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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
Hey Friends,
My Name is Alisha.hope some of them remember me :P I am an Old IF Member Frm Kis Desh Forum :D...
I habn't Written much of FF's So today while staying bored at home.. I juss decided to write something.
So here Is The Promo or trailer Or Whatelse u guys call it.. Its Just a 2 paragraph Thing. If U guys Like it.. I will continue With My Story and if not. I will Ask MOD to close it.. Fair Enough? :LOLLOL  


Ok so Here It is 

                                   Pyaar Ki Ek Kahani

"Pyaar" Woh Dhai Akshar Ka Sabdh, Woh Sabdh Jiska Pehela Akshar hi Adhoora Ho Woh Kisi Ki Zindagi Mein Kaisi Puri Ho Sakti Hain. Jitni Kosis Karlo Lekin Kabhi Kabhi Ye Pyaar Hi Aapki Zindagi Tabah Kar Deti Hain.

Ushi Tarha Yeh kahan  Pyaar Karne Waalon Ki Hain.. Yeh Kahani Un Do Prem Panchi Ki Hain Jo Apna Pyaar Pura Hote Hote Chodkar Chale Gaye. Yeh Kahani Un Dono Ki Hain. Zinki Kahani ek Alag Ki Tarha Se Suru Hui Aur Alag Hi tarha Se Khatam Bhi Hui. Yeh Kahani Hain Prem AUr Heer ki... Prem Aur Heer Pyaar K Do Panchi...


... to be continued (if you guys liked it) :D


Edited by alisha_harshad - 24 April 2012 at 10:11pm

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Hey! hi alisha! great to have you back in kid desh forum!
and its really awesome that u have started writing an ff!
and anything related to premeer i m in!
so.. i would love to read your work! do add me to your pm list!
and please dont seperate premeer please!!LOL
i know you have not even started .. but in advance.

take care hope to see an update soon!

love
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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 3:00am | IP Logged
its sounds intrstng
pls cont soon
nd do add me in ur pm list

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
let me come out of my shock thn i'll comment

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hi!! would love to read more...

do continue soon...

and do add me to ur pm list...

take care

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 10:09pm | IP Logged

Madhvi( Heer's Sister): Heer chal market jana hain na.. Jaldi aaja Neeche..!!

 

Aayi Jiji !!  Ek awaaz jo sab ko geet jaisi madhoor lagti thi.. Ek awaaz jiski Khilki Lagat se sara ghar Mehek uthta tha.. Who awaaz thi heer Ki.. Heer !! Kapoor Khandan Ki Sabse Choti Beti. Seher Ki Sabse Amir Pariwaar Ki Sabse Ladli Beti Heer.

Agayi jiji chalo ab chale. Sorry thoda late hogayi.

Madhvi: Koi Baat Nahi Choti. Lekin tujhe aaj achanak kaise market jaane ka dil kyu huwa.

Heer: Woh kyaa hain.. waise toh main ghar bethe bethe bore hojaati hoon.. Chutti hain' main bhi toh yaha waha kar sakti hoon na.. Kab tak ghar bethi rahoon.

Madhvi: Chal Phir.

 

At the market'''.

Heer aur Madhvi  Ek Dukaan Mein Choodiya Dekh rahi thi ' Achanak Heer Ne Kaha,

 

"Madhvi Jiji.. Aap Yehi rukna Main Abhi Aayi"

Madhvi : Kahan Jaa Rahi Hain CHoti?

Heer: Mujhe Meri Ek Saheli Dekh gayi Jiji.. Main Abhi Use Hi Bolke Aayi.

Madhvi: Achcha Thik Hain. Lekin Jaldi Aana'

 

Heer Apni Madhvi Jiji Se Jhoot Bol Kar Gayi Thi.. Who Kisi Saheli Se Milne Nahi Balki Prem Se Milne K Liye Gayi Thi.

 

3 hours ago

 

Heer Abhi abhi jagi thi aur usna phone bajne laga' Phone pe Naam Tha Prem Ka' Prem Heer ka College Ka Dost Tha' Balki Uska Sabse Achcha Dost tha.. Yaa Dost Se Jyaada Tha'

 

Prem: Heer Kyaa Kar Rahi Ho?

Heer: Abhi Abhi Jagi Hoon Prem.. Kyaa Baat Hain?

Prem: Bahot Din Hogaye Tumse Mile Huwe.. tumhe dekhne ka bahot dil kar raha tha isliye Call Kiya.

Heer: Dil toh mera bhi kar raha hain prem.. lekin tumhe toh pata hi hain na mere ghar waale mujhe akele kahi jaane nahi dete.

Prem: Koi Bahana Karke Aao Na Mujhse Milne.

 Heer Kuch Soch Rahi thi Usi Samay " Heer Chal Market Jana Hain.. Jaldi Aaja Neeche"

Heer: Idea.. Main jiji Ke Saath Market jaa rahi Hoon.. Tum wahi pe Aajana Aur Mein Kisi Bahane Se Tumhare paas Aajaungi. Thik hain?

Prem: Thik Hain.. Main Tumhara Intezaar Karunga.

Heer: thik Hain Bye Prem.

Prem: Bye Heer.

Back At the market

 

Heer mandir Ki Taraf Jaa rahi thi Jahan usne Prem ko Dekha Tha.. . Mandir Main Jaa Kar Sab se Pehele Usne Bhagwaan Se Apni JiJi Se Jhoot bolne k Liye Maafi Maangi.. Phir prem Ko Awaaz dene Lagi'

 

Heer: Prem .. Kaha Ho tum.. Yehi toh Dekha tha Meine tum ko Ab Kidhar Chale gaye?

Prem: Main Yaha Hoon Heer' (Uske Haatho mein Gulab K Phool the. Jo Heer Ko Bahot Pasand The)  Yeh Humhare Liye.

Heer: Thank you . Prem.. Bahot Din Hogaye Na tumse Mile huye.. Chutti k Baad Toh Mile hi Nahi Hum.

Prem: Wohi Toh  .. Tumse Mujhe Kuch Baat Kehni Thi.. Maine Kitni Kosish Ki Tumhe Call Karne ki Lekin Himmat Hi Nahi Juta Paaya.. Lekin Aaj Maine Thanli K Main tumse Sab Kuch Keh Doonga.

Heer : yesi Kyaa Baat hain Prem.Jiske liye tumhe Himmat Chahiye?

 

Heer Ko pata Tha ki Prem Usse Kyaa Baat karna chahata tha lekin anjaan bani hui thi. Use Pata Tha Ki Prem Usse Utna Hi Pyaar Karta Hain Jitna Ki Who Prem Se.. Isiliye Toh woh apne jiji se jhoot bolkar aayi thi sirf usse milne.

 

Haan Bolo Prem Kyaa Baat hain?

 

Prem: Woh Heer' Main.. Main' Tum'

 

Heer.. Heer.. ek awaaz ne Prem ko Apni baat puri karne se rok diya.. Kiski Thi who awaaz .. Heer aur Prem dono idhaar udhaar dekhne lage'  Jab Mudhke Peechey Dekha toh'.

''. To be continued'..

 

 



Edited by alisha_harshad - 24 April 2012 at 10:10pm

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 12:48am | IP Logged
loved the fisrt chapter!!
 
continue soon and can u plz add me 2 ur pm list

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 1:19am | IP Logged
first chapter was really nice
hmmm prem heer both r vry gud frndsEmbarrassed sounds intrstng...
pls cont soon
nd pls do pm me nxt tym

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