolates in his hands,he ceased by the view,thought some war is going on,hide the chocolates on his back pocket,slowly he walks to the bedroom... Kids excited ,called papa aap aagayi...sony went to hug  him ,priya stops them ,ram first ye dekiye ,tumhari pyaari bachaon ka reports,sony stopped midway looking annoyed!!! Ram checked the reports what happen priya ,they are good at their scores see they  crossed 60%...RAM 60% is good yelled priya...bittu stirred in his sleep started to cry...Priya went patting his back singing a lullaby for her 3 year old boy to sleep...Ram gave chocolates signaling them to leave the room ..sonu,sony tiptoed walking out of the room ...
Where are you going ,im not finished yet said priya, ram stops her in midway ,held her shoulders with his two arms gave a naughty wink to kids to go away embraced her in bony crush hug...
Ram please chodiye with angry tone...He tightens his grip ..She moaned with pain ..He left and made her to sit in his lap,combing her hair with his hands,planted a soft kiss on her eyes ,asked what happen to you   Why you exasperated ?Morning neha called and told me to go home urgently!! Well im busy so couldn't come,is it for kids marks ,i don't think so ,tell me ...
She paused for a moment ..He is nuzzling her neck arousing her with his acts ..Chodiye,he is not in aura to mind her..She  pushed him back with all her strength...
You already created THREE,there gonna be another and you are ...
Once he thought he over hear something asked with a fortune shock ...Priya what ..what did you say 
Ha you heard correctly , im pregnant ,slight blush appeared on her cheeks and disappeared,well she didn't plan this time how to tell ram about her pregnancy,morning when she heard from doctor she was in shock ...Ram lift her up with joy thank you thank you,what a good news ,ram please she begged him to  put her down,he made her to lie on bed kissing gently on her forehead,eyes,lips,she stopped him ram ye kya hai ?? She pestered with his action!!! RAAM did..did you lied to me that you underwent for vasectomy??? With abolish look!! He gained his senses back ...Noo i didn't lie ..I have done...Ya ..It.. It couldn't be na,called to doctor explained entire story to him...doctor told to ram there will be one failure in every 200 to 300 cases ,im very sorry that your sterilization process failed ,i warned you to come after a week but you never appeared to me the result is this,the pregnancy rate more when unprotected s** after the process of earlymonths[failure cases].. ...He hangs up the call looked at her ...
what   Its failed ??He just said its failed ?? Annoyed priya !!!
You are not young ram,you are 49yrs old and im 42 years old after sterilization withal...This is embarrassing news ram not good news...
If we are old,is there any rule not to have kids at this age ??Priya coming one is also our kid only,don't talk foolish...
Cheer up ..Let's go priya .. Dadi kush ho jayegi ye bath sunkar ... Came to his naughty mood...
Nahi RAAM ... Mai nahi ..Please wait for a couple of days i ..I .. Will tell..Her cheeks are turning to crimson red now,as everyone knows ram underwent for sterilization,they wont miss this chance to pull their leg ...
ab chaliye ram!  doctor told to come in the evening for scan reports... They are on the  way to hospital...


THREE years back...
After bittu ...She engrossed with kids chores ... sonu 4yrs,sony 3 yrs ,bittu just born ,they wont let her sleep properly with their acts ,ram has taken up a new company hardly he will get time to be in home,if he gets time the day will end up by looking after his three beautiful shaithaan kids ,sometimes she fallen asleep on the dining table or sofa before his arrival from office,however how they spend the total day, they must eat together at dinner time ,they didn't break the promise until now ,sometimes it's hard regarding her health ram told manytimes to her eat on time,she neglected as always ,after the entire hectic day sometimes she is being irritated with lots of stress and work...Soon sonu,sony started going to their kindergarten...Oneday bittu doesn't sleep properly nor allowed to priya to sleep ,ram told her to sleep he will look after bittu ,but she resisted him as he has somuch work in his office,finally bittu  fallen asleep at 6 'O clk in  the morning priya too drifted off, she woke up by an alarm sound ,its going to be 8.45 am,she briskly walked to kids room to get ready them, when she entered,
ram told her TWO projects ready to go school... She giggled by his comment , he looked soo cute at the moment,gave a soft kiss on his cheeks.
sonu,sony giggles pounced on her lap...Demanded her to give them too,sheepishly she smiled gave a softkiss to both  bid them bye ...She hugged him ...Thankyou ram.
I dozed off ,she was about to tell some thing ye kya hai priya ???Thankyou for what ?They are our kids ...She looked at him,He looked at her..
She is looking, stunning with her puppy, sleepy face..caressing her cheeks with his hand.
Priya such a tough time staying away from you  ,he embraced her in hug,closed her lips with his ...Scooped her up in his arms ,landed on the kids bed ,he is kissing her neck ,crushing her under him and bed ,her bangles broke off ,they didn't care about that , each and every touch makes her more tempting, at the summit of their s**war They heard bittu crying, she try to  push him ,stopped between seeing his pleading look at her saying 2 mins...She is in double minded wether to go or not ,suddenly the cry stopped,she gave up ,continued with him ... Her total body coloring deeper inside to out ... He is munching her lips with thrust ... This time, they heard a loud cry , she pushed him back,he let her go ,she ran away from room after all she is a mother , dadi pampering bittu trying very hard to control him ,she took bittu from her started to feed him , dadi looking at her with wonder ,as her dress was not in a way,all her hair messed up ,her wrists filled with blood by numerous small bruises ...Priya puttar what happened to your  wrists ??Nothing dadi ,than she saw the bruises ,the bangles broken soo it happened somehow she is managing not to tell  ,meanwhile he entered ,his wrists also same type of bruises,dadi asked ram ye kya hai ??Broken bangles ka kaam hai na ?? Ha dadi how you know! he asked her ? Priya hitting her head with hand ,ram realizes what he spoke out,bites his tongue ,dadi nai aise kuch nahi hai meri matlab ...dadi walked out from there with a wide grin on her face...Ram ye aap kya kahana chahiti ho ?? Im sorry priya achanak se ... After that they hardly met sometimes in a month in a hurry burry mode, in that big kapoor mansion they don't have a free space to meet alone ..If they two are free ,suddenly some work pileup for him or  5days festival for her or kids wants to sleep with them ..Sometimes they two waited to finish their chores as soon as possible ..However at the end of the day ended upby sleeping peacefully in each otherarms...He was too busy with the new project and she was too busy with social ,family life...Sleeping together is a secured feeling for them ,it means a lot to them , they admitted the fact of parenthood and familylife,they want to change this life as romantic too...It was very promising days when they first  consummated in this late age ,they both promised eachother now onwards atleast once a day we should fulfill our desire of all these lonely years ,whenever she said those three magical words[i love you ] to him , he will regain his energy back , she looked so pretty to him,as he looked so cute to her,

bittu 2nd birthday party , as always he was late for that day too , all are waiting for him to cut the cake,he is looking around for his special person..bittu in a deep slumber,so priya went to wake him up,walked to the center with bittu,she is looking radiant in her red saree with  simple jewellery around her neck along with mangalsutra ,he intently looking at her with jaws dropped,she signaled threw her eyes what happened? He walked towards her, very near her ,he set her bindi on center ,said now its perfect priyakapoor.. He lost in her flawless beauty in a trance he planted a feathery kiss on her lips said...
 I love you ,he dismissed the fact they surrounded by bunch of relatives&guests...All shouted ow aww oww...Came back to his senses...Addressed her ..
I wonder how you manages all this party alone ,thankyou very much for my beautiful wife,he actually wants to  divert the topic from them however he  failed to do that...
The couple looked lovely amongst friends &guests to perfect for all...Throw out the party both are stealing glances at eachother with a passion of love like a newly wedded couple ,they are close thus missing eachother's company,he is creating somework to talk with her want to be with her in the party,

she has to look after everything about the party and the guests , the kids are not allowing him to go anywhere ,she felt bad seeing him in this way ,except the family members  everyone left wishing bittu once more,she wants to send sms to ram,asalways sonu playing with it,she dropped the idea , sent a slip to ram with bansikaka,when he opened  "come to our room,its urgent  " priya...He tiptoed from there entered into room ,he looked back with a sudden shutting of the door,obviously priya did that she hugged him with the same passion as years before ,he is looking at her longingly ,please don't make me fool infront of everyone ram,im mad about you ,today hardly i control myself ,now i ..I..Cant control my feelings ,lift herself up ardently kissing him on his lips ,exactly he feels the same ,he held her firmly returning back her favor Minutes melting to an hour ,there is a knock on the door,he wants to open,she pulled him back to her, he was on top of her ,she is ready for next set of war ,knock..Knock.. She tightens her grip around him with her two legs on his back,he gave up ,they started to swim in the ocean of  love ,after the math of their wild love making...She exhausted and drifted off to sleep on his broad chest ...Patting her head with his lanky fingers...There is knocking ,he called out priya ..Priya ..
Knock again...He adjusted the comforter around her ..This time there is banging on the door ...He hurriedly opened the door.

Dadi,rishab our kids were waiting outside to show something ,kids squealed papa ...Seeing him with wonder ,you played with mom right!!,dadi and rishab are laughing their guts out...
Are chal kya bath hai,why you are laughing at me, bhai where are you ? I was in washroom ,came in  hurry as u people are banging the door, achha bhai ...Ayesha,ipshika,shipra gathered there ...Started giggling,ram gave a puzzled look at them shut the door on their faces,went back to check him on the mirror ,
his eyes popped out for a sec,crushed with an embarrassment  ...He wrapped priya's saree instead of a towel for his waist ,her Vermillion made mark on his chest ,scratches  all over his body...He looked at priya, she cuddled like a baby and sleeping peacefully .Asusual  he failed her plan again.. How she feels if she come to know this ...He changed into kurta ,ready for facing their family..Slowly  he walks down ,everyone was silent ,when he enters all burst out laughing...He looked mortified...sonu,sony ...Papa ..Why you didn't call us to play with you ,again all laughed at the question,rishab rolling on floor laughing out loud, sonu,sony gave a confusion look at ram??
He don't know how to handle this situation,everytime priya helped out this kind of problems,scratching his head ...He changed the topic ..Do you like my gifts he asked them , bittu crawled near ram trying to climb on him,he lifted bittu gave a subtle kiss on his cheek ,hugged ,showed what he has bought for them...Kids excited ,discussing with his papa about their gifts asking random silly questions about the party ,patiently he is answering to them and observing all family members ...
Nextday morning ...Priya awoke from her sleep ,she checked the time its 8 .00 am in the morning ,she satisfied physically,mentally had a nice sleep after many days Ram came with a coffee tray ,telling her good morning ,she stretched her hands to him for a hug,he hugged her ...She took a sip of coffee,nauseatic ,ran to washroom,puked out everything,felt better ,he asked what happened priya ? Nothing just stomach upset..
On the dining table, everyone  gigling behind her , when she looked at them ,they are behaving as everything is normal, she waited for sometime,
pulled rishab's ear to tell what happened?? Aww bhabhi ! Paining ..Leave my poor ear ,please,
no tell me first why your giggling?He about to tell,swiftly she dashed to washbasin ,puked out again, slight darkness surrounded her, rishab catch hold of her ,made her to sit on the sofa ,bhabhi aap tik tho hai na? Ha rishab im ok , just stomach upset ,  ye stomach upset nahi hai bhabhi?controlling his laugh,she gave a puzzled look at him,
I think you are pregnant ...Everyone shocked to hear this !! She shivered head to toe,what you are talking rishab? he handed a cover to her and laughing out loudly,she took that with trembling hands ,when she opened it ,embarrassed almost she fainted to see those ,literally she hold herself ,ran from there without a second thought,ended up by dashing ram in their room, all the photos dropped down, she asked what ..what happened ram,why you were like this??
Who gave this to you ,rishab na i will kill that brat today ,
ram chodiye na ,im not understanding ,why you draped my saree,and YOU  you went in this avatar to open the door,

priya when they knocked the door, i thought of misguiding them that i was in washroom ,and want to wrap a towel mistakenly i wrapped your saree caught by those...I just wrapped not draped ok,
he is giving explanation to her as student is accepting his mischief infront of teacher,her lips curled to a smile
,
rishab enters ...Bhai goodnews hai!Bhabhi pregnant hai ,she caught a pillow and running after rishab to beat him, she is not at all feeling well ,again she puked out,came from the washroom looked pale ,dull,she tried to hold the wall but lost her consciousness...He tensed ,priya what happen? Lifted her in his arms,asked rishab to take the car out ,rushed to hospital,doctor checks priya,told to ram ,she is suffering with severe anemia,i think she is asymptomatic,good that you brought her hear on time,we need to transfer two units of blood,vomiting's are due to indigestion, rishab came asking the doctor is my bhabhi is pregnant ?Ram gave a murdering look to rishab,doctor said no she is not ,she is very feeble you have to take good care of her ..doctor will she be fine after the treatment, don't worry ram,she will be fine ,ram sat besides her ,held her hand waiting her to open her eyes, the nurses are arranging for blood transfusion, he is very scared to see those, he asked the nurse is there any otherway to transfuse ,no sir it is the only way , she infused cannula into her vein, he screamed thinking of her pain , nurse petrified looked at him with wonder,sir please you wait outside ,i will call you later,he nodded his head in denial mode,as he lost his words seeing priya in this condition ,seeing his teary eyes ,worried face nurse didn't force him, arranged everything ,left the room ,after sometime she gain her conscious back,intently he is looking at her eyes ,priya how are you feeling now, im ok ram,just mild headche.he asked her is this paining ,she said no, thats ok.
Im i pregnant ram ,No you are not pregnant just anaemic,how are the kids ram,did they came from school,you dont worry for anything take rest.
kids came from school to home,asking about their parents, dadi told them she is in hospital will be back soon,trying to console them,
but they are sobbing,yelling,screaming out for their parents,sonu,sony called to ram,crying out hard in the phone, papa ,mommy ko kya hua?
His heart leaps into pieces by hearing them,he asked  rishab to bring them to hospital,priya weary from all the process fallen asleep,bittu crying copiously since 1 hour, when he saw his mom,he relaxed,clutched her hand tightly ,dozed off to sleep beside her...
sonu,sony calls her ,mama,mama... Priya heard them but clumsy to open her eyes or to talk,
ram hugged both the kids,mom having bad fever,doctor gave somany injections,soo she tired and slept,
papa when she will talk with us?? She will woke up in the night kids,sure to talk with you ,don't play with her today ok ,she has to take rest...
hmm nodded their heads as approval, both sat on her bed each side looking at her to wake up ?..Ram served dinner to them ,both denied it ,
he pleaded them to eat ,pampered them, telling stories but they didn't touch one spoon also .Ready to cry as their mother doesn't speak a word with them on that day !!!
Ram was very worried about their condition ,he is feeling to cry out loud,afterall they are kids how they felt seeing her mom in  this condition,bittu started his loud cry with hungry,priya startled open her eyes ,found bittu under her arm ,ardently  touching him,sonu,sony hurriedly climbed up to her bed ,hugged her tightly, tears rolled out from her eyes  ,she felt as she is seeing them after many days gap,ram looked at them lovingly they are explaining what they did in their school,she indeed looks like a child to him,he feed them while chatting with her ,he went to make a call,returned after 30mins,

 they dozed off to sleep one on her lap ,one on her shoulder, one on her legs...she is looking them with all her love ,perfect picture of his family, he arranged them in other bed,she asked him to sit with her ,she leaned on his shoulder,ram im scared!! if incase something happen to me ,priyaa!! he closed her mouth not to talk such things ,
ram let me finish , i cant leave you and kids ,i i.. wish .. sobbing hardly ...he embraced her in a bear hug, nothing will happen to you my dear , im there with you ,don't be scared ,  it will be alright in a week now just close your eyes and go to sleep,
in this week she saw anther side of her husband ,she thanked every god for chosen ram as her beloved husband, after a week she discharged, return back to home, she is back in her purple kingdom,she opened her diary,started writing,
he pampered me like a baby all these days, all these years she saw his love,affection,anger,anxiety,boldness,frustration,pride,shyness ,satisfaction,shame  ...
but in this 7 days including those she saw his apathy,depression,fear,grief,patience ...EVERYTHING was for her ,about her, regarding her , the feel touched her heart,she is very proud to having ram as her husband,the unwanted marriage became that appropriate marriage for her and ram...
the very first days of their marriage  how they hate eachother,had a lot time to talk but no words or topics &now how they love eachother,no sufficient time to talk but eyes can speak lakhs make wonders between them.how they chided eachother,how he proposed her ,everything has completely changed after marriage ...
she dozed off in between...ram came saw priya sleeping in awkward position,he set her in the bed, the diary fell down from her hands,he wants to keep back,stopped to see his name ...after reading her diary a wide grin appeared on his face ...
after this incident he consulted a doctor for permanent sterilization,he don't want to take an opportunity to contemplate  priya's health condition ,so he underwent for sterilization process..
5months back...
Its 10th day after his surgery ...sonu,sony are going for a trip with sudhirs family ,bittu also wants to go with his siblings ,priya doesn't let him go as he don't let any one to feed him,natasha promised priya that he will take care of bittu ,allow him with us,she gave up as bittu good with nutz and agreed ...

all left for trip except bansikaka,she send him for two days leave,she prepared launch for both,went to take bath ,ram enters found none ,searching in their bedroom,
worried where bittu has gone,priya doesn't know ram has came from office,she came from washroom a towel wrapped around her ,standing infront of closet ,searching for rams favorite saree,he stunned to look at her with his jaws dropped ,she is all wet ,admiring her beauty,patted her shoulder with his fingers,
 her grip on towel loosen to scream aloud,the towel dribbled from her body,he closed her mouth with his hand,goosebumps covered all over her body,
he never see her thisway in the morning times ,he is longingly looking at his bewitching beautiful wife ,she is blushing profusely,she wants to hide herself with something,she turned to take any of her dress,he resisted her not to ,he embrace her in a tight hug,kissing her collarbone ,wiping of water droplets from her body with his lips,feels her soft slender shoulders,she shivered like a leaf,she is trying hardly to free from his grip,he refusing to let her go ,her slender body racing with arousal,she felt too shy to face him,he asked her bunch of times make love on mornings but she refused it always,today he is not going to leave this chance,he forgot the world around him,he pulled her into hug,landed on the bed she is on top of him,he is planting innumerous kisses on her every inch of part,she closed her eyes tightly as engulfing his acts completely , he slowly slid his lips from her neck to downcast. his grip on her hips was clasped more securely,the room filled with her deep sighs and his assaults,
she murmured "i love you ram" please take me, iam all yours, im madly missing you ram.
"i love you too priya"  its been such a long time i have you in my hands to bind with me,they sharing the treasure of love with an ardent intimacy,he is touching her ecliptics and slits,resulting deep moans from her ,he almost crushing her in his endeavor hug,she is melting completely with his touch,the more he does the more she blushes,she was the mother of his 3 kids,but her profuse blushing made him everytime he is new to her as first time ,after the Enervate of lovemaking, her total body turned up to brilliant shade of pink,her head rested on his chest ,his hands on her ,they snoozed off to sleep in eachother arms...
she awakened by hunger pains ..found ram sitting next to her looking at her intently...a blush appeared on her cheeks ,covered herself with the comforter ,told him that she was hungry ,small smile curved on his lips seeing her ,he knows verywell that she will be craving,both feed eachother ,ram asked her wether she can pause her classes in the afternoon times,she said im not having classes in the afternoons ram,these days im just taking few hour classes,why ram ?? will tell you when time comes!!!

three days he didn't let her go from him ,day and night ,top to bottom,the room filled with their love noises,her moans,his gasps their nok jhoks,,teasings ...
all returned back from trip,the next day, he returned home  for launch ,priya is sleeping beside bittu ,she awaken by his gently kiss on her forehead,her pallu dropped while getting up ,he pinned her to the wall,ram what you are doing ,my job priya...he tored her blouse while ardent lovemaking ,he told her this is the good time for us ,i can own my wife for sometime,both giggled ,after this they never ever saw a day away from eachother...



PRESENT..

they reached hospital ,he came out from his past thoughts,how beautiful it is, priya is sleeping on his shoulder ..
both  are infront of  gynecologist,already priya told to doctor they were under birthcontrol explained the whole story ...
she checked her scan report , looking at them with astound...
he tensed a bit,asked doctor is there anything wrong with priya's reports ...
No Mr.Ramkapoor  it just like miracle ...priya is carrying twins ...
both looked eachother with thunder shock mixed with full of joy ..they were just speechless by the fact ...
doctor broke the silence ...don't panic Mrs. Kapoor ,everything will be alright ,you are perfectly fine,
sometimes failures will happen in our life..your desire makes all this...
they drove back to kapoor mansion,he was very happy ..he is going have twin babies in his hand...that thought itself amazing for him...
priya literally shaken up by the news ,she is happy ,somewhere she scared about the delivery ...reminding all her gooddays with ram and 3 kids...
he understood her  feelings...he entwined her fingers with his ,i will be  there with you always,noone will separate us ..
everything happens for good ...all is well..she smiled at him...what names you thought about them ram? munna and munni ..how are they priya? very cute ram..
sonu,sony ran near them ,pounced on them,bittu settled in rams lap,he kept his hand on her stomach to feel of his twin babies[munna & munni].A perfect family picture.
the love life will forever between a husband and wife bonding with kids...

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Edited by luvsakshi - 19 January 2013 at 3:08pm

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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Wow!! This is so perfect. Raya having 3 kids and 2 more to come. Lovely ss. Thanku LUVSAKSHI for posting it here. And a big hug to u and GIRIJA DII :-) By the way what 's ur real name.

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very nice update IPL-10 ko tayyari chal rahe hai kya ? one more team in IPL 10 Kapoor tigers . ha ha ha, please continue soon, waiting 4 next update


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will read and commentSmile

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Just finished reading it!!..wow!!!..this is such a wonderful story..i loved itEmbarrassed
thank u sooo much for thisHug..this story has everything in it..it is sweet, sometimes funny, emotional..and full of RaYa mgic!!EmbarrassedBig smile..in one word this is just PERFECT!!!
u r very talented..keep writing more..


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So nice...Ra Ya having three kids...Day DreamingEmbarrassedBlushing really a good story  sister...nice imagination too...hats off...ClapClap

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agar tum aise hi write karoo gi then istop watching show only read ur ss or os really WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink iu dont have any idea how much time i read ur ss or os love a lotClapClapClap

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This is an awesome story. Twins is like icing on cake. Even in the real show I want RaYa to have twins. A baby girl and a baby boy

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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SWEETETIKA

Wow!! This is so perfect. Raya having 3 kids and 2 more to come. Lovely ss. Thanku LUVSAKSHI for posting it here. And a big hug to u and GIRIJA DII :-) By the way what 's ur real name.


hey ...woww you know my friend ..great to hear ..
im neeljubine but you can call me neel ...

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