Virman OS- BETRAYAL - Page 3

Hey.. loved it.. its different from your other works.. But just as good.. Thanks for the Pm..

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

Thanks for writing this for me..😃 You know I thought it would be a really dark OS.('betrayal' annd everything)..but gosh you surprised me..😆 It was totally 🤣 what Maanvi did..I was surprised by her behaviour in the beginning..but then I realized just as Virat (unfortunately) did what she was really aiming for..😉 I've been on a naughty OS reading spree whole week and yours was the cherry on top of the cake.😆😉

Also, I've realized you're better at the hot scenes than I am...😉😉

 

Want to read one more funny one from you..😃

HAHA, I guess it is a dark title. At first I'd thought of Adjustments, my working title was Adjustments/Betrayal, but the way it ultimately came out, I thought Betrayal is more appropriate.

its awsm...very well written

mindblowing

wow that was something...i surely do not have any problem reading ahemly ahem things..viru baba being tortured like anything😆...and please do write more like this... Edited by -alisha- - 12 years ago

Amazing..!

Wow!!!! Beautiful one dear

hahah loved it!! it was awesome! you should write more mature content stuff ur pretty good at it! 😉

wooow, i loved this!
its so intense!! <3

Hey it was nice.continue soon.n plz cld u add me tour pm list??